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Weekened Retreat 5 specialscene pg10 NivrenManiacs (Page 6)

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anjubala

Thanks Suchi..wonderful scenes... I love the idea of road trip.. 
Merry Christmas to all of my dear friends.
Merry chrishmas Anju and Suchi

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
In havaon ko tho ye ni'mat  naseeb aaye.. Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming......
 
Nivi can anticipate nearly ALL of Viren movesLOL..this trip is jst tooo cute.....waitn to read som romantic mments betwn them..Embarrassed..After all they r wet WinkTongue

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 8:42pm | IP Logged
@rach.. sorry abotu the slow update was really busy I am going to update now..:) and you too anju thanks for reading : )!!!

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
OMGG suchi .It's 2 adventurous as i was feeling like screaming along wid NiviRen n Sidhya .hehee lol .
 
awwww my naughty hero sweetipieee cutiee ziddi baccha , He says ki " mera haath mat chodna mujhe uchai se daar lagta h " LOL .Yaarr usse koi bataye ki VIREN SOOD ko kisi se daar nahi lagta na apni dadi se na nivi ki dadi se LOL (fri ko hi toh keh raha tha vo LOL )

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 11:00pm | IP Logged

Scene 6

Vandana started waving eagerly, her face lit with excitement, towards the oncoming couples and jawahar.

 

Sidharth, who was now holding divya's hand rushed up to his mother , dragging her along.

 

Ma, aapnay wakay main hi miss ker diya. Kithna maza aya tha aaj, he went on

Ithna maza tho mujhe papa kay saath aya tha jab hum trecking per gaye thay. Yaad hai ma? He continued upon which Vandana's face turned a bit sad but she composed herself very quickly

 

Meray khayal main humay luch kerlena chahiye, aur phir hum bilaspur sey Dalhousie ki taraf niklayngay. Suggested viren

 

Niveditha thum aur Divya andhar ja ker apnay kapray badal lo, kahin tand na lag jaye, vandana urged them towards the RV.

 

Han han chalo chalo , rushed viren with them

 

Thum kahan chalay asked vandana, holding his ears dragging him back

 

Are tayiji main bhi tho bheeg gaya hun. Kiyun big bro, kya hum change nahi karayn? Humain bhi tho tand lag sakthi hai 'kiyun bhai? He asked sidharth.

 

Han ma.. main bhi chaltha hun started sidharth and threw vandana off guard. This was the first time she had seen sidharth being so expressive about his feelings in a long time.

 

Then she went ahead and pulled his ears as well

Pehlay undono ko badalnay do phir thum chalay jana, badmash kahin kay she laughed out '

 

oo.. ouch'ka..aan cried both Viren and Sidharth together.

 

Nivi and Divya rushed inside giggling both red in faces and not making eye contacts with each other. They were too embarrassed to talk so they took out their clothing form their bags and went into the bathrooms and changed.

 

Vandana came inside and passed some sitting chairs and mats to be placed outside.

Viren and sidharth came inside to get changed. They approached the kitchen counter where they found Niveditha and Divya busy with vandana helping the cook prepare their lunch.

 

Sidharth while passing through the counter made an eye contact with divya who looked away from him turning red continued helping vandana.

 

A few minutes later , the entire place was set for lunch. Bhupat rai was being helped by Yashodhara joined by Chanchal and jawahar who were sitting on a separate mat near them.


The front of the RV was automatically pushed in to reveal an opening that linked the inside kitchen with the outside. Niveditha was standing behind the counter and giving out things for the others to enjoy. Viren who decided to help niveditha, took the filled plates of food to everyone.


It was a very nice moment. Bhupat rai seemed to be enjoying this scenery rather than the lush green mountains of Himachal. The thought of his family together gave him more content than anything in the world.


After an hour, everyone climbed inside the RV to head towards Dalhousie passing via bilaspur.


Dalhousie

Humain abhi Dalhousie pahunchnay main teen sey char ghantay lag sakthay hain. Depend kertha hai traffic per announced the driver for the general knowledge of all members abhi panch baj rahe hain tho jathay jathay 9 baj jayengay raath kay he continued.


Meray khayal main humayn thori dair rest ker lena chahiye , vandana suggested to everyone. Everyone took their seats and started getting comfortable.


Sidharth urged divya to sit besides him


Divya who usually loved his company, and made excuses to be with him, tried avoiding him and went near chanchal and started talking with her. Sidharth glared at her confused and turned back to a magazine that was lying in front of him.


Niveditha ,went back to her seat and found viren laying comfortably with his legs stretched and eyes closed. She did not wish to disturb him but was very exhausted.


Viren, she called out slowly but then she noticed that he had ear phones plugged in his ears. She slowly pulled up off and viren opened flickered his eyes open.


Oh sorry, maine dekha nahi.. aao baito he called her immediately pulling his legs towards himself.


