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mulan. IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 11:02am | IP Logged
beautifully writn kinza! and as far as the fair complexion thingy is concernd i believe dark complexion girls are beautiful too! skin colour can never be the criteria of beauty! i mean phr to asian are not beautiful whn in comparision with the europeans! but the trutrh is asians are beautiful and mostly miss world and universe are asians! :) every girl is beautiful in her own way !!!!!!!! :) and if some fools in our society give importance to complexion thn the reason is tht they cant find anything else to criticise for and so make complexion an issue!!! :@


Edited by mulan. - 27 December 2010 at 5:48am

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 11:08am | IP Logged
@Rinki, you can write a story so beautifully. Hat's off. Bow down.Bow Down Together

You won't believe tears gathered in my eyes when I have almost completed the story. You have portrayed Tista's character so creatively. She struggled her life but didn't stop worshiping love. I loved the line that you have used in your story- "WE WORSHIP LOVE". Yes, we do.

You can be one of the best seller if you publish your stories with this creativity through book.Thumbs Up

Rinki, if you write such a stories in future, do not forget to PM me. I would love to read stories written by you.Embarrassed

With loadz of love,
Farzana.Smile

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Fantastic OS Mehak Clap Beautifully written.
In today's day and age why do some people look at the colour of ones complexion ? But it's not always easy to change some people's thinking. Inner beauty is always more important than outer beauty. Outer beauty can fade away with time but inner beauty will never fade.

Wonderful OS Mehak Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Mehak Lovely written OSClapHug
Reality mostly remembered clearly as REALITY is usually the thing that hurts............but like u mentioned we shud never let it over-shadow billions of other blessings....that is reality tooHug


Edited by Payal-15 - 26 December 2010 at 11:25am
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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Really Mehak U portray the emotions of all the girls 
I really dont no Why every one is running behind the Physical beauty Why no one Noticed the real beauty of heart
Lovely Story 

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
So sorry to hear about it dear. God bless u all.

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 8:23pm | IP Logged

mehak.......that was very beautifully written .........such things r still prevalent......in this world......its really very sad......loved the OS lots......

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
Rinkz!  

Awesome!Thumbs Up
I  got  all  emotional........
really  well  written! <3
And  yes,  I  pressed  the  like  tab!

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