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The Abandoned Child - AR OS [25 dec, 2010] (Page 7)

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 10:48am | IP Logged
trulyyyyyyyyyyyy gr8 ff

concept writting character everything

hats off to u

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Vowwwwwwwwww Ruchhhuuuuuuu... bahut hi badiya shot hai yaar.. very ver y good..tooo too good... I tell u this was the best shot ever..
 
Loved it completely.. Can feel the feelings and concerns of every character in this shot. Such a good shot.
 
Love
Niksh

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 6:56am | IP Logged
awesomistically written dear..i lved the kash relation and their emotins...it was a treat...

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 3:29pm | IP Logged

that was simply awsum.......

beautiful OS buddy........

loved it alot............

thnx for the pm..........

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 5:31am | IP Logged
lovely dear
pleasew write again
i just loved it.
bye sumi

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aisha_ranbir8 Goldie
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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
hey loved the OS ..............its such a beautiful.......n mature story........... n each character portrayed all the emotion required perfectly...............riddhima i could understand her pain n loss she faced ...... n armaan's pain which he couldnt show............. n their love towards their child n each other is so unconditional................. n nick who had suffered so much in life at such a small age n trust n love he showed in riddhima waz beautiful............... loved the OS .........U R an amazing writer ............u write all the moments so perfectly dat i could imagine each thing ............. anywaz thanks for sharing a such mature story n a golden piece by u..............anywaz take care...........love aish.................

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 7:39am | IP Logged
this oneshot made me cry so badly!
my vision is still hazy as i am typing this reply! god it was tooooooo emotional!!! 
i simply loved the way you showed both armaan and riddhima's POVs towards aryan's death ... as much as i would hav eloved it if aryan was alive, the fact that nick is taking his place could not have been any better! truly it is perfection in imperfection! 
and that adoption bit of the puppy too was brought in so well! simply loved every single thing in this oneshot and it is truly one of the best i have read in quite some time! and basically to sum up all my feelings ... this oneshot was FANTASTIC and OUT OF THIS WORLD! Clap
keep it up and do write more :D

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ambryn Goldie
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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 7:48am | IP Logged

How did i miss this....

Very well written..
 
 
 

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