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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03 (Page 141)

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Managed to read all the 4 updates at one go, finally! LOL

Sorry, my like button is acting weird again but I loved your updates, all of them! Simply amazing!

Maan's becoming panicky upon not getting through Geet and Geet's becoming restless for not being able to reach him was so nicely penned. He actually came to SF, so did Dadi and Naini. He even called Rishabh's secretary for help...something I feel he would have never done otherwise. When they finally saw each other, it was great! The love was definitely oozing out.

Naini and Rishabh, two obstinate, egoistic people. Lolz. They love and care for each other but don't express the same. Lolz at her name calling...and Dadi's reaction to their antics were just apt. Lolz.

I am saddened by your wanting to wrap up NY  Times by 19th of May. I really love this FF and your Maan and Geet...but all good things do come to an end. Hope you start your SS soon and keep writing many more FFs...lolz.

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
awesome updates back to back...thankyou so much. can't believe this ff will end soon...but loved it to the core...Clap
arabianpaki Goldie
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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 5:51pm | IP Logged
Clap
You're definitely on a roll with the updates... but your going to finish it on May 19th... thats too soon, don't ya think Wink Actually I'm sort of looking forward to see how this is going to end, but I dont want it end LOL

The longing for each other...was portrayed amazingly, looking at the hairbrush, the bed etc.. those little things that seem to have no special meaning or value when the person is present, but as soon as the person is gone, it's amazing how you take notice of those same things without knowing you ever noticed... do you get what I'm saying ..lol

I'm little confused...where did Geet go..that they couldn't find her?
Naina and Rishabh story is turning out to be very interesting! Is Geet going to play cupid????

Thanks for the 4 wonderful updates!

p.s I miss the conversations on your thread too- that + plus your amazing writing skills got me to write my first comment on IF! Bring them back Hasini ..pretty please!


Edited by arabianpaki - 02 May 2011 at 6:02pm
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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 12:56am | IP Logged
hey  nice  updates  dear...
but  slightly   senti  too...
naini n  abhi  part  was interesting...
looking  fwd...

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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 4:50am | IP Logged
wonderful!!!!
Naini-Rishab story phase is turning on an interesting node.
loved the part,wonderfully narrated.
great update.
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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 8:15am | IP Logged
"That was puppy love then...What is there to say in this? It's all understood...and same goes for you...shouldn't you know by now what is acceptable and what is not?"

It is really understood?
Who really defines what is acceptable and what is not?
We are always aching to measure who loves who the most and off-course prove it!
Love is always on a trial...make a decision...make a choice!

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I guess all good things must come to an end to start something new...:)

All I can say is that we will stick it out to the end!...And in hope that you will continue this saga for rest of your FFs...:)


Edited by night13 - 03 May 2011 at 8:35am

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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Can't believe you are ending NY Times hasini...Broken HeartCry...
It was an awesome journey through New York to India to SF to Alaska to Canada to LA to their honeymoon place in the forest greens of Sohraa...Clap...
You are a star...Star
I am going to re-read this FF and have already re-read my favorite parts nth times before...Big smile


Edited by kushboo_6 - 03 May 2011 at 8:36am
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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 8:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by night13

"That was puppy love then...What is there to say in this? It's all understood...and same goes for you...shouldn't you know by now what is acceptable and what is not?"

It is really understood?
Who really defines what is acceptable and what is not?
We are always aching to measure who loves who the most and off-course prove it!
Love is always on a trial...make a decision...make a choice!
 

I think thats where relationships become complicated- especially long ones- one partner grows up and the other remains stuck in some time wrap...Neither can understand the others frustration- of having raced ahead or having been left behind...sigh the hits and misses of love- maybe this is called falling out of love? or rather growing out of love...it is quite treacherous for you need to pace yourself just right- neither too fast nor too slow!


Edited by -pixie- - 03 May 2011 at 8:43am

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