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Part 62: Half cup empty: Oh no…the little pessimise are we?! Not liking the sound of that for now, but I know you'll turn it around!!
Oh boy…what a nasty start…awkward hug…REALLY?!! Well, loved the fact he wanted to be by her side no matter what!
Poor Maan….his monologue was superb,especially when you showed his irritation and annoyance with Geet not just asking Dev or her not being with him b/c of issues with the papers…just love that about him…brilliantly written!
It's actually hard to feel sad for Geet either b/c she trusted Dev to get all the paperwork done sincerely…and I get her b/c on her wedding day she felt bliss and feelings that were unique to that experience and she doesn't want them to be invalidated…but I'm sure if she tried so she can find a solution to erase all of these new problems!! Brave girl has done t before and I know she'll pull through and do it again!!
Maan and Geet's kitchen conversation…didn't start off in the right direction. Maan shouldn't be rubbing it in…the whole your negligence thing was uncalled for! But I'm so glad he asked her if she wants to get married again and why it's taking her so long to make a decision! YES!!! I love it when they talk to each other instead of talking to themselves and distress to the self!! And the closeness returns…love the whole interaction between the two and bringing in Nakul….ha ha…so cute!!! Awwww!! There are lighter moments and looks like things are heading in the right direction!!!
Yash and Meer fight was so cute!!! Maan feeding Geet the 1st bite and then continuing to feed her…loved it!!
The heart to heart was so lovely…Maan telling her not to cry and Geet telling him why she feels the way she does!!! The half empty and half full…makes sense and I loved how you incorporated that into the dialogues between them….well thought out!! I know you must have put a lot of thought into that concept!!!
Maan telling Geet he hates her losing out on time with him was simply amazing and so wonderful!! Mind bogglingly beautiful!!!!
THE KISS!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!! YIPPPPPPPEEEEE!!!! Passionately kissed and they were moving towards the bed…yes I did read it coreectly….so happy, but stupid Meer's cry and Dadi's phone…spoiling all the passion!!! Then he tells her he won't drink…NICE!!!! Now that's called undying chemistry…even after marriage!
The texting was a splendid touch at the end…nok jhok and rteasing was fun to read! More PLEASE!!! I loved this line: His warmth and passion didn't change but only grew to comfort me in his immutable love… it's so deep and meaningful and the whole essence of this story and the pure essence of Maneet!!!!! Awwww!!! The last line…full or empty…which ever way one looks at it, Maan is doing the filling and comforting Geet!!!
I loved this…it ended on a positive note!!! And I hope it stays this way!! Excited about the next part!!!
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