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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Hello Friends.
I know that i cannot write but just a random thought came into my mind and i thought to put it down
I know that it is not at all good but i tried my level best..
Hope you all like it too
 
MayUr OS

Mayank came home exhausted……His 6 year old little princess, Neha came running to him and started dancing "yeah papa aa gaye ab hum sab garden jaayenge…yeah,yeah….she was waiting for his dad to pick her up in his arms but instead he just walked inside

She too followed him asking him "bolo naa papa hum jaayenge naa"

Mayank was too tired but it never happened that he ignored his princess. But since last 15 days he was very different. He never brought his work tensions and frustrations to home but something was surely disturbing him since past few days which did not go unnoticed by nupur and Shilpa maa.

Neha kept going on and on until Mayank lost his patience and shouted "Kya hai cant you see I am tired…Hum garden kal challenge" But soon he realised that he has just frientend her…Tears welled up in her eyes and she ran to her mom. He was feeling terrible and guilty. He went up to his room

Neha: Mama papa ne mujhe data

Nupur : Beta, papa thak gaye hai. Hum aisa karte hai ki garden Kal Chalenge. But mama you promised

Shilpa: Theek hai beta hum dono chalet hai aur phir kal hum sab saath mein challenge..Dekho tumhe toh do do din garden jaane milega. Kaisa laga idea.

Neha: Bahut achcha. She just became happy about it.

Shilpa picked neha in her arms and turned towards nupur and said " usse baat karke dekho. Kuch toh hai jo usse pareshan kar raha hai"

Nupur: Haan maa, Ab toh baat karni hi padegi.

Shilpa and Neha went to garden and Nupur made Tea and took it to their room

 

Mayank was on bed without even changing his clothes. This was very unlike mayank but she knew that something was bothering him.

She just sat beside him and said yeh lo chai pee lo.

Mayank shifted his head in her lap and his eyes were closed.

M: Neha kaha hai? Bahut ro rahi thi kya?

N: Maa use garden mein le gayi hai.

M: hmmm…Ok.

N: Mayank baat karma chahte ho?

He kept quite. She just kept ruffling his hairs. She knew that he would open up and she waited for him to speak up.

After few moments of silence finally he spoke

M: Nupur, Kya Suhani ko Adhiraj ke saath itna kush dekhkar tumhe kabhi aisa nahi lagta ke achcha hota agar tum adhiraj se shaadi kar leti?

Nupur was so shocked at this question and was totally unaware of what is going on in his mind.

M: Mai tumhe kuch nahi de paaya hai naa?

N : Mayank yeh tum kya keh rahe ho aur yeh achanak tumhe kya ho gaya hai ?

M : Agar mai tumhe yeh kahoon ki maine Samrat aur Adhiraaj  ke saath kuch bura kiya hai toh ?

N : (She was now hell Tensed of what he was going to tell her) Mayank, Please mujhe theek se baatoge ke tum Kis baare mein baat kar rahe ho.,,Mujhe Kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai

M: Yaad hai thode din pehle hum shopping par gaye the aur tumhe ek Diamond ring pasand aayi thi…aur jab maine tumse pucha toh tumne kaha ki abhi- abhi maa ke hospital ka kharcha hua hai aur neha ki bhi School fees bhari hai toh hum yeh ring baad mein khareed lenge. Tab mujhe bahut bura laga ki mein tumhe ek choti si khusi bhi nahi de sakta aur tum kabhi is baat ki shikayat bhi nahi karti.

N: Kya mayank, Tum aur mein dono jante hai ki hum who ring afford kar sakte hai. Its just that ki hum soch samajh kar expenses karte hai. We play safe aur isme bura kya hai….Lekin Iss baat se Samrat aur Adhiraj ka kya connection hai?

 

M: Nupur, please meri puri baat suno…Uss din se mein bahut upset rahne laga apne aap se…Har pal yahi sochta tha ki kaise ekdum jald se jald main financially aage badh jaagon taki hume kabhi expense karte waqt sochna naa pade. Bhale hi main janta hun ki hum financially settled hai but phir bhi main chahta hoon ki jab hum shopping par jaaye tab tumhe kabhi bhi kuch bhi sochna naa pade.