Nividetha smiled at him and slowly sat down. She kept her legs on her side and tried to get as comfortable as she could with that position.


Viren , who had noticed her behavior, shook his head with exasperation and touched her legs attempting to place them in front of her so that she could get comfortable. Niveditha quickly reacted


Ye kya ker rahe ho, she said looking around wishing that no one had seen them.


Don't worry koi nahi dekhega saray busy hain thum please apnay paon upper rakh lo warna mujhe rakhna parega zaberdasti.


Niveditha placed her legs in front of her but she folded them in an unusual manner not wishing for them to touch his legs. Viren put his index finger on his lips and touched her legs , she gave them a slight jerk


SHhhh.. Viren asked her to hush while he pulled her legs towards him and placed them on his right side and he himself extended his towards her right. He then pushed open a button that revealed a drinking slide table that rose up on the open side of the sofa bed.  He placed two glasses filled with two juices and offered one to Niveditha who politely refused with a nod. Viren urged her to drink it when she sneezed out loud.


Oh ! thumhay tho zukham ho gaya hai.. He said in a worried tone.


He got out of his side and rushed towards the cabinet and returned with medicine.


Main tee'tee.. aaachu'.tekh hun she said with a loud sneeze


Han dikh raha hai, retorted viren annoyed and shoved the tablets onto her hands, and placing the glass of juice in front of her. Niveditha,  knew better than to argue simply took the medicine


Viren took out a blanket and placed it on her and asked her lay down comfortably.


Viren main teek hun niveditha tried arguing but viren hushed her and pointed her to close her eyes and sleep.


It was may be few hours later, Niveditha woke up with a start as the RV gave a sudden jerk. They had come to a hault. It seemed like they had reached Dalhousie. The outside sky was dark but they had parked in a special parking area that had been reserved by viren ahead of time. Niveditha looked for viren and found him helping others get off the RV. She quickly got up, folded the blanket and placed it on top of the bed. She rushed off towards the exit and apologized to vandana profusely only to be told off by her.


Nivi , thum bhi na, acha kiya viren nay ki thumnay nahi utaya' abhi kaisa mahsoos ker rahi ho? sar dard aur zukham kuch kam hua? Vandana asked kindly caressing her head.


Han chachiji main acha feel ker rahi hun abh. She replied.


Nivi, thu teekh hai na came the voice of divya behind her. Viren nay mujhe teray paas anay sey sakhth mana ker diya tha. Main tho dekhna chahthi thi ki kahin thumhay bukhar tho nahi hai, lekin voh khudh hi paas baita raha aur hum main sey kisi ko bhi thumhaaray paas anay hi nahi diyaa.. she continued


Niveditha felt grateful towards viren's behavior. His care had increased hundreds folds after they had gotten married. There wasn't a day that passed when he hadn't tried to help her or taken care of her.


Then viren came up to her and asked her about her health. After reassuring himself by touching her forehead, he allowed her to get down.


She was greeted with fresh cool breeze, a cloudless sky and a brilliantly blazing silver moon. There was a green area where viren had already set up 2 huge tents and in the middle there was a campfire lit, burning intensely.


Viren and sidharth helped everyone to settle down. All of them had dinner served by the resort caterers.


Viren! Wow kya planning ki hai. Said sidharth taking a hot sizzling burger onto his plate and helping himself to smoking corn.


Viren patted himself on his back but his mind was all on niveditha. He came towards her with food and offered it to her.


Mujhe bhuk nahi hai viren she said.


But viren insisted that either she eats it or he would force feed her.


Kabhi kabhi thumnay na bachon ki tarah zid kerkay manana pertha hai , he said annoyed.


Main aur zid? Replied niveditha raising her eyebrows in surprise.


Main bachon ki tarah behave kerthi hun? She said


Viren gave her an annoyed look and niveditha understood that, it was not the right time for her to argue with him. There was sadness in her heart that she couldn't quite explain. After eating few morsels she left to wash her hands and then moved away from the hustle and bustle of the family.


Viren had chosen the best place, she thought as she saw a beautiful pond few yards ahead of her. It had the sparkliest shine she had ever seen as if it was not a pond but some one had placed a huge mirror on the floor that reflected the sky onto it.




Edited by Suchi-NivReniac - 25 December 2010 at 11:02pm

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
Typical Viren all concern about his wifey being sick. Embarrassed I like your version of DivSid, they are more fun. Can't wait to find out why Nivi has sadness in her heart. Thanks Suchi for doing this. I am enjoying every scene of your retreat.

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Yup, can't wait to find out why there is sadness in Nivi's heart.. Suchi, dear, this has been a really good retreat. I have been waiting eagerly for each of the next scene

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 12:01am | IP Logged
Woww suchi amazingg. lovedd d scene . continue soon watngg.
Viren is a sweetheart yaar .He waked up whole night just 2 tc of nivi .chhoo sweet.

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