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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Nish amazinggg OS and you have penned it very Beautifully Dear Clap ClapThe character of Neha was a very new one and I really loved her  character SmileI literally had tears while reading your OS and your description was Awesome and Somehow I was able to feel the pain of that Girl Neha who was totally broken from inside and outside as well and the thing which made me really sad that with the sufferings from her father,she was also going through Brain tumor as well CryHer realisation of her mistakes was the Main part which touched my heart.One word for your OS"Wonderdful" Clap Clap Clap and Definitely my vote goes for you Big smile

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wonderful os adhya....Tongue

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 5:02am | IP Logged
ammmmmmmmmmmmmazingClapClapClapClapi dont have word to describe how i feel

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 5:03am | IP Logged
@Twinnie 
Such a beautiful and touchy OS!
I loved it to the core!
U described it so well!
And ya i imagined sajan in this!Embarrassed
Awwie it was so sweet of samrat to stand for her and support her!
Luv ya  Hug



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@Sajan_Ekta Lovely and a Heart touching OS dear Clap ClapSimply Beautiful and very emotional.Th death made me cry but I was glad to see that they both met in heaven and the childhood memories were decribed were adorable EmbarrassedMy vote goes for you Smile

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Beautiful OS dearClap...u wrote it really well.....it is a perfect OSThumbs Up...my vote goes for u
Luv yaHeart

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attractiveadya@amazing os dear loved it a lot


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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Rinki, firstly, thank you for the PM. I read your piece, and I loved it. It had a such a simple and lovely message, and it showed the beauty of love perfectly. It was really very touching. 
 
I liked how, for most people, the ending is sad. And yet, for Tista herself, it was a moment of true happiness, as she saw her family coming together...as a family.
 
Once again, a truly wonderful piece, and you're a fantastic writer. Do continue to write. Smile
 
Nikhi


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