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Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani

Poem about Piya's current state of mind

cutemug Senior Member
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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Hey guys,

Had written a poem earlier, due to my own personal reasons,

But as I read it again after a while, it coincidentally matched Piya's situation!
Her state of mind, desperation as we saw in yesterday's episode...

Thought I'd share it with you all,

Please have a look,
Feel free to criticize,
and would be really glad to receive your feedback Smile

Cheers,

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Why?

Why do I want you so badly,
Hurting me real and cruel,

The slightest window of hope,
A gentle breeze whispering your name,
A shadowy figure making me believe your presence,

Disappearing all of a sudden in the mist,
Making the night even more colder and barren,

Every situation begins and ends with you...

Like a roller coaster I am,
Riding wildly up and down,
Through excitement,despair and undying longing,

Swerving left and right,
Through tingling sensations of happiness,
and drowning in the dark desperation,

Again and again and again...

This one-sided gamble too dangerous too handle,
Making me want peace from the heart twisting desire,

Praying to god for sanity,
Fighting wildly against my conscience,

But again being a fool to think about you in entirety,

Why do I love you so badly,

Why do I want you, so badly...




Heart
Mugdha



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Edited by cutemug - 02 January 2011 at 5:27am

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 2:45am | IP Logged
AWESOME POEM. U have done a fantastic work.The best line is"Why do i love u so badly".What a nice line which describes Piya's mind totally. Carry on dear. U will rock.








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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 3:08am | IP Logged
@sdoll: Thank u so much!!

But 27 views and only 1 reply Ouch
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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 3:15am | IP Logged
ahhh
 
Why do I love you so badly,

Why do I want you, so badly...



*sigh*
Beautiful poem dear....suits perfectly for our darling Piya....'every situation begins and ends with you' so true!....
 
keep it up:)
 
 

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 3:46am | IP Logged
It fits piyas situation perfectly
The turmoil and desperation is clear
Fantastic poem

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 3:48am | IP Logged
OMG mug, So perfect poem.. I just love it, Keep it up ;)

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 3:52am | IP Logged
perfect poem good workThumbs Up

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Clap
Your creative!! Big smile
awesome poem! Embarrassed

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