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Tomorrow Full of Promises4 MichiFF Note pg100 1/4 (Page 29)

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 4:28am | IP Logged

Excellent update loved it

plz continue soon
Thanks for pm me

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 6:10am | IP Logged
amazing part divya cont soon
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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 9:33am | IP Logged
amazing part , way beyond words. loved each and every word. Felling bad for Shally, she was behaving just lake another girl, din't realize her love for Milind n when he moved on in life she realise his place in her life. really felling bad for her i wish she'll find her true love in Mark and moved on in life like Milind , after all Milind and Prachi are made for each other. Prachi poured her heart out to her parents was nice, Inder really missed his daughter that was so touchy. Poor Milind has to work so hard, but still very energetic. Great part continue soon.
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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
Hey Divya,

As always the update was fantastic. Though the way Milind reacted to Prachi in the start did put me off a little. So did not like his patronizing attitude towards Prachi. He is always handling her with kid's gloves when it comes to sharing things with her. He cribs that Prachi keeps things from him, isn't he always doing the same? He knows very well how Prachi feels about being alone in the house. Milind should have been more sensitive here. He could have at least walked with her to the bedroom. He also knows that Sally is a sensitive issue for Prachi but he always forgets it when it comes to it. What is most ironical here is that both Milind and Inder are almost same when it comes to handling Prachi. They want her to be child-like or mature at their own convenience. I think its time for Prachi to start growing in strength. This obviously cannot happen overnight but she certainly needs to grow in confidence.

Vicky continues to be the calm, balanced and rationale being. Milind should take a leaf out of his book and learn to control his temper and stay calm.

Sally's anguish was so palpable that it was but obvious for Prachi to wonder at to what has happened. And the fact that Milind looked troubled went ahead to cement that thought. With so much still lingering between them Prachi will continue to see familiarity and intimacy in Sally and Milind's every action and word unless this whole issue is once and for all out in open and she could talk about what she feels. Sally seems to have finally realized that what she had with Milind or what she could have is now gone forever and there is no looking back, the bridge has been burnt for good. With this realization hopefully she will move forward in her life. Micky is such a great friend, though he lent his shoulder to Sally to cry out all her anguish, he rightfully gave her the reality check also.

The feeling of loneliness was so deep for Prachi that all her insecurities went in for an overdrive. The way she was missing every small thing from her earlier life was written superbly. For Prachi the changes after marriage have been huge and all alone she ended up being more lost. The phone conversation between Prachi and Inder was very touching till it steered towards Milind bashing. PL as always was practical and sane. But what is wrong with Inder? He seems to not even care if Prachi marriage hits rock bottom just to prove his point. His hatred towards Milind has completely blinded him. No wonder Pl was shocked…

After all the high running emotions, you winded up the update with perfect naughtiness. Milind is simply incorrigible and Prachi has still a long way before she is one up on Milind.

Continue soon…Take care…Hugs and hugs

Sona
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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
Another wonderful update Divya.  Love the way your are building the story and the different relationships in it.   Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 9:16am | IP Logged
nice update:D
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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 4:10am | IP Logged
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Divya update karo  plssssssss

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