Hey congrats for 3rd thread๐ฅณ๐. From 2nd thread you gave every part a name and
I loved it๐. The names really suits the parts๐ i have read 10 amazing parts, i will post 5 parts first and then 5 parts in other post, cause i was almost done with posting my post on those 10 parts but somehow it got delated๐คข so here goes the parts
Part 48:
Awww Ar and Ridz are missing each other. Ridz even woke up 8 in the morning, to wake up Ar, when she was at her parents house๐.
Ar is so sweet he actually called her mother and told her how to make coffe for her but she still perfers Ar wali coffe๐ณ๐.
I jsut hope Vivek is married with someone else, and Ridz doesn't go back to him๐คข.
Nice to see Abhi and Nikki take care of each other๐. I hope Ar and Nikki ka patch up ho jaye.
Very nice part ๐
Part 49:
I liked the coversation between Ar and Nikki, It was quit emotional. Iam so happe ke in ka finally patch up ho gaya, thanks to Ridz๐.
I really like Ridz character, but the only problem is, she thinks she loves Vivek.๐คข
When Abhi came their I thought he was going to be angry with Nikki, but he was so sweet.
Ar is so sweeeeeet he was actually hungry for that kasam he gave her,
my fav. scene from this part
" Tum aise kyun ho Armaan ?? " He looked up at her mouth still full with spoonful of rice confused he looked down at himself checking himself whether
something was wrong.. Then raised his eyebrows asking " kaise??? " She chuckled seeing his innocent confusion... she took a tissue paper and wiped the gravy
which was sticking near his mouth...
" Aise... Ek stupid si kasam ki wajah se saare din bhuke rahe..??"
" Ohh.." he smiled but then became serious " Tumhare liye wo chhoti baat hogi... mere liye nahi thi " he looked into her eyes but then quickly became himself
again " Aur main to pehle se aisa hi tha tumne mujhe kabhi gaur se dekha nahi kya..? " He said lightheartedly and resumed his eating๐๐
Mind blowing part๐
Part 50:
I was surprised, Ridz kept the fast. I thought she was going to think that the fast is for Vivek and not Ar, but she kept the fast for Ar.๐๐
Ar arranged dinner for both of them, mainly for Ridz, cause she was looking so pale๐
Ar even put kala tikka on Ridz's neck awww ๐๐
Ar told Nikki, he saw Abhi with another girl, and he had thougt of a divorce lawyer too๐๐๐
๐ฒ๐ฒ I hope nothing serious happens to Ar
Awsome part๐
part 51:
Ridz was so scared for Ar๐. Offcourse Ar won't let any doctor check him. I loved the way Ridz convinced him to let the doctor check his head.
My fav. scene from hospital part is:
" shh ,bas ho gaya Armaan, thodi dust thi wo clean kari hai... Don't crease the forehead.. Relax, forehead ko dheela chhodo " she tried to soothe him but he
started turning his face away " Armaan please face this side " she was standing on his right as the cut was the left ,when he didn't turn his face she placed
her hand on his face from under the sheet and gently turned it to her direction. He forgot everything for a moment, she didn't remove her hand from his face
and cupped it softly ,the other hand was on his head caressing his hair. She was probably too worried to notice what she's doing. Armaan's face was just
centimeteres away from her. They were so close that he could smell her sweet fragrance ,he held her hand tightly which cupped his face ๐๐
Ridz took really good care of Ar at home too, my fav scene from there:
" Achha ! Wow ! now look Mr. Armaan Mallik, yahaan doctor main hun aur upar se I'm your wife !, to mujhe double hak hai. Ab chup chap muh kholte ho ya
nahi..." she threatened him
Armaan was happily surprised to hear those words, he looked at her frowning face " haan tumhe hak hai Ridhhima, pura hak hai " he thought as she brought the spoon near his mouth.๐ณ๐
Why is Ar so sweet๐๐
Ar saw Ridz in the shower๐ฒ๐ณ and he couldn't take his eyes of her, good thing Ridz didn't catch him staring at her, nahi to world war 3 shuro ho jati๐๐๐๐ I loved the scene๐
They are going to meet Vivek, Iam so looking forward to read about Vivek mystery, but Iam a little scared too for both Ar and Ridz๐. ๐
Awsome, superb, great part๐๐
part 52:
i feel so bad for Ar he is in pain, and he is sacred for loosing Ridz. Poor Ar even dreamt of Ridz going to away from him to Vivek๐คข
He gave a weak smile " nahi Ridhhima, tumhari life main ya to main reh sakta hun ya Vivek " Riddhima stood rooted hearing him, for a moment they kept looking
into each others eyes... Awww i feel so bad for Ar๐
She said she's thirsty... he grabs a water bottle and then something clicks in his mind , he grabs two big cold drink bottles too.. he gives her one challenging her to finish it in 3 minutes... she takes up the challenge and both start... to his surprise she beat him... he stopped at every restroom on their way.. thanks to hot dogs and cold drink challenge !!!. ๐๐๐๐คฃ๐คฃ๐๐
The way she hugged the earth, when they got of the ride ๐๐๐ the whole scene
was so funny..
He even became a part of clown party, poor him trying to juggle, but the balls falls on him ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ
You wrote the whole scnen with the song(very nice song, it was just perfect for them) in between so well.๐
Awww Ar came in to Ridz room to sleep on the sofa, but surprisingly she told him to sleep on the same bed, that was soo sweet of Ridz.๐
My fav scene from the bedroom is:
She smiled to herself and went back to her book... Just then Armaan changed side... he was stirring kind of uneasily .. As if looking for something about
him... Still sleeping though... she didn't knew when it happened, coming near her he placed a hand on her waist and ... Holding her tightly snuggled up to
her.... she gasped, but before she could even react he was quiet and peaceful again holding her tightly...
Surprised, he called out " Armaan.. Arm.." She looked at his face, he frowned and suddenly she could not speak any further ... Something made her stop..๐๐.
๐๐๐ Ar told the police the she was drunk cause her boyfriend dumpde her, and when he told the officer that he is Ridz husband, ๐๐๐๐คฃ๐คฃ poor officer ๐๐๐
Awwww Ridz wanted a kiss from Ar๐ณ, and Ar told her that she wil regret about it later, but they kissed, " See Armaan, I don't regret it " she whispered so sweet๐, but the sadest thing is that she was drunk. ๐
Their dance was awsome ๐๐
Hmmm so Vivek will come in the next part,I just hope he has done something really bad, so Ridz can just leave him ๐คข
Iam speechless I can't describe with words what this part was. I have to say again you write so well. This part had everything in it, It was sad, It was
funny, their feelings, their pain, and much more.... iam in love with this story... I read this part so may times. ๐๐๐
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