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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03 (Page 101)

Antares IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Amazing! I loved what Geet did to him....lolz.....left him to sleep on the couch.....go Geet! That entire haldi part was cute.....thanks to Dadi.....she's cool! Hmm, Maan now has learnt his lesson.....can't wait to know what he's gonna do to placate his wife. Do continue soon.

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Hahahaha..that was amazing!
-Aarya- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
leaving a Maan high and dry... sounds miserable... but I am loving this game of power play vs foreplay... Wink
I wonder what Maan will do to prolong her urge and have her crave for him more....Embarrassed

I simply believe what can be resolved behind closed bedroom doors ... can not be resolved anywhere else... but at the same time sleeping on a problem may be the best way to solve It!

It was just a little tease, only catch and release...don't stop now... let's keep going on the way...Embarrassed

Edited by night13 - 06 March 2011 at 4:03pm
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I have yet to comment....
In the meantime...
Congrats on100 pages

Edited by Water. - 06 March 2011 at 4:08pm

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 5:28pm | IP Logged

Awesome update! I love how Dadi tried to use Geet and Maan for her daily drama dose. The haldi part was wonderful, finally Maan realized he shouldn't mess with his wife. I can't wait to see how Maan will pacify her and really interested in Naini and the whole press situation. Continue soon!

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 5:59pm | IP Logged

Shy that she was as they pulled away from each other, Geet got on her feet at once and paced to the bedroom. Not wanting the feeling in them to die down sooner, Maan picked up behind her, only to have the large white door, shut fast, right into his face which had him fly behind a few steps that grave instant.

"Ab yeh kya mazaak hain Geet?" He clawed into the door hinges and called out to her.

"Maan...Main aur mazaak?...bus sone jaa rahi hoon" she retorted quickly.

"Geet...yeh natak nahin hain tho aur kya?...ab tak kiss ki aur..." he landed his fist on the door, knocking gently. Pleading her mentally, not to leave him all high and dry.

"Aur...Maan" She giggled at his loss of words to complete his sentence. Now it was her turn for her much needed revenge.

"Bus mujhe jo chaiye maine woh le are not yet at the receiving end Maan..." She quickly opened the door to taunt him; sticking out her tongue in a playful manner and jabbed the door at him once again.

There was little doubt that she was not afflicted by their lovesick acts in the living room, but this was required too. He had ignored her cold shoulder yet again and had exercised his will at ease. Perhaps it was time Maan knew that there were no shortcuts when it came to making up. And this she knew he had to know firsthand for all the times that were to come. With hollowed needs, Geet settled into bed for a long night, sighing and wishing in array that her husband would crossover some barriers sooner than later.

Maan stood by the door for a while, as he folded his arms and waited for her to open the door for him. He sighed as realization dawned upon him some time later. He had indeed underestimated his astute wife when she had yielded those wanton minutes, but now he knew that she had in return calculated him rightly. He smiled at what his unapologetic acts now cost him; A desperate him, who was to sleep on the couch by himself, stewing in vexation and agony.

Her catch and release trick had delivered a perfect punch to an unyielding Maan. Ouch

love this part so awesome
super duper hit update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
thanks pm

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
"Aisa kuch nahin hain Daadima...Lagta hain bedroom ka darwaja atak gaya hain...aur Geet bhi sogayi hain...Main bus vuse disturb nahin karna chahta hoon" He said as he let out an embarrassing smile, knowing well, Daadima knew how to spot a white lie when she saw one. But that never did stop Maan and so Daadi couldn't let go either.
That line had me cracking up.

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