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Posted: 17 April 2011 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
WOW meri chupi rustam!! haaye... my heart was pounding faster than steam engine!! it was soo sexy! I could just picturize the whole scene on maneet in my head dear! I fell in love - wait no lust ROFL just kidding.

well if this was ur first attempt and you hadn't even proofread it - you did a  damn good job daadi!!! you are a daadi at this. why haven't you written more. I see every day what you write and I see it in you. too bad i didn't think to ask u this before now! you have a knack for weeding out bad from good and you have a very unique vision.

I loved the fact that I am reading your OS 4 months after you wrote it and it still feels so fresh. It's as if it can be used even now! Oh I wish I get to see this scene in the show some day.

write MORE gurl!! you've left me craving for more!

Compete for the tell-a-story contest!

You'll get my vote for sure!

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Posted: 17 April 2011 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
It was a wonderful OS i must say.....I hope u will continue it.....

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Posted: 17 April 2011 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
thank you goldie for the lovely comments....
 
and thank you jyoti!

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Posted: 17 April 2011 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
beautifully written. do keep writing.:)

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Posted: 17 April 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
No need to edit. steaming hot!

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Its An Amazing OS
Superb

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