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milenge milenge ff episode 5 on pg 27 (Page 23)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
i am soooooooooooooooo sorry frnds for soooooo late update
the actual problem is i am in 10th i think most of u may know that studying 10th in india is too dificult i mean the stressDead
so i hope everyone will forgive meBig smile
so coming to the point i have already said u that there is a new entry
so here it is


she is ichcha handa
the elder daughter of their family and sister of brij
she is a girl opposite to her family who stands for rights
a simple ,petite ,smart girl
she has come HP for enjoying holidays

so a girl like ichcha would able to bear his brother kidnapping geetSleepy

so every one in KC finds out that maneet are not there at home
DADI;raj ,sandhya geet aur maan kaha hai sab unhe pooch rahe hai
subah hogayi aur saare mehmaan aarahe hai Dead
RAJ;pata nahi dadi
haaa kal raat maine hi geet ko maan ke paas bheja par uske baad maine unhe nahi dhekaShocked
then raj recieves a phone saying that maan has been beaten brutallyCryDead
raj is shocked to listen thisShocked
DADI;kya hua raj kiska phone tha
RAJ;dadi voo........
sandhya;raj tekh se bataoo hua kya hai
RAJ;vo maan ko kisine bahoot mara hai aur vo hospital mai
and leaves dadi and sandhya astonishedShockedShocked

the scene shifts to HP
brij and his men takes geet to store room of their house secrectly
and goes to the hall normally as if he just came out of sleepAngry
DARJI;brij jaldi se nashta karlo hame bahar jaana hai
BRIJ;tekh hai darji

then a loud cheek sunayi dethi hai
its preetam brijs mother she comes out of storage room to hall
DARJI;preetam kya hua essa kyu cheekhi
PREETAM;darji vooooo......  storage room koi ladki hai
everyone is shocked in the family
ichcha goes to storage room to have look
ICHCHA;arey koan hai vo bichari kitni buri halat mai hai
brij veerji meri madad kijiye na usse yaha leeke aane ke liye
BRIJ;oyeeeeeee chup kar tujhe kuch nahi pata seedhi aapni kamre mai ja
ICHCHA;kya kehrahe hai veerji  aap mai ne kya galat boolaClap
brij is about to talk then preetam intereeupts and says; brij seedhe bataoo ye geet hi hai na
BRIJ ;ha ye geet hi hai aur mai ne usse kidnapp kiya
vo yehi rahegi isse ghar mai hamare saath
PREETAM;brij ye bahoot galat hai agar tujhe maan aur raj se dhushmani hai toh geet ko kyu kidnaap kiya
BRIJ ;kyu ki ye vahi ladki hai jisse maan betab pyaar kartha hai aur pata hai maan aur geet ki aaj shaadi hai
PREETAM ;brij tu pagal ho gaya hai shaadi vvali din tum ne usse yaha leaaye
tumhari toh
and she comes to beat him
DARJI ;rukho preetam brij ne joo kiya sahi kiya ab saab aapne kaam karo
rano aur preetam tum dono uus ladki ko kuch kana kilado

the scene shifts to hospital
everyone is worried how this happend and where geet isConfused
 DOCTOR;dekhiye condition bahoot critical hai Cry
MR.maan har vakth geet ke naam hi pukar rahe hai aur vo hoosh mai bhi nahi aarahe hai
rajna consoles the crying dadiCryCryCry

then raaj gets a phone
RAJ;hello
BRIJ;kaise ho tum maan tekh toh hai
RAJ;brij tum aur tum maan ke baat kyu kar rahe ho
BRIJ ; kehna toh padega ki tum bahoot chalaak toh ho
RAJ;seedhe seedhe bataoo kahi tum maan ki iis halat ka vaja toh nahi
BRIJ;arey nahi mai sirf usse ki nahi geet ko gayab kiya bhi maine
RAJ;ShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked

HOPE U LIKED IT

PRECAP;ichcha tries to console geet and evtually happens to be her friendSmile


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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
awesome loved it

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
wow.............loved it!!Clap

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet13579

awesome loved it


thanku dearSmile
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maaneet_ayla

wow.............loved it!!Clap


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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
awesome update yaar..
btw dnt worry about us dr, concentrate on your exams and ace them!!!!!!!
gd luck

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:59am | IP Logged
nice update...
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