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Tomorrow Full of Promises4 MichiFF Note pg100 1/4 (Page 55)

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sneha_17

Thanks for a wonderful update Smile Thanks Sneha

Hope your health is doing well Smile feeling better now hun.Thx

I was waiting for a  lovely episode  after a long time. I felt terrible  after reading it thinking of Prachi. oops, sorry for that. Its an important phase of the story.

Sally and Milind relationship hurts Prachi a lot, being a second love for someone hurts the most when our love is so pure and honest. The more she comes to know about Milind and Sally, the more she is struggling to accept it. And Milind's love for her is pure and honest too.

I always thought Sally and Milind was teenage relationship and shared only bed not love. This update when you specified as they made love I felt Milind as cheater. Again, its Sally's thought process and not Milind's. He might explain it differently.

The respect I had for him for sacrificing his dream for his parents all gone away after I felt that Milind first love was Sally not prachi especially b'cos he hide it from her and fooled her terribly. Milind has not fooled Prachi in anyway. Don't judge him just yet.

For the first time, I felt Inder is right and Milind doesn't deserve Prachi. Prachi deserves better than him as she is so innocent and naive. Inder might be right in his own way. Prachi is really naive.

No offense,  the above is my point of view. No offense taken hun. I appreciate your pov. But the story hasn't ended here. Just give Milind a chance too.

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 111priyan

wow Divya  very nice part.
And welcome back. Thanks Priya, good to be back too. And a big thank you for your get well wishes. It did help my speedy recovery HugHug
this part was so beautifully written, i can feel the pain of both Prachi's & Shally's . Poor soul, very beautiful u put both Milind's past & present together , now cant wait to see what will happen next. Prachi & Shally both on the same ride of emations, do continue soon... Thanks hun. Glad you liked it. You are right, they both are facing a very emotional situation. Lets see how things turn out. will update soon. Ta

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by janu_2006

hey divya
 
welcome back..
 
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
 
n thanks for pm dear...


Thanks Janu. will continue soon. Ta
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Diva_Me

Originally posted by sneha_17

Thanks for a wonderful update Smile

Hope your health is doing well Smile

I was waiting for a  lovely episode  after a long time. I felt terrible  after reading it thinking of Prachi.

Sally and Milind relationship hurts Prachi a lot, being a second love for someone hurts the most when our love is so pure and honest.

I always thought Sally and Milind was teenage relationship and shared only bed not love. This update when you specified as they made love I felt Milind as cheater.

The respect I had for him for sacrificing his dream for his parents all gone away after I felt that Milind first love was Sally not prachi especially b'cos he hide it from her and fooled her terribly.

For the first time, I felt Inder is right and Milind doesn't deserve Prachi. Prachi deserves better than him as she is so innocent and naive.

No offense,  the above is my point of view.

Hey divya I m a fan of our ff and loved this part as well but I have to agree with each and every words of the above post by sneha. Hiya, I am glad you are reading this ff.

I have been following this ff for a long time now n from quite a few parts(since this whole thing began) I am hating Milind. Oh oh, poor Milind. Go a bit easy on him pls.

How can he hide such a big thing from his wife the love of this life who has bared all her past to him( though there is nothing much to tell still). It was not just a fling but a serious relationship and he has hurt both Prachi n Sally. Agree he was hurt when Sally went and he had loved her then and being his wife Prachi is entitled to know about this truth. Milind is shamelessly dancing around with his ex flame with whom he shared such a big history n still don't give a damn about how his wife will feel or don't even think that Prachi deserves to know the truth. Milind never hid his relationship with Sally. Prachi had questioned him now and then about his past and he has answered her as honestly as he can be. Prachi knew his affair with Sally was anything but casual and that's what had always made her insecure. I agree he had been very inconsiderate of Prachi's feelings when dancing with his ex-girlfriend. He is in the wrong. Lets see how he explains himself out of this.

For Prachi Milind is the first guy she has ever loved and has accepted his colorful past open heartedly , and in return Milind has not told the biggest secret of his life and also don't give a damn about it. Now a days there is no gal with an untainted past like Prachi but I guess Milind doesn't deserve such love and woman as I don't think  Milind is even planning to tell Prachi about it also. Hmmm, I think that is a strong accusation. Again he never hid anything from Prachi and he didn't feel the need to give a day by day account of his past life to his wife. Prachi would have run a mile if he had. Certain things in life are better left unsaid and unspoken about. But he hasn't handled the whole issue very well. He had brushed aside her insecurities and just expected her to understand it and embrace it. Milind needs to open up a lot more and Prachi needs to talk about everything she feels. The lack of communication on this matter is what is causing all this.

What irks me more is that while dancing with Sally he saw how jealous Sally's BF was looking but he completely ignored Prachi. You are absolutely right there. I will cover that in the next update.
Hope Milind suffers( I can't believe I am saying dis -the only time I wished this was during  those horrible days of Kayamath where Milind used to physical abuse Prachi and I was super pissed with him then). He will hun. Don't you worry. I will make sure of that.

