Poem about Piya's current state of mind - Page 3

I'm speechless....this is so beautiful👏👏👏

vry nice poem.........

Praying to god for sanity,
Fighting wildly against my conscience,

But again being a fool to think about you in entirety,

Why do I love you so badly,

Why do I want you, so badly...

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

Why do I love you so badly? --- Deep! 😳

Okay, hey! Thanks for the PM, I just read something very beautiful. And well, do go through the poem, there are some errors here and there. 😳

I think I quite understand this, when people you know, love without concrete reasons. Its insane and ultimately one does write what they feel, so umm - to voice your thoughts is good and sharing it with people is even better! I hope you're outta the agony and everything now, too bad!

A very finely written poem this, keep up the good work!

-Kankshita

Kanky!! 🤗
How are you??

Well,Thanks a lot dear...m glad that u liked and appreciated it 😳

Writing makes me feel much better..if it weren't for poems or writing,
I dunno what would I had done,I guess it helps me to be sane...

Thanks again Kanky!! 😳

Mugdha

Originally posted by: Abhilasha_Yadav

OH MY GOD...WAT A POEM...VRY NYC YAAR....THOUGH IT DEFINES MY SITUATION ALSO BT D DIFFERENCE IS NLY THT DIS GUY DOES NT HURT ME....

Thanks Abhilasha!😊
Well, its the feeling of desiring or wanting someone real bad,that hurts...

Originally posted by: Pocahontas

Praying to god for sanity,
Fighting wildly against my conscience,

But again being a fool to think about you in entirety,

Why do I love you so badly,

Why do I want you, so badly...

You have brought out Piya's emotional frustration and yearning for Abhay beautifully in there. These lines are my favourite. Please do write more on Piya and Abhay as well. 

Love and luck always,❤️

GOD bless you.🤗

Hey Pocahontas,

Thanks a ton for liking my poem!!!😳
Well,as I said earlier it was something I went through at some point of time,
And outta frustration and agony, scribbled a few lines on paper,
and there it was,my poem...

Sometimes M amazed at the power of emotions,
Can resurrect or destroy someone completely...

On another note, I totally love your Daily Take on PKYEK ⭐️
Since I've joined this forum, Its the first thing that I look for after the 8:30pm PKYEK ends,

Love your Style and manner of writing,your language...totally genuine and funny too!!
And your FF's are just too mindblowing...
Do continue writing such awesome piece of work,
Very few people have the gift of writing brilliantly,

Thanks Again,

Mugdha

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Thank you so much all of you 🤗


Mugdha

Originally posted by: cutemug

Kanky!! 🤗
How are you??
Depends, am good now - I might not be the next instant. How are you? 😆

Well,Thanks a lot dear...m glad that u liked and appreciated it 😳

Writing makes me feel much better..if it weren't for poems or writing,
I dunno what would I had done,I guess it helps me to be sane...

Thanks again Kanky!! 😳

Anytime, M! And well, writing does help without a doubt. Sometimes in managing such stuff too. I get that.  =)


Mugdha

awesome one! so perfect...hope to see more from you:)....poor Piya...abhay is driving her insane:(

Originally posted by: HeartEdward

awesome one! so perfect...hope to see more from you:)....poor Piya...abhay is driving her insane:(

Thanks a lot...😊
@bold: ...and vice versa 😉