 

Phir thode dino baad hum log Samrat ke ghar gaye the….Samrat aur Adhiraj ko jo contract mila tha uski choti si party thi. Us din maine dekha tha ki kaise Gunjan tumhe Samrat ne gift ki hui ring dikha rahi thi aur kaise Suhani apne world tour ke baare mein excited hoke bata rahi thi. Maine dekha tha ki tum kis tarah se un sabki baatein sun rahi thi lekin tumhare paas aise koi baatein unhein batane ke liye nahi thi. Main Bahut guilty feel kar raha tha. I was feeling Terrible ki main jo college mein hamesha top karta tha, Jiske baare mein professors hamesha kaha karte the ki he will be the topmost businessman was just another ordinary man. Mein kuch bhi extra special nahi achieve kar paaya.

Aur Samrat aur Adhiraj jo log college mein kabhi serious nahi the aaj life mein mujhse bahut aage badh gaye hai jaha duniya ke saare aiso-aaram unke paas hai

 

N: Mayank yeh sab tumse kisne keh diya ki main kush nahi hoon?

 

M: Nahi Nupur please mujhe kehne do kyunki agar aaj main tumhe nahi bata paya toh shayad ye guilt mujhe kabhi jeene nahi dega…Isliye please sirf meri baat suno

Uss din mein apni isi soch main tha. Samrat ko koi call aaya isliye woh baat karne ke liye apne room mein gaya aur mujhe washroom jana tha toh main jab washroom se aa raha that oh maine samrat ko apne secretary se baat karte huye suna. Woh apne secretary ko tender ke liye quotation bata raha tha jis tender ke liye main bhi agle din apply karnewala tha

Maine kabhi apne personal aur professional relations ko mix nahi kiya but pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya tha agle din jaise hi main office pahucha aur apne tender pe kaam karne laga toh baar baar samrat ke quotation ki baat mere dimaag mein aa rahi thi.

Maine jo price apne tender ke liye sochi thi who main quote hi nahi kar paaya aur maine samrat ki quotation ko dhyan mein rakh kar apni price quote ki…..

Now tears which he was trying to hold back for so long rolled down his cheeks.

I am feeling terrible nupur.

Mujhe pata hai yeh sunkar toh tum bhi mujhe nafrat karogi ki kaise main joh hamesha sachchai aur principles ki baat karta hoon usine apne friends ko cheat kiya.

I am sorry nupur. I am really sorry.

Mujhe nahi pata mujhe us waqt kya ho gaya tha.

Nupur was just listening to him. She just wanted him to cry  his heart out. She wanted him to tell her everything and keep nothing to himself.

Mayank started crying very badly.

Nupur trust me samrat mere liye dost se bhi zyaada hai aur bhale hi main kabhi keh nahi paaya lekin mein gunjan ko sach mein apni behen manta hoon.

Main kaise unke saath aise cheat kar sakta hoon.

Mujhe yeh guilt chain se jeene nahi de raha hai.

Main kya karoon.

N : Mayank bas.Nupur cupped his face and wiped his tears. Ekdum Chup. Ekdum chup ho jaaon. Aura b tum meri baat suno.

Meri zindagi ne mujhe tumhare jaisa saathi de kar sabse bada gift diya hai. Mere dil mein kabhi bhi tumhare alava kisi ka bhi khayal nahi aaya hai.

Mujhe nahi pata ki tum kabse itna insecure feel karne lage ho. Aur theek hai ho jata hai kabhi kabhi kisi aur ko humse zyaada kaamyaab dekhkar insecurity ho jaati hai. You cant be perfect all the time. Isiliye shayad tumne samrat aur adhiraj ke saath yeh kiya. But trust me tumhe yeh sab karne ki koi zarorat nahi hai. Tumse yeh Kisne keh diya ki mein tumhare saath kush nahi hoon. Main apni zindagi se bahut satisfied hoon aur rahi baat hamare financial condition ki toh mujhe nahi pata ki tum itna insecure kyon ho. Tum enough earn karte ho aur jaise maine pehla kaha ki hamare paas kuch kam nahi hai bas hum soch samajhkar spend karte hai. Isme kaunsi buri baat hai? Mayank was listening to nupur but his tears were continuously flowing.

