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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:24am | IP Logged
HeartSaajna--True loveHeart
 
 
 
7:00 am

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As the sun rays fell on armaan's face he knew the time had come- The time to choose his love, to start a life all together. But he was still not ready to face the two most important ladies of his life.

He looked above & started speaking as if talking to god.

A- Yo dude?hi. Meri zindagi ke har modr par tum mere sath the. Jab maine pyaar ko mehsoos kiya.Day Dreaming

Jab main kisi ka pati bana.Hug

Tumne hamesh mera sath diya. Sach ye hai ki ?ki apni shadi se pehle kisi aur ko chaha tha mere dill ne. Par pyaar matlabi nahi hota.Yahi shadi ka bandahan sikhata hai. Chahe meri rah jo bhi ho, tumne mera sath kabhi nahi choda. Tum bhatke hue logon ko rasta dikhate ho.Plz?plz mere zindagi ke is modr par, mujhe bhi rasta dikhao. Khushi ka rasta. Un logon ki khushi jo? jo mujhe khush dekhna chahte hain. Jinhe main khush dekhna chahta hoon. Mera ek faisla?teen zindagiyon ki khushiyon ka faisla karega. Ab main ye faisla lene mein aur der nahi kar sakta hoon.Plz?plz plz help me plz.Smile

 

He was lost in his thoughts when shilpa entered.

 

She wanted to talk to him but was lost for words. So she started fidgeting with her dupatta.

Finally armaan broke the ice.

A- tum theek ho?

S (worried)-kya tum theek to ho?

A- Hmm?.Mujhe koi chot nahi aayi hai aur ?mara bhi nahi hoonUnhappy

S (keeping her hand on his mouth)-armaan plz?Ouch

A few tears escaped her eyes thinking that this might be the last moment they were sharing together.Broken Heart

Armaan was about to say something when shilpa interrupted.

S (pointing towards his chest) - ye kya hai?

She noticed the lipstick mark over there.Angry

A- Ye?wo ?.riddhima?..

S(moist eyes) - oh ya?kaise bhool sakti hoon ki armaan riddhima ka pyaar sabse alag hai?sabse alag. Bas main hi samajh nahi payi.

A- Ye tum kya keh rahi ho?

S- Nahi armaan?. Hamein ek hi zindagi milti hai.Khush rehne ke liye. Aur agar is samjhote ki wajah se tum use gawa dete to main khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paati.. Tumne jo faisla liya wo sahi hai.Cry

A- Main kaun hota hoon koi faisla lene wala shilpa?

Shilpa turned around while riddhima stepped in.

S (moist eyes)- Congrats di?aap hi armaan ka pehla aur akhri pyaar ho

She was about to leave but stopped listening to his voice.

Now riddhima was facing armaan while shilpa had her back was towards him


A- Mera pyaar?. uske bare mein kahan se shuru karu. Wo kabhi masoom hai to kabhi shaitan, kabhi bachho se bhi jyada ziddi hai to kabhi ek pyari si sathi.Heart

 

Riddhima thought that he was speaking about her while shilpa had lost all hopes by now.

A-Use apni nazron ke samne dekhta hoon to mere chehre par apne aap smile aa jati hai?. Aur jab wo mere sath nahi hoti to ankhein band karke, use mehsoos karta hoon?

sirf uska khayal hi meri sari tension door kar deta hai?Star

 

Riddhima moved closer to him but when he stepped back.

A- Bahut pyar karta hoon main tumse shilpa.........Dil Se"

 

Shilpa couldn't believe what he just said. She turned around only to see that immense love in his eyes. Her happiness knew no bounds while riddhima's heart broke into a thousand pieces.

 

Shilpa moved forward & gave him a tight hug.

Riddhima was about to leave with a broken heart when armaan held her hand.

 

Coming out of the hug, he moved towards her & looked straight in her eyes.


