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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03 (Page 65)

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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 10:34am | IP Logged
You have very beautifully described each and every emotion going through the eyes of Maan. For example " liquid dull grey that was leaving his eyes" , "Perhaps seeing me read much in his eyes, the nascent moment died, " etc..,.

This made me think ...... 

Eyes - The most beautiful organ created by God. An organ that tells truth that is as clear as water. Eyes speaks volumes which the lips cannot utter. Eyes are the mirror of a person's soul .

Is it possible for us to know the true nature of a person just by looking inside his/her eyes? Can we really see the shades of color changing in ones eye in different emotions ? Do the eyes give out the right answer to any question that may remain unanswered by the mouth ? 

Have you (i.e readers of NYT) experienced the power of reading minds just by looking into the eyes of someone ? 

(these questions may sound silly when taken in a literal sense. But when you look at those questions in a deeper manner, u will understand that there is a far greater thought attached to it)  

Ps: I can still remember the twinkle in the eyes of a best friend  WinkWink

Cheers,
AJ


Edited by maaneet2010 - 16 February 2011 at 10:40am

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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
hey
gr8 part,,
cont,sooon
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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
wow...
owsome update..
loved it...
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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Wow another amazingly written update and the title of this chapter was spot on and like how geet opened up to him in the moment of passion she told him somrhing that she kept inside her something she was shy to tell or more thought she was selfish but when she voice it maan felt so content that she shared the same desire as him and made him fall deeper in love with her, I liked the payal scene it was sweetly romantic and geet surrendered herself to maan telling him she wanted him as much as him making a equal balance in their relationship and liked the end part where geet was describing the aftermath where they both sat serene and watched the night sky anuways another great update di and can't wait to read more Smile
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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
hey
nice ff
it took me 4 days to read ur ff
plse add me to ur pm list
and update fast
well wriiten

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 10:15pm | IP Logged

Hi Hansini,

loved ur update dear
enjoyed it a lot
do continue writing such an extraordinary stuff
do continue soon
 
take care
 
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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
hiie pls update soon as i m missing nytimes

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 4:51pm | IP Logged
To whom I owe the leaping delight
That quickens my senses in our wakingtime
And the rhythm that governs the repose of our sleepingtime,
The breathing in unison

Of lovers whose bodies smell of each other
Who think the same thoughts without need of speech
And babble the same speech without need of meaning.

No peevish winter wind shall chill
No sullen tropic sun shall wither
The roses in the rose-garden which is ours and ours only

But this dedication is for others to read:
These are private words addressed to you in public.

just for you cause only you know who u are....

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