She cupped his face and kissed his tears. Mayank aaj toh yeh baat keh di but phir kabhi mera naam kisi aur ke saath mat lena.

Aur abhi bhi tum mujhe poori baat nahi bata rahe ho.

 

M: Matlab?

 

N: Main tumhe jaanti hoon mayank isliye daave ke saath keh sakti hoon ki tumne who tender submit nahi kiya hoga.. Haina?

 

M: Tumhe mujh par itna bharosa kyun hai nupur?

 

N: Pehle batao kya mai jhoot keh rahi hoon?

 

M: Nahi…Main who tender submit hi nahi kar paaya. Mera guilt itna mujhe pareshan kar raha tha ki main woh submit nahi kar paaya.

Lekin maine un dono ko cheat karne ka socha yeh baat abhi bhi mujhe chain se jeene nahi de rahi hai.

 

N : Mayank, ab bas. Tumne kuch nahi kiya aur ab itna guilty feel mat karo. Ho jata hai kabhi kabhi. But aakhir tumne woh tender submit toh nahi kiya na bas phir baat khatam. Aur meri ek baat tumne mujhe jo khusiyaan di hai main unhein kabhi labzon mein nahi bata paaungi. She just picked up their family picture from the side table and showed it to him but yeh ghar, yeh rishtey tumhare diye huye hai mayank. Meri life main mujhe tumhari wahaj se maa mili hai aur neha toh hum dono ki jaan hai…Haina?

Toh yeh sab bhi toh tumse hi mila hai mujhe isliye phir kabhi aisa mat sochna kit um mujhe kuch nahi de paaye. Aura b tum mujhe vaada karo ki phir kabhi aisa kuch nahi karoge aur aisa kuch nahi sochoge. She forwarded her hand and he kept his hand on her and said "Vaada..Pakka vaada"

 

M: Thank u Nupur. Thank u for everything but please tum mujhe promise karo ki hamesha mere saath rahogi. Kabhi mujhe chod ke nahi jaagi

 

N: Mr. Sharma agar chaho bhi toh mujhse picha nahi chuda paaoge. Bhool gaye saat janamo ka vaada hai abhi toh aur che janam mujhe jhelna padega. Samjhe.

 

M: Oh my God aur che janam? He said this to tease her

 

N: She shouted "Jee Haan. Kisi aur ke baare mein sochna bhi mat" and both burst out into laughter.

 

Ting tong..the doorbell rang

 

N : Lagta hai maa aur neha laut aaye hai… Aur ab tum apna mood theek karke neeche aa jao aur apni princess ko manao. These days she really missed you mayank aur aaj tumne use dara diya hai so please use manao and next be careful with her.

 

M: Sorry Nupur. Really. Aisa dobaara nahi hoga aur main use mana loonga.

 

She Knew that now everything is fine and their life was back to normal again.

 
Jhootas and chappals are welcome.
Waiting for ur criticisms but do leave in your comments.
 
Sorry for the mistakes. Haven't checked it
 

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 2:28am | IP Logged
its very sweet...
mayank is very trustworthy man and nupur is very much understanding wife....
lovely..

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 3:28am | IP Logged
nice os................write more

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 5:02am | IP Logged
nyc one.....do write more...!

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 6:21am | IP Logged
amazing os dear.......loved it.........
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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 7:13am | IP Logged
awesome.
a sweet cute one.
keep writing.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 7:20am | IP Logged
A very sweet Oneshot... It's really true love that Nupur trusted him blindly...
 
But a very sweet os...
 
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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 7:43am | IP Logged
awesome os!!...... do write more!!

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