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jyothi_cool IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 9:08am | IP Logged
suchio amazing part loved it

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anjubala IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Wow..scene 7 is so nice, romantic....Thanks Suchi

See who we have here - Lamya...Hey Lamya how are you and how is your trip going on?

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prajee Senior Member

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 10:10am | IP Logged
suchi.... last part was as usual wonderful..
i wish that dream could have come real...
keep rocking... Smile

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milee1014 Goldie

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Oh Suchi dearest, you made my day. This was a dream come true. You know me, Anju & Zarmeen were talking about this just last week before the bike ride scene that all of them should go on road trip. You made our dream come true in such a brilliant way.
You are so good with the characters, you never deter from their nature.
The last scene is soo simply romantic.
Thank you sweetheart for a wonderful retreat, I was dying from friday thinking what you might be writing.

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Paramore IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
wow Di you are amazing love your each and every scene thnx again

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salekh1 Senior Member

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
SmileSmilecant wait for the next chapter..
You write very WellTongue
NivRen ROCKKKKTongueEmbarrassedWink

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Suchi- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 1:40pm | IP Logged

Scene 8

An hour had passed when niveditha asked viren to leave. They found the rest of the family getting prepared to sleep. Yashodhara and Bhupat proceeded inside the RV to the master bedroom followed by chanchal and Jawahar who took the side room.

Vandana was helped by sidharth , who pulled down the sofa and extended it, which turned into a comfortable twin size bed. He handed her couple of blankets and placed a two-liter water bottle near her.

Thum dono kahan so-ogay she asked

Ma main aur viren tent main so-engay he replied excited.  Who bhi kafi acha hai, divya tho already sarah kuch set ker rahi hai , sonay ke liye.

Vandana smiled happily seeing her son finally move on with his life and started a fresh with Divya.

Han teekh hai jao she replied.

Both the tents were tied up to the floor by the aluminum rods. It was quite spacious inside letting at least 5 people in easily. Niveditha and Divya both were not at all for the idea of sleeping inside a tent. Sidharth and Viren tried convincing them but they both did not push the matter much. It was clear that their comfort level with each other was not that good, or at the level where they could share a tent.

Divya and Niveditha, went inside the RV both of them sat on nivi's section, talking.

Di, hum kithnay dinon kay baad aise batain ker rahe hain na, exclaimed Niveditha happily

Han nivi, said divya though lost in her own thoughts. She was peeking glances through the window at the tent , wishing to see sidharth. Nivi noticed this

Di, agar ithna hi miss ker rahi ho tho jao na tent main she laughed

Shut up Nivi, blushed divya, mujhe neend aa rahi hai she said annoyed

They did not realize when their eyes fell asleep but as soon as it did, strong hands woke them up.

Uto , 7 baj gaye hain said viren to niveditha

Sidharth had also joined viren in the wife-waking mission. Something about the trip had changed him. He seemed to open up a bit more which, Divya loved.

They both freshened up and went outside to find the entire family up and about having breakfast. Slightly embarrassed about them being up late.

Aaj humnay ek beautiful plan banaya hai

Ma, papa aap aur vandana chachi sky ride kerengay aur hum youngsters , yanay ki

Main , bhaiyyah, Divya bhabi aur niveditha jayengay

Para gliding!

He announced to the all.

Nahi nahi viren, para gliding kaise , mujhe dar lagega.. please nahiā€¦ said niveditah scared by the very thought.

Aur mujhe unchai sey dar lagtha hai retorted divya turning pale

Hum hongay na, aap dono akele kahan kernay walay ho gliding. Viren argued, but to no avail. Divya and Nivi refused point blank to do para gliding.

Viren and Sidharth put on a blue helmet and a black jacket that was equipped to be securely fit into the paraglide. They brought up the wing on top of the head feeling the wing through their risers. The wing was floating in a perfect position with the air underneath it. Still their feet on the ground they let go of the raisers and leaned forwarded in the torpedo position and started running.  Soon enough the wing went up into the air carrying viren and sidharth in their separate paraglide.

It was a wondrous feeling , their heart lifted as if about to come out of their mouth.

Viren could see the legs below him suspended in mid air a feeling that he had never felt before. They were flying over the lush green hills feeling the wind gushing forth on their bodies. Everything seemed so small from that height. Only a few more minutes and he would reach and catch the clouds in his hands or may be bring some of the sky wrapped into his hand for her.

They flew around the valley enjoying its view for a few more minutes and then noticed Niveditha and Divya waving at them. Oh how he wished that he was with him, in his arms enjoying the air and how beautiful would it have been when he could feel her hair on his face. Finally they would have been alone, all alone in the skies like free birds, cuddling their feathers in the mid air and letting the air lift them up in their own dream world. The world of their own that was underneath them and the sky that was in their embrace!

It was time for both to come down, they both pulled the raisers down and the wings started descending. Soon they glided down and when about to hit the ground they got out of their seat to make their legs to touch the ground and then started running, while pulling the break. The glide came to a halt, both nivi and divya made a run towards them congratulating them on their adventure.

Flushed with excitement viren, sidharth, headed towards their RV as it was time for them to now leave towards their next destination chamba then to manali

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prajee Senior Member

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
wow suchi... thanks a ton..
u made my weekend gr8... Smile

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