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Taming the wild 8 SURPRISE pg-307 (Page 311)

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
hey mansi di!!!! hi ...
thank u sooooooo much 4 posting the part here...actually i'm 17 so couldn't possible  receive a pm!!!
atleast we're nt missing much rite???

This update is just MAGICAL!!!!!!!!!!  perfect , wish it would go on n on n on...oh love it ...how can Armaan be sooooo caring n loving!!!! Treating Riddhima like a queen, giving her all dat she dreams about, living a fairytale life, totally his princess!!!!!...awww soooooooooo so romantic n cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
going over there, having rose petals path on entering, taking her in his arms, gifting her with the dress, the necklace, planning all the diner, the pictures, the music, then the feeling of the beach...*sighs*.....AR r truly living  a fairytale life.....

oh just love the devil/angel fight....imagining Armaan like the devilROFL

Doctor-Patient, Friends, Husband-Wife, again Friends, then Soulmates.....AR r simple PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awesomely wonderfully, beautifully written!!!! every word, every feeling, every moment was just right,nothing could have been better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clap
waiting 4 the next part,
cont soon...


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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 11:36am | IP Logged
It's funny how these things work out sometimes
how everything falls into place
when you suddenly realize what you were looking for
was right in front of your face

Indignant words rose to my lips
But never were release,
For every face showed stunned surprise
Not one expected this!

Mansi.. this indeed was a sweet surprise!

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Sorry for the late comment di, I have been busy with uni. You wrote this part really well, nothing was vulgar about this part, It was simply beautifull.
Armans planing for everything was so perfect, nice, and most imp. he did it with loveDay Dreaming. Not just Riddhima, any girl would feel special, when planing and doing with so much love. I kept smiling through the whole part. Riddhima finally became Armans queen, from Armans princes Big smile
Iam really glad you put the genral part, those who didn't get pm would miss a beautifull part.
I loved this partBig smile, di plzz update faster this time, and it's time for new threadParty

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
*comment edited on page 299* Smile

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
hey mansii....
Wink...i am commentng aftr so long here....nd am jst stocked out of words....
its good that u gav out general part ...evry one is satisfied...nd no more pestrng....
so commg bak to part ....wel written ...nd well knitted...
frm the very beginnig...the way armaan planned evry thng ....giving a royal treatment to his lady love....for very special day of their life....
frm their 'GUESS WATS IN BAGS'....nok jhonk....
to riddhima's bewafai....as she fell in love with goat ka bacha...
loved it.....
hye ...poor armaan  sandwiched between his devil nd angel....
that was soo ....hilarious....
nd thn began romantic sail...
that is perfect way of treating ur love...
i wonder if any one has been treated this way?
it was a perfect date....that ended with two of souls becommng one...
ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 
hope u dont  disappers this tym...nd stay here....try nd giv us regular updates..would reaaly love c ing this story move on


Edited by diyaa1pk - 13 April 2011 at 2:54pm

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
that was a hot scene! very well written! thank you for the PM!

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
comment edited on pg 310

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Very nice part!
Very nicely written! :)
Thanks for the PM.
 
And update soon.. :D

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