Hey My name is sahar, but my friends call me simi. i just start reading your story, and must sa
you are a amazing writer๐
You have 8 threads wwooooowww, iam looking forward to read all of them, but it will take time, cause iam in stupid university and i have so much work to do๐ฅฑ.
can i call you di ๐ณ?
As for now i read 5 parts so i will comment on them๐
Intro:
Really nice intro. YEESSSS AR are all ready married ๐๐
I liked ARs nokh jhokh.. i just have to read the 1st part now..
Part 1:
Amazing part. Poor Arman had accident, but he can't complain, he has Riddhima as his attending doctor ๐
Shanky and veeru knows each other, thats nice.
My favorite scene from this part is:
armaan on the other hand was cheking her out " great not bad..... yahaan to doctors bhi bahut hot hain.... ab tera time aaram se guzrega armaan beta..... and she knows dad hmmmm zyada mehnat bhi nahi karni padegi" and he grinned to himself thinking of the prospects but when he saw that his father was still busy talking with her he let out a fake cry...
" ouch !!! .... excuse me .... i m the patient in pain here !!!"----->> I loved this line๐
Nice part๐
Part 2:
hahaha nice way to grab Riddhimas attention. So they also know each other from their childhood
Arman is afraid of injections๐๐, loved the way he lied that he doesn't want to sleep๐
atleast he gave her a comment on her eyes, but she thought it was due to the injection:(
Really nice part๐
Part 3:
Arman is Arman, flirting with Anjali. WHAT Anji likes him๐ฒ๐ฒ?? nooo please no!
Hmmm jaan-e-man, who can that be??
Small but great part๐
part 4:
Wwoow Muskaan and Rahul is in the story too, cool.
Riddhima is worried about who muskan is:D Rahul is Armans jaan-e-man ๐๐
hahahahhahaha Riddhima thinks Arman is gay, cant wait to see Armans reaction on that.
Amazing part๐
Part 5:
hahahhahaha loved Armans reaction๐
" of course he is my bhai .. my best buddy..." then seeing her confused expressions he asked her " tum itni confused kyun ho ? wait a minute ...tumhe kya laga..??" now narrowing his eyes
" oh my god!! tum.. tumhe laga ki main GAY hun !!! " armaan spoke up surprised and horrified at the idea
hahahahhahha Riddhima and Muskaan they are laughing at them. Arman didn't wanted Riddhima to know about his girlfriends aaaawwwww.๐ณ
hahaha poor Rahul was stuck with the crazy lady๐๐. Arman is so in love with his work that he actually is doing office work from hospital, Riddhima serves him right๐
Veeru is thinking about Ars marriage....๐
Super part๐
Once againg Amazing story, keep up the good work. ๐๐๐
I will probabaly comment in the weekend๐
Simi
Edited by -simi - 13 years ago
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