A- Tumhare Yeh aansu meri wajah se hai na,... I am sorry..lekin bhagwan mujhe jo sazaa dega, main sehne ke liye taiyaar hoon....but plz don't hate me

R (moist eyes)-main tumse nafrat nahi karti armaan?. Kabhi kar hi nahi sakti .Tum mere wajood ka wo hissa ho jo mujhse koi alag nahi kar sakta.KOI NAHIIII.. !!.. Bhagwan bhi nahi.. !! khud tum bhi nahi ! Dukh to sirf is baat ka hai ki?. ki tumhara pyaar paa na saki

A-pyaar ka matlab sirf hasil karna nahi hota riddhima? Our love is beyond staying with each other...our love is staying FOR each other, even if we do not hold hands in the journey called LIFE...

 

R-ek?ek akhri waada karoge mujhse? Aur is baar sacha waada. Waapis apne purane paagal, charming armaan ban jaana. Koi bhi sad situation ho, use hamesha happy bana deta hai.Promise me

A- Promise

R- Smile

He gave her a genuine smile & she put forward her hand.

R- riddhima?.mujhse dosti karoge?

S- nahi

Armaan & Riddhima looked at her with interrogative eyes.

S-(Looking at armaan) armaan aur riddhima kabhi dost nahi ho sakte, Haina armaan?

Armaan lowered his gaze & she got her answer.

R (joing her hands)I'm sorry shilpa ?maine tum dono ke beech aane ki koshish ki

S (hugging her) nahi di?.aap ki jagah agar main hoti ?to main bhi shayad aisa hi karti.

R (coming out of the hug) tum kehte the na armaan ki riddhima sirf armaan ki hai..riddhima pe sirf armaan ka haq hai............. to usi tarah riddhima ko lagta hai ki armaan sirf shilpa ka hai..sirf usi ka haq hai tum par...

 

A(moist eyes)- riddhima mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki main?

R- pls mujhe bolne do?isse pehle ki main kamzor padr jaoon, kuch dena chahti hoon tumhe

She handed over an envelope to him He opened it only to find a certificate inside.

A- riddhima ye?

R- Bahut log kehte hain ki pyaar mein chand taare todr layenge . Par shayad main wo nahi kar sakti.  Isliye maine ye taara tumhare naam kar diya.....

A- lekin tumne kya sochkar..

R (cuuting him in bw)- maine kuch nahi socha armaan. Tum bhi mat socho.Aur ye maine tumhare liye nahi, apne liye kiya hai.Taaki jab tum mere sath nahi hoge ?to main iss tare ko dekhkar tumhe yaad kar sakoon.Embarrassed

A- I'm sorry

R (crying)- Sorry is not good enough?it's just not good enough. Bas yaad rakhna ki duniya mein koi bahut khush hai, kyunki tum dono khush ho.

 

She moved out after saying this leaving a shattered armaan behind.Broken Heart

 

It was same in heer and ranjha, how heer loved to be in love, it was the destiny of them two separating at the end. Broken Heart

 

A (looking at shilpa) Kabhi Kabhi dil jorne ke liye dil torna ??.

Before he could complete his sentence shilpa softly placed her lips on his and he too, pressed hers a bit... She thought that this might reduce his pain.
It was just a peck, a symbol of being together?

S (moist eyes)- Agle saat janmo tak tum sirf mere ho. Lekin aathve janam me armaan sirf riddhima ka hoga and that time no shilpa .Ok?

Here stood in a sweet spot was Raj and Simran, it was their love story now. Star

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 4:33am | IP Logged
Awesome work
loved them both
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both r great...armaan basket nd saajna
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luv u vaani............but more than that luv ur ffs.............u should be the winner!
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 5:17am | IP Logged
luv u vaani..u rok my vote goes 4 u...............:) but personly i m a fan OF SAAJNA.............:)Smile

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 i m ini ve posted my story thanks soo much 4 d pmSmile
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Edited by mohit_rockstar - 28 December 2010 at 6:14am

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