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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03 (Page 62)

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Hey hasini
amazing update
love how geet is opening up to maan
but what cud it be tht is bothering maan
anway loved it u wrote so well
wonderful
jasmin

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 11:02am | IP Logged
wow....
beautiful update........
d way u described their moments was amazing......

brilliant work..... I loved it.....

N yes im following your blog....eagerly waiting for more of ur OS's......

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged
awesome update....

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
awesome update Hasini....
you write so well that i can feel the emotions in maan and geet place while reading the monologues....

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
wow my dear i'm speechles

This I did not expect. I was very much in the mood to play and toy with her more, but as I saw her undress herself in my presence, as she ran towards the shower, I was overtaken by my primal cravings. Everything disappeared; the rooms, the walls, the plate of peaches on the counter, even the meal that she had prepared, which my grumbling stomach would easily devour, and now...there were different hungers. As I advanced to follow her into the bedroom and then to the bathroom, her silhouette framed my mind; her ever so delicate and slender figure, exhibited a physical carnival in my eyes. 

love that part that was beautiful V gift
my dear it was worth of wait yu paid off
ur really damn excellent writer
magnificent update pls cont
soonnnnn thanks pm

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Yay!!! PartyDancing Finally, New York Times updateSmile
Thank youSmile

Beautiful update.
Beautifully portrayed emotions with Geet being more open of her feelings, her wants to the man she loves so much. And how Geet has the power in her which makes Maan forgets all his worries. She is truly His Mishti.  
Enjoyed reading it though I was expecting that you'd clear Maan's turmoil to us, the truth which made Maan to go through a series of emotions on his trip, in this update. I am too curious to know what is it. I hope the next update throws some light on this.
And you aren't getting banned. It was pretty decentSmile

BTW Belated Happy Valentine's DaySmile

P.S. Please don't make us wait for too long for the next updateEmbarrassed

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Hasini,
Loved the update......
I will write more  in a few days, currently busy with applications......ufff..

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Hasini.....I felt like calling u Lily...cus of ur post on V-day.
 
 
As soon as I read stairway to heaven title......for some reason I could only think of Jack n Beanstalk. I just could not picture regular stairs, steps etc. I could just think of a tree with its leaves..... 
The leaves n branches being the steps....
The steps are a journey ...which in the present time is never ending.
The journey is to its destination.
Is heaven the destination?
The destination will only arrive when it is the right moment, when it feels right and what that moment will come is a question mark?
 
How does a person know what their destination is?
What if you find something on the way to destination?
Then what happens? Do u stop there or u carry forward to what u thought the actual destination is?
 
M I making any sense? I have no idea. Confused
 


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