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Poem about Piya's current state of mind (Page 4)

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:07am | IP Logged
vry nice poem.........
*hats off*

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Praying to god for sanity,
Fighting wildly against my conscience,

But again being a fool to think about you in entirety,

Why do I love you so badly,

Why do I want you, so badly...

You have brought out Piya's emotional frustration and yearning for Abhay beautifully in there. These lines are my favourite. Please do write more on Piya and Abhay as well. 

Love and luck always,Heart
GOD bless you.Hug

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Kanky-

Why do I love you so badly? --- Deep! Stern Smile

Okay, hey! Thanks for the PM, I just read something very beautiful. And well, do go through the poem, there are some errors here and there. Embarrassed

I think I quite understand this, when people you know, love without concrete reasons. Its insane and ultimately one does write what they feel, so umm - to voice your thoughts is good and sharing it with people is even better! I hope you're outta the agony and everything now, too bad!

A very finely written poem this, keep up the good work!


-Kankshita



Kanky!! Hug
How are you??

Well,Thanks a lot dear...m glad that u liked and appreciated it Embarrassed

Writing makes me feel much better..if it weren't for poems or writing,
I dunno what would I had done,I guess it helps me to be sane...

Thanks again Kanky!! Embarrassed

Mugdha

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Abhilasha_Yadav

OH MY GOD...WAT A POEM...VRY NYC YAAR....THOUGH IT DEFINES MY SITUATION ALSO BT D DIFFERENCE IS NLY THT DIS GUY DOES NT HURT ME....


Thanks Abhilasha!Smile
Well, its the feeling of desiring or wanting someone real bad,that hurts...


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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pocahontas

Praying to god for sanity,
Fighting wildly against my conscience,

But again being a fool to think about you in entirety,

Why do I love you so badly,

Why do I want you, so badly...

You have brought out Piya's emotional frustration and yearning for Abhay beautifully in there. These lines are my favourite. Please do write more on Piya and Abhay as well. 

Love and luck always,Heart
GOD bless you.Hug


Hey Pocahontas,

Thanks a ton for liking my poem!!!Embarrassed
Well,as I said earlier it was something I went through at some point of time,
And outta frustration and agony, scribbled a few lines on paper,
and there it was,my poem...

Sometimes M amazed at the power of emotions,
Can resurrect or destroy someone completely...

On another note, I totally love your Daily Take on PKYEK Star
Since I've joined this forum, Its the first thing that I look for after the 8:30pm PKYEK ends,

Love your Style and manner of writing,your language...totally genuine and funny too!!
And your FF's are just too mindblowing...
Do continue writing such awesome piece of work,
Very few people have the gift of writing brilliantly,

Thanks Again,

Mugdha


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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 5:27am | IP Logged
mindblowing

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 5:28am | IP Logged
@Viviann, Shaggyscobby, Ruby, Melissa, Chillout, Anu, Chakku,
Kaheela, Sim, Babyangel, Taibaa, Matwamango, Sibgha, Kanky,
Akanksha, Fari, Kritz, Shruthi, Mayadika, Sugaryanu, Pocahontas, Aisho

Thank you so much all of you Hug



Mugdha

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutemug

Originally posted by -Kanky-

Why do I love you so badly? --- Deep! Stern Smile

Okay, hey! Thanks for the PM, I just read something very beautiful. And well, do go through the poem, there are some errors here and there. Embarrassed

I think I quite understand this, when people you know, love without concrete reasons. Its insane and ultimately one does write what they feel, so umm - to voice your thoughts is good and sharing it with people is even better! I hope you're outta the agony and everything now, too bad!

A very finely written poem this, keep up the good work!


-Kankshita



Kanky!! Hug
How are you??
Depends, am good now - I might not be the next instant. How are you? LOL

Well,Thanks a lot dear...m glad that u liked and appreciated it Embarrassed

Writing makes me feel much better..if it weren't for poems or writing,
I dunno what would I had done,I guess it helps me to be sane...

Thanks again Kanky!! Embarrassed

Anytime, M! And well, writing does help without a doubt. Sometimes in managing such stuff too. I get that.  =)



Mugdha

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