Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

OS: A Kick Of Love

mchopra IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 02 April 2009
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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Hi is another OS from me..
now last time i had a list of Thankus..but this time i wanna dedicate it someone...
she is one of my best friends of the virtual world..
ahhh but that doesnt mean she reads my OS..oh no..she saves herself from that..she knows they are as crazy as
ahhh but that makes no differnce to me..i still love her as much as i do..OS OR NO OS..
now who is she..
she loves cubes and tubes..she has a awesome sense of humor..she is our regular upadter of show on sat..and last she is the most sweet and crazy person u can find here..
who is it..keep guessing...lets see if u know it..or see bottom of the post..
 witht delay here is the OS..
                                                      A KICK OF LOVE

Baby: why is mamma crying..

She looked up at the angel who was smiling at her..

She placed her hand on ehsaas's head and just smiled wider..

Ehsaas: I am confused now..mamma loves me she sees me first
time and she cries..isnt she supposed to be happy..and there papa is also

Angel: they are happy..

Ehsaas: no they are not that's why they are crying..

The angel shakes her head. She didn't know how to explain to
her why was mamma crying..

Ehsaas: look mamma is holding papas hand so tightly, she is
sad..i have done something that she is crying..

Ehsaas makes a crying face almost on the verge of tears.

Angel: Ehsaas see your mamma and papa are very happy to see
that u are safe and fine and that's why they are crying..they love u so much na
that's why to see u fine they are happy and they have tears in their eyes.

Ehsaas was more confused than before..

People cry when they are happy..this was not making sense to
her, didn't people cry when they are sad..

Ehsaas looked at angel.. she had same eyes as her mamma's
and anyone could read them.

Angel: Yes people usually cry when they are sad..but
sometimes when they are happy..u will understand when u are with them..

Geet: I love u maan..

Baby: YIPPPPPPEEEEEEEE..mamma said to papa she loves him..i
want to tell him that too..i want to tell mamma also..

Angel smiled at her..

Angel: Ehsaas u can when u meet them..its matter of another
few months.

Ehsaas: another few months'no I want to tell them now how
much I love them..

The baby pouted. The angel smiled at her..she was thinking..

Angel: ahh there is a way, but u have to be careful..if u
are not u might hurt mamma..

Ehsaas: no I will be careful..tell me..

Angel : ok see when u move ur legs against the mamas skin..ur
mamma will be able to feel u inside her..

(people me no bio student  I just created that..hehe)

Ehsaas: I can do that full day then..she will know how much I
love her..

Angel: no don't do that..ur mamma will be in pain if u
overdo it..she is very weak already..

Ehsaas: then I will never do it..i don't want to hurt

Angel smiles at her..she was lost at the simple gesture of
love and innocence that seem to have transpired from momma to baby.

Angel: no u can do it once in a while..mamma will love it..

Ehsaas: mamma will love if I give her pain??????

Angel: no it will not give her pain until u are careful..and
she would love to know u love do it once in a while so that mamma knows
abt u..

Ehsaas was lost in her thoughts..

Angel: what is it baby..

Ehsaas:how will I tell papa I love him too..

Angel: now that's a tough question..

Ehsaas was happy that even angel couldn't answer her

Angel: mamma will tell him that u love him too..i cant think
of any other way..

Ehsaas nods her head but she was not satisfied with her
answer yet.

Angel: I know u didn't like that..but till u are here u will
have to communicate with papa thru mamma only..

Ehsaas nodeed her head..

Angel needed something to divert her..

Angel: don't u want to tell others about how much u love

Ehsaas: others????????????

Angel: Yes, ur grandmother, ur uncle aunt and all..

Ehsaas: what I have more people in my life than mamma and

Angel just smiled at her..

Angel: Yes there are many'

Ehsaas: do they also love me..

Angel: yes they do..they care for u same as ur mama and
papa..ur granny and aunty do love a lot.

Ehsaas: when will I meet them..

Angel: soon enough..

Ehsaas: granny..who is she..

Angel: ur papas granny..

Ehsaas: what about mammas granny'she also loves me na..

Angel is a bit taken aback by this..she didn't know what to

Angel: no ur mamma has no granny..

Ehsaas: oh its ok..she will have others..aunty uncle I have
na..i will manage with them..

Angel: no baby..mamma doesn't have anyone except papa..

Ehsaas: why..where is her mamma..doesnt her mamma love her
like my mamma loves me..

Angel: baby..ur mamma has a different life from all others u
will meet..she will tell u everything..but remember one with ur mamma
always..she cant stay away from u..

Ehsaas: I will be with mamma..(states confidently)..

Ehsaas then feels her mammas and papas hand on her..

Ehsaas: that's papa..

Angel nods..

Ehsaas: he is with me for the first time..

Angel just nods her head..

Ehsaas is more than happy'she wanted to tell mamama she
loves her too..and at this moment she could tell papa too..

Ehsaas: can I tell them I love them now..

Angel: sure go ahead..but be careful..

Ehsaas just nods her head..and she moves her tiny legs
inside and mamma felt the baby kick for the first time..

(I know baby kicks are only at 6 months..but I wanted pls no LOGIC..kabhi kabhi chalta hai n..pls)

She feels the tears in mammas and papas eyes again'

Ehsaas is heart broken..she looks at the angel with sadness
in her eyes..

Angel looks at her..she doesn't understand why is baby sad

Ehsaas: I hurt mamma..

Angel is confused..she looks at mamma and then she

Angel: no they are happy..i told u, she is happy then also
she cries..

Ehsaas: what ..she is happy..i don't understand this..

Angel: u will when u grow up..

Ehsaas looks at her and then bends down to touch her toes..

The angel is looking at her with a bemused look..

Ehsaas gets up and looks at angel proudly..

Ehsaas: I am full 2inches 4 cm and u tell me I have to grow

Angel laughs at her..

Angel: yes u have to grow up more..and u will understand
this when u will have some one inside u like u are in mamma there will be some
one in u..u will know this will take few years..

Angel(to herself):And I will be answering the same qs then..

Baby is super confused now..she doesn't get a word of what
angel is telling her..

Angel looks at her befuddled face and smiles..

Angel: now time for u to rest..even mamma needs rest..

Ehsaas: but..

Angel: we will talk next time..

Ehsaas: promise..

Angel promise..

And she puts Ehsaas to sleep and walks off..

Angel thinking to herself

Thanks to the almighty for giving Geet such a man in her life
and such a baby..who adore her..she will never miss her family when this bundle
of joy is hers..

Geet faced a lot but now she will have happiness..


and this person s none other than ANJANAYYZ


Edited by mchopra - 25 December 2010 at 1:39pm

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Very Cute, Shreya!

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swetha10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
wow really cute..

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sanu3108 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
OMG  ...  that was super cute! 

thanks a ton 



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AnjanaYYZ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 2:10pm | IP Logged

Its outstanding.  Hug And am lucky to have virtual friends like u who like me despite of my inanity and stupidity.  

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sksg Goldie

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
It is a very touching write up. I couldn't stop crying (don't worry they are tears of happiness). Very lovely. You should write more like this.

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Sigma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 2:32pm | IP Logged

Shreya that was fab, the baby is soo cute

your bio and logic comments made me laugh
I knew it was Anj aswell

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mchopra IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
@parm: oh come on deniznes will no treat for them..hehe..and i raed those commenst again..and i died laughing myself..but they are 1100% true..
@sksg; thnku..i do have more..
@anjana: who said u are stupid and inane..there is ony person who can call u that..and thst dont u dare call urself any names..ok..
@shradha swetha sana: thanku..

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