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OS- Mood Swings

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
First ever OS.....did not edit....so please bear with meLOL Hope u all like it...please comment.....
 
 
Maan had bought Geet a beautiful designer sari which was black, embroidered with blue and silver; Geet stood in front of the mirror closely looking at the blouse of the sari, looking a little upset; at the mansion Maan was pacing around in his room putting his shirt on then his coat and finally his a tie. Both Maan and Geet were to go to Mr. Chopra's anniversary party. Mr. Chopra had returned to India a few weeks back and had called up Maan that he wanted him and his secretary to attend his wedding anniversary party and wanted to catch up with them. Mr. Chopra did not know that Geet was Maan's fiance and had still referred to Geet as his partner and secretary.

Maan and Geet were already running late and Maan's anger levels were rising because Geet did not seem to come out of her room. So while he waited for Geet he started to read over some files that he had left to check for work. He didn't feel like starting up an argument and wanted to leave for the party in a good mood as he sat on his chair looking over files, Geet was in her room trying on her blouse and still looked out of mood and sad. She looked here and there at her stomach and felt weird. Then she picked up her sari and covered herself a bit trying to wear it in a different style. At first she herself had no idea of why she was gloomy and was out of mood. She angrily threw the sari on her bed and walked to the bathroom and washed her face. At the same time she started to wonder what Maan will say when he finds her not ready!?

Out in the hall Maan was in his office constantly looking up at the stairs angrily thinking what is taking Geet so long to get ready. So he angrily got up to make his way towards Geet's room. Geet in her room came out wiping her face with the towel and once again began examining herself in the blouse. Geet only had on her blouse and lengha of the sari only revealing her waist and back she twisted and turned again irritated.

Maan finally made his way to the door, as it was left open he slowly walked in and was totally mesmerized at Geet's beauty. Geet was so busy examining herself in the mirror that she did not realize that Maan was in the room lost staring at her. Maan slowly in a trance walked towards her as he was captured by a beautiful angel in front of him. As Geet kept blabbling to herself, Maan came slowly behind and slowly grabbed her from the waist startling her. For a second Geet's breathing had stopped and she had closed her eyes; finally, she slowly opened her eyes and saw Maan in the mirror behind her. She was so embarrassed and shy at the same time that she couldn't move from that spot. Geet's body had frozen, but Maan's warm hands on her bare waist burned every inch of that area. Her breathing had increased and her heart rate did as well. She felt as though her heart will thump straight out of her chest. Maan looked at her passionately and at the same there was a glimpse of naughtiness shining in his eyes. He moved his hands to her back, gently moving Geet's hair to the side over her right shoulder. His every touch was torture for Geet and every time she felt his warm fingers she closed her eyes as if she was being electrocuted every time. Slowly Maan brought his face closer to Geet's back and slowly touched it with his lips teasing her as though he was gonna kiss it. As he brushed his lips gently on her back he got closer to her face and his grip on her waist tightened. Now Maan's face was closer to Geet's ear he once again tortured Geet by brushing his lips to her ears. Geet felt her heart pouncing harder and before Maan could torture her anymore she quickly loosened himself out of his grip and buried her face in his chest hugging him. Maan responded to the hug by burying his in Geet's silky hair. Both stayed in that position for a few minutes and finally slowly got out from the hug. Maan had finally snapped out and covered Geet up with the sari. Geet's mood for a few minutes had changed but she once again was upset and moody. Before Maan could ask her what was wrong, Geet starts to cry.

Maan looks at Geet confused thinking what he had done that she started to cry.

Maan- Why are you crying geet?

Geet- You covered me up because I look fat in this blouse?

Maan angry- Fat geet? Oh don't be silly and get ready we have to got the party we are already late cause of you!

Geet- I don't want to go to any party; how can I walk out of this house when I look so fat!

Maan sighed- Geet you are not fat, you are gorgeous and with this sari you will look very good.

Geet cries louder like a baby- So you think I will only look good with the sari on? I won't look hot?

Maan loses his cool and slowly pulls her towards him passionately, Geet tries to get out of his hold, but Maan slowly walks with her backing her against a wall.

Maan- chup, bilcool chup.

And that was Geet's first hormonal mood swing from her pregnancy!



Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 24 December 2010 at 6:23pm

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 6:12pm | IP Logged
VAo shivi that was hot....hope we see this

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
aww what a cute OS! great job!

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 6:18pm | IP Logged
WOW..
AWESOME FIRST ATTEMPT
LOVED IT..
Awhh soo romantic lol
But geet and her mood swings lol
haha
Loved it!!!
Amazing!

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
Super Hot & Super Cute just like U
loved it..& hope its just the beginning & we get to read more from you

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
Nice one.  I liked it very much. 
Hope you are going to continue/

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
Wow Shivu...

this is fantastic...

now you know what you will do in your break...

when you have nothing..else to do..you can do this..

make everyone's heart race with such pieces...

i loved it...

do write....you are my star...!!

God Bless..!!

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