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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03 (Page 85)

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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pushpi

Okay...so it seems like I'm finally pulled back into commenting like I used to before. This is kind of semi-sentimental for me because I feel like I've missed out on this and I've kept out of the loop here for you too....Cry

Alright enough with the tear shedding back to the story....there were lines that just caught me when I read them and this post is primarily about what I felt about those
 
This entire update I felt as if people were too much into their inner turmoil which was portrayed in their silence. They were silent for themselves to try resolve this inner conflict and silent for others too (which came out as silent treatment). Sab apni hi dhun mein hai. Koi kya soch kar raha hai, mehsoos kar raha hai, iske liye sochne ke bhi fursat kahan. Apne me hi uljhe hain sab. Khud ko suljhaenge tab hi to doosron ko samjhenge na
 
1) "Chaddo...Aate hi phone mein lag gaye. There was simply no hope for men who married their gadgets first and wives second" --- Agree to that cent per cent! I often think men are married to cricket or sports first and then wives second...
 
2) "While I walked from the elevator to the door, I could not help but wonder that as we aged into the relationship, we all had simple wants, but we never could be simple enough though. " --- Doesn't this follow for every relationship? Somewhere deep inside everyone wants simplicity in life. If only things were like this, could be categorized like that, etc. People say things are as simple as you make them --> this is true to some extent but doesn't apply all the time.
 
3) "If this how strong Miss Sherni was, then rest assured I knew Geet would soon make a mousy return from SF in no less than a week" --- the only thing that popped up in my head after I read this was "HEY watch it" Lol just an instinctive reaction thats all ;-)
 
4) "To me, it seemed that as time passed it could only stop memories from haunting you often. But it never did teach anything about what you do when the same scars spring back into life and stare at you in midday light. " ---I can't even try and express on what I felt after reading that. It's beautiful and lets just leave it at that for now
 
5) Lastly, "What more could I seek, when cold souls only asked for warm comfort? It was Mayday for everyone." --- At the risk of being repetitive, I LOVE YOUR ENDINGS!! Rather than the update I'm always more interested in the endings hehe
 
This was more like a post of what I liked and not at all like an analysis but I couldn't help myself :-D



Sab apni hi dhun mein hai. Koi kya soch kar raha hai, mehsoos kar raha hai, iske liye sochne ke bhi fursat kahan. Apne me hi uljhe hain sab. Khud ko suljhaenge tab hi to doosron ko samjhenge na

Well said Pusipi...
I would love to post a song here by Jagjit Singh...


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v8sBKVy7RYE




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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
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I highly dislike the silent treatment, but I have to say it always works! I just hope Geet doesn't fall into his trap.. Maan should understand never to hide anything from Geet, especially since he knows how she is!

On the other hand I love how Maan, despite being caught up in this mess, never forgets to admire Geet! Day Dreaming
Thanks for updating so quickly!

Thanks for your comment...What do we do...Munda likes to drool and simply adores his wife...
There has been a lot of dislike in general about the silent treatment, but Maan is a very private person when it comes to discussing problems. (Observing it from the men in my life, they dont like to wash dirty laundry in public and hate hate drama when they are not in their safe/comfort zone...
Well its only my take...and I could be wrong. )The flight was a bad place to discuss.
They have just come back home in the afternoon. There is all day Sunday coz they left on Thursday according to the story timeline, so lets give him time on what he wants to do....Wink
Also he likes talking to Geet in a certain way/in a certain hold (Notice all problems were solved at the windown sitting or in bed...LOL LOL)...which again you will see soon...


shoot! I wrote a long comment..and then when I clicked post reply ..it took me to error page, because of my stupid internet..and now I can't get back what I wrote..
any ways I'll summarize what I wrote instead..lol

basically Maan needs to be more like meLOL because mera pait mein koi baat nahi rehti, sub kuch ugaal de thi hoon usually to my friends...so Maan habibi just let it out.. let it all out....just to Geet that is ..no one else! ;)

ahhh and the return of the window seating ..my favourite place! Day Dreaming



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i really luved the update.... the story is progressing beautifully... no complains at all Wink i luv how u silently yet powerfully incorporate the title of the chapter into the the chapter itself... the weaving of the episode with the title deserves ClapClapClap keep up the good work n the frequent updates too...Big smile


Thank you so much....Glad you like the titles...I never did think it would be such a big hit.

u r welcome!
well i forgot to mention the title: Manasa Vaccha Karmana... that title just blew me off.... just was curious whether you got that title from Guru Geeta or from a telugu song from the movie Godavari or was it your own creation? either way that title was too gud Wink
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