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Weekened Retreat 5 specialscene pg10 NivrenManiacs (Page 5)

shana_83 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Suchi wow...Viren is too cute...he got up so early in the morning...and started waking up a kid. I can imagine how his face would have looked with full of josh...hahahaha
Thanks Suchi awesome.

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Sofna IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 1:26pm | IP Logged

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moniluvskinshuk IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Woww suchi completlyy lovedd all d scenes . watng for next .
n wht 2 say abt Viren yaar ? He is a sweetheart cutee ziddii baachha hehee lol

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Suchi- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 2:48pm | IP Logged


Scene 5


Divya and Sid sat down facing each other on leather sofas. The window on the left was large enough for them to enjoy the view. There was a table in between; on top of it were two mineral water bottles. Both were immersed in conversation then soon were accompanied by vandana who had come up to check up on them, to see if they wanted anything.

Chanchal and jawahar had taken the other seating further down which also had a similar setting except that both were immersed in their own reading. Chanchal was reading a magazine where as jawahar was engaged with the business section of the newspaper.

On the other side of the bus sat yashodhara with Bhupat and lalji was serving him tea.

Viren caught hold of Niveditha's hands and pulled her towards him as she was walking down the aisle. She almost landed on top of him but took control and stood her ground. She brushed his arm off of hers with annoyance. Viren looked at her and indicated her to sit besides him.

Viren had chosen the most private section of the RV for himself. It was at the back end of the RV. A luscious potted indoor plant which was graciously placed on the wooden hedge that played a barrier between the two sections of the RV -blocked the front view which was good as he craved one and only one company and that was of Niveditha's. 

It was also of a similar setting with two leather sofas placed opposite to each other with a table in between. Upon the press of a button the table could go down providing spacious room and then sofas could be easily extended to be combined as one big bed having enough space for two people to comfortably lay on them.

Viren, already had moved the table down and had combined both the sofas into one. Niveditha who was completely unaware of the flexible setting assumed that the current one was fixed and could not be changed.

She sat on the other corner of putting her legs on the side. Viren who had already taken the luxury of extending his legs urged niveditha to do the same.

Come on niveditha, relax hoker baito he said pulling the curtains off the window.


Niveditha, refused and continued to glare out the window avoiding eye contacts. Viren sensed her discomfort and started talking about their destination when Vandana arrived and saw their seating arrangement

Nivi, thum aise kiyun baiti ho, apnay pairon ko upper kerkay baito. Beta comfortable feel karo. Ithna lamba safar kaise , aise bait ker tho, … paun kahi so na jaye.

She said concerned and then offered to help her sit up. Niveditha immediately puller her legs up before vandana could reach them,

Chachiji ye aap kyaker rahi hain, main bait gayi hun she said sitting up now her body facing viren and her face turned towards vandana.

Main bhi tho yah hi keh raha tha tayiji, he said.

Vaise viren us bechari ko araam sey tho baitnay do, thum apna paun faila ker baite hue ho.? vaise , ye vali seat kiyun divya aur sidharth ki tarah nahi hai , she asked him doubtfully

Agay jagah hai , adjust ker lengay , aa jao thum dono, teek tarah araam sey bait tho sakthay ho she suggested.

Nahi… exclaimed viren a bit too suddenly,

I mean nahi tayiji, hum yahan teek hain, he replied carefully. Vahan main nahi chahtha ki humari vajah sey kisi ko koi mushkil ho. hum yahan araam sey hain tayiji.. he explained,

kiyun niveditah,


Niveditha who never wanted anyone to feel any sort of discomfort especially due to her, replied right away agreeing with viren that they were fine here, completely comfortable and with that vandana headed towards her place near Bhupat rai and immerged herself in the travel guide book that viren had purchased for the entire family.

Bach gaye.. viren said to himself.

Kya kaha nivi asked to which viren shook his head and started staring outside the window. Lucious green mountains with ice topped cones, filled their view. They were slowly going up the mountain terrain… viren managed to sneak glances at nividetha and saw that the outstanding beauty mesmerized her.

An hour had passed and the driver had announced that they would arrive at tattapani very soon. 

The RV haulted fifteen minutes. The entire family got down, bhupat being helped by lalji and yashodhara by vandana.

