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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03 (Page 139)

shivangi783 Goldie
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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Hi HasiniSmile

How're you doin?Smile
Logged into IF after a long time.
So many updates to catch upSmile
You seem to be on a roll-giving us three updates in a rowBig smile

Will read and post my views on the updates soon.
Have to catch up from part 73...
Me too excited to read the partsTongue

sanjeevani09 Senior Member
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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
read the part 79 and 80 together. loved it
maan's anguish was well presented.
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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 4:06am | IP Logged
3 updates in a row Tongue loved it...

and please do not stop sending the pm, i love your updates

waiting for the next updatesTongue
Rishab and Naini, hmmm
libra25 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 4:26am | IP Logged
DISPLACEMENT1

remarkable,,,,
the bereavement...the longing for each other and the depth of their love is so beautifully put together...
especially the para where you described the hues fading and the tv noise as white noise was wonderful play of emotions...
also the part where the whits in his room blinded him and the lonliness was like the black hole...ohh just ultimate...what a brilliant use of metaphors...

i trully loved the update and have already read it thrice and can actually clearly visualize the effect of each line

The stubborness in geet of not accepting that she and him are going thru this phase just because of her implication that living away from him will only help her be self dependant...

and the woory that was etched when geet did not answer his calls...whenever any beloved lives away and you do not get an answer in first or second ring...you always tend to think negative...this is one aspect i have lived thru but have never been able to analyse it that why is it so...each time i decide that i would not behave pessimistic but each time i would fail...

i mean i am so carried away that i can keep on blabbering...
great piece of work..

preethia IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 4:28am | IP Logged
omg 3 updates together...
when u stay away from the one u love then u know the depth of ur feeling @ that time...
loved both the parts of 79 as it was solely for maaneet and their feelings...
80 i wudnt lie but ok since its on rishab and naini...well i am actually surprised that rishab keeps a tab on khuranas well for naini i guess...
lets c who breaks the ice bw them...
hey when will u update the other ff i mean mrs khurana & mr iyer...still waiting for the punjabi wedding
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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 4:42am | IP Logged
DISPLACEMENT2

vow vow vow...
this was beautiful...
the subtlities like when he sat on the stairs of the chartered after hearing her voice...
her reaction on seeing him...and their sharing the silence...
great, brilliant., fabulous...

and also the enterance of rishabh finally...
so now we will get to see some of rishabh and naini...
 
looking forward to how all of them will deal with this new situation..
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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged
HOMECOMING PART1

i really like the way you have described rishabh's overbearing ego and his fight to atleast see nain i on pretext of finding geet...
but i am lil disappointed by naini's reactions...i know shw knows that she made a few mistakes but i was actually expecting some fireworks between them...as no one is ready to accept their faults in front of each other and would rather separate than compromise ...

really looking forward to maan rishabh dialogue...
and also the third pr4ecap...seems like love is in the air...

continue soon

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