I hate sally n her obnoxious behavior but at the end of this part I really felt bad for her. Hope she gets over the guy...seriously Milind don't even deserves Sally's love too They were each others first love ans Sally has continuously loved him for 9 years but that guy don't even feel the importance to mention his wife about the past his first love. Again, lets not jump into conclusions. Love is a very strong feeling and we don't know if Milind's feeling towards Sally could be termed as love. Both women does love him way too much, may be more than he deserves.

Please make Prachi more strong now. I am fed up of her being a insecure door mat. Now a days girls are more stronger than guys. I want Prachi to give it all back to Milind on his face and stop getting all insecure by just hearing Sally's name. She should value herself more as she is way better than these guys. That is Prachi's real problem. Instead of being strong in her love, she becomes a weakling the minute she hears about Sally. This is a learning curve for her and lets wait and see if she emerges strong from it. And thank you for the long comment. I enjoyed reading your pov.
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Diva_Me

I forgot to write hope you are fine now. do take care of yourself dear and please please pretty please cont. soon I am waiting to see what happens next


You were all worked up about Milind. No wonder you forgot LOL. I am much better now, thx. I will update in a couple of days. Take care.
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -LoVe.KaSh-

heyya divya :Dseeing after a long time..i thought u deserted this ffEmbarrassedlol anyway...Hiya, no hun. I will the FF a fitting end. I was just unwell.
i love the story n ua writing style, m like completely fida over it ;) Thank you.
i neva saw Michi...but this particular ff of urs made me fall in love with them..
the FF is truly FABClap...Thanks again.
and about the perv update i dint like it a bit Dead oh oh!! you too LOL
hate sally n also millind now...he shud hav shared his past with prachi...poor soul is going through soo much, and everyone knows about them except her..this really is SICK...HE loved sally? i neva thought they had physical intimacyDeadbuh yeah wateva.i wanna just know the past ASAP lol...so plzz update soon cant wait for the next part...He had shared his past with Prachi yaar just not all the intimate details that Prachi is getting to know more and more now. Who would talk about all that to his wife? I will update soon and you will know all about it.
u r an amazing ff writer..plz keep going :D
Thanks for your appreciation hun.
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonakap1

Hello Divya, Hi Sona

You seem to be the firm believer of coming back with a bang...The silence this time was looong but you made up for it with the stunner of the update. Thanks hun. It took me a long time to write this update though.  And going by the comments, you seem to have created a ruckus with Milind bashing on its all time high. I am here not in this category but still feel strongly that Milind has let the situation go from bad to worse by his silence on the topic of the truth about his relationship with Sally. Yes, Milind bashing is on a all-time high LOL. Poor guy. I will stir it a bit more before sorting things out LOL. I am glad you are still giving him a chance Wink but you are right. He is entirely to blame to let the situation go out of control.

Milind though not of any relevance came out clean to Prachi regarding his deception on their first outing in Ooty. He was even completely honest with Prachi about being in physical relationship with Sally and other girls also. But where it matters most, more so because his past is an integral and important part of his and Prachi's present and future, he has kept her in dark.  Why so? Agreed that he didn't know that Sally was in love with him, but he was. So why did he impress on Prachi about she being the first girl he fell in love with? What was and is he afraid of? A lot of questions for Milind to answer. Lets see how he explains himself out of this. Just wait till the next update. 

Every time Prachi sees Milind and Sally she gets more and more glimpses of how they were. And this I feel is what is making Prachi more and more insecure. How long could she take it and the party with all the comments and the chemistry which was blatantly visible to everyone seems to be the last straw and now Prachi's distress has reached its peak and she has now started questioning her place in Milind's life. She has started feeling like an outsider. This is the worst that can happen in any relationship.Very true and Milind is very much to be blamed for this situation. Though Prachi knew that Milind's and Sally's relationship was no casual one, finding all the intimate details has rattled her to the core. Milind is guilty for hiding the few important details. Lets see what he does to save his marriage.

Prachi really needs all the consolation and assurance and Milind is the only one who can provide it. And he needs to start with coming out clean about what he really and truthfully felt for Sally. Prachi deserves the truth. The way he reacted on Sally arrival at the party, shows he is still holding on to his past even if in a small way. I always felt that Sally needs the closure to move on, looks like even Milind needs his closure.  You are right, Sona. Milind is the only one who can reassure Prachi and it will more than just reassurance. He needs to spill it all...bare his soul to her. He had lots of explanations to give. As for closure, i will cover it later in the story.

Prachi sadly has no one to share her insecurities with. This relationship is just about short of falling apart, unless they sit down and TALK.  Hopefully the next update will bring that on. A bit more patience hun. As I said, i will stir it a bit more and then sit down and sort it all out. Trust me!! WinkWink

Hugs...take care...luv...Sona You take care too. And I so behind on my long pm. Will do it asap. Luv u Hug

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Durs

hi divya
 
I am new to this forum but still  i read all ur ff from the beginning it was really awesome Hiya, welcome to the forum and I am glad you are reading and liking this FF.
 
i really liked the way u express the feeling of  both prachi and milind
 
really nice update soon i cant wait Smile Thanks again. will update very soon. Ta

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