The first sight that that blinded their sight was of beautiful green mountains. Their RV was parked at a high-elevated area from which they could see the river flowing below. It was a known resort for activities such as fishing and river rafting. The blue sky with scattered white clouds lifted their spirits.

Viren moved besides niveditha and slowly pulled off the hair clip that she had placed earlier to avoid her hair flying all over her face.

In havaon ko tho ye ni'mat  naseeb aaye..

Niveditha who was stunned looked around to see if anyone had noticed his act, moved few steps away from him.

Dadaji, Yashodhara, vandana, lalji , Chanchal stayed behind while Divya, Sidharth, Jawahar, NIveditha and Viren headed towards the bridge that ran over water that was known for sulfuric waters.

The bridge was highly elevated and sounds of the fast gushing water below were clearly heard.

Divya held on to Sidharth's arms and started taking very small and slow steps

Sidharth please mujhe nahi chorna mujhe bohot dar lagtha hai unchai sey she screamed closing her eyes

Divya, thum worry nahi karo main huna replied sidharth taking her hands slowly and guiding her forward .

Viren who had been walking behind niveditha waited for her to come near him in similar fashion but when he saw that she wasn't scared of heights as divya was, he quickly ran up to her, held her arms and closed his eyes tight shut.

Niveditha, please mujhe, heights sey bohot dar lagtha hai, please mujhe nahi chorna, mera haath perker ke rakhna. He cried

Niveditha, who knew viren's tactics very well tried to shake him off

Viren! Ye kya ker rahe ho thum. Sabh dekh rahe hain please natak math karo

She whispered to him

Natak , thum baat math karo please, mujhe dekh ker le jao, warna main gir jaaunga he replied holding her even closer.

They all crossed the bridge and reached the other side to find the place where they rented out rafts.

Viren who was still clutching on to Niveditha's arms , felt his shoulders being tapped by someone

Viren! Abh haath chor do, bridge cross ker liya hai humnay Divya said with a snort.

Sidharth and Viren rented a raft that was big enough for all of them. Divya and niveditha both refused to get on it and offered to wait for them but viren and sidharth , dragged them into it.

Viren helped niveditha and sidharth helped divya to put on yellow life jackets and white helmets. Then viren, sidharth and jawahar put on the life jackets and helmet and all of them sat on the yellow raft , each holding a raft.
The water was calm and not white as it was best for those who were trying this for the first time.

The turbulence in the water was very simple but it was enough to give butterfly jitters to beginners like divya and nivi.


As soon as they sat into the raft they got pulled into the stream where the water started splashing onto their faces, with every move. Viren who was sitting next to niveditha held on to the raft , swiftly moving it,  his arms brushing hers harshly against hers.


Niveditha apni aankhay kholo aur raft ko move karo… he screamed as one harsh terrain of water headed towards them.

Niveditha and divya screamed in unison, and rapidly moved their rafts as if trying to save their dear lives.

Sidharth and viren continued steering the rafts helped by jawahar who was never the less enjoying the adventure.

Sidharth chalo bas , chalo please abh aur nahi.. she continued screaming..

Her face wet with water

Sidharth who seemed to be enjoying very much

Ithni jaldi, no way he screamed back , viren chalo he yelled at viren and both of them headed towards more rapids where the river was no longer calmer but raging with force.

Oh nooo… came the scream of divya and niveditha, along with the shouts of sidharth, viren and jawahar as they faced a water only to have their mouths filled with it.

They then reached the calmer part of the river where viren slowly put his arms around niveditha and started rubbing her shoulders calming her, who was taking small breaths as if refusing to believe that it was her, in reality sitting in that raft , doing the most ridiculous thing she had ever done in her life.

Soon they reached the shore and got off, of it.

Oh my God, kya ride tha, right viren , exclaimed sidharth, who unlike his usual composed nature, was screaming with excitement.

He held divya by her waist and lifted her up in the air and swung her around, saying

Woooooooshhhhhh…. What waters yaar…. We HAVE to do this again!!

Divya who was taken aback by this gesture turned bright red ,

Sidharth please calm down , she said back looking at nivi from side ways who had turned her face away in amusement.

Viren who was watching this came running towards niveditha, and she sensing what he was about to do walked fast towards jawahar and started helping him by carrying his belongