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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 7:05am | IP Logged
great i liked it alott adya

Edited by mahakmev - 29 December 2010 at 7:14am

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:58am | IP Logged
nice try adya.good one.

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 9:17am | IP Logged
wow Adya that was beautiful. and i imagined Samrat and Gunjan lolz

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 9:37am | IP Logged
@adya awww how beautiful n touching OS i totally loveee it u wrote it beautifully btw i imagined sajan gud luck dear

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nice update.....
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mahii twinny i loveeee ur both OS i loveee da concept u used it was really cuteeee n wonderful good luck twinny and my vote goes for u


Edited by Anu_sajan4ever - 30 December 2010 at 7:11am

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@ AttractiveAdya  hey adya wonderful OS loved it to the core it was seriously wonderful olden and golden memories u deserve standing ovation for such a wonderful OS Clap

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     HeartMr.PerfectHeart

Armaan stepped inside the bathroom only to find a towel clad Riddhima standing with her back facing him.

As she was about to undo the towel, armaan moved close to her & placed one arm around her petite waist .As an instant, riddhima looked back & gulped seeing the passion burning in his eyes.Embarrassed

Making a loose knot of her silky hair, Armaan was about to open her towel knot, but stopped as riddhima held his hands.

R:plz Armaan...Embarrassed

A:mujhpe bharosa nahi hai kya ?Wink
R:(moist eyes) Aaj keh diya , phir kabhi mat kehna...Mere jism se lekar rooh tak sab tumhare naam kar chuki hoon armaan. Khud se zyada bharosa hai mujhe tumpar.Ouch
Before armaan could say anything riddhima accidentally stepped on soap & slipped .Not to worry, she didn't fall; rather she fell in his strong arms & they got lost in each other's eyes.Day Dreaming

A:(trying to change her mood)Pata hai, kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai...ki tum sirf isliye girti ho taki, main tumhe sambhal sakoon.Wink

R:(making a face)agar aisa lagta hai...to agli baar mujhe  girne denaAngry

A:bas tumhe girne hi to nahi de sakta.Agar tum chaho to raat ko jaldi so jaoonga....Wink
Kabhi romantic movies nahi dekhoonga...Embarrassed
Red dress pehnogi to aankhen hi band kar loonga...Bas tum khafa mat honaStar
Riddhima smiled at his cuteness & placed her hand on his lips.

R:sshhEmbarrassed

As she slightly brushed her lips over there, Armaan was on cloud nine. He absolutely loved when she took these small initiatives.

R: bahut bolte ho...

A:(whispers)agar tum aise hi chup karati rahi, to main hamesha bolta rahoonga...Wink

Ab naraz to nahi ho na basket?

R:kisliye?...oh ... Armaan, main tumse kabhi naarza ho hi nahi sakti ........dill hi nahi maanta.Jaante ho kyun?Embarrassed

A:(cutely nods his head sideways)Smile

R:apni zindagi se bhi koi naaraaz hota hai kya ?Heart

A:oye hoyye

She gave him a shy smile & moved towards the closet.

As riddhima opened it she was surprised to find huge collection of clothes in there. From beautiful saris, churidars ...to formal dresses, it had everything. A number of heavy Indian & traditional wear were also there.

She blushed noticing a few sexy and lingerie and night-wears... ShockedEmbarrassed
A: stop blushing basket & check out this drawer

The drawer underneath was stacked with different kinds of footwear - slippers, sneakers, sandals, shoes, heels, flats and what not... And then there was one column full of real & artificial jewelry...handbags and clutches.Star

R:armaan ye sab tumne...Confused

A:itna hairan mat ho ...ye sab to maine bahut pehle se soch rakha tha. Main nahi chahta ki tumhe yahan koi bhi problem ho. Day Dreaming

R:Armaan tum...

A:bahut smart, cool, hot , dashing etc etc hoon thanks... Ab meri tareef karna band karo aur change kar lo.LOL


Riddhima moved forward & kept staring at the closet for about 15 minutes. Armaan came from behind and held her from waist, putting his chin on her shoulder..

A: kya soch rahi ho basket????

R: armaan mai kya pehnu? Tum hi batao na.Confused

A: (naughty) bikiniWink

R: (fake anger)armaan..Angry

A: okk serious now, ye pehno na basketSmile

He picked up a plain pink sari & handled it to her. It was the same one which she had worn during their first visit to lonavla.

.

R:ye saree hi kyun?Confused

A:kyunki...I love this sari of yoursEmbarrassed

R:tumhe mere kapro se pyaar hai?
A:nay..
R
: tumhe doosro ke kapro se pyaar hai?
A: (naughtily)kapro se pyaar bilkul nay haiWink
R: (blush blush blush)oh shut up!...& get lost

A:oye, tumhara pati hoon basket. Thodi to respect do

R:(deadly look)armaaan...tum bahar jaa rahe ho ya main jaoon?

A:main bahar kyun jaoon?LOL

R:(shy)wo...wo...main...mujhe...

A:bakri ki tarah mein main kya kar rahi ho. Pehle to bada bol rahi thi. Ab kaho na...kyun jaoon main bahar?LOL

R:kyunki mujhe change karna hi

A:haan to?karo na change. Roka kisne hai.Wink

R:armaan plz...Embarrassed

A:what?itna bhav kyun kha rahi ho?Maine to tumhe bina...Wink

R:armaan tum na...forget it. Tumse behes karna matlab deewar se sar phodne ke barabar haiLOL

A:are nahi basket...tum dewaar se apna sar mat fodna. Pata hai kitna dard hoga tumhe...aur tumhe dard hoga to.. ehsaas mujhe hoga?Heart

R:batein batana to koi tumse seekhe

A: aur dewaana banane tumseDay Dreaming

Finally riddhima decided to get dressed in his presence only as there was no point in arguing with him.As she detached the towel from her bodyArmaan placed his hands on his eyes . This sweet gesture of his made her fall in love with him all over againDay Dreaming

After sometime Armaan overheard her frowns & opened his eyes slowly. Riddhima was standing in front of dressing table unable to make the plates of her sari...Confused
But her struggling stopped as she felt some tickle at her waist. She looked down only to find armaan sitting on his knees & making the plates of her sari.
Riddhima smiled at his love & concern.
A: (cutely) basket...maine theek se to kiya hai na?Day Dreaming

She held his shoulders & made him stand .Cupping his face in both her hands she looked straight into his eyes.
R: perfect...bilkul mere armaan  ki tarahStar
A: oye hoyye...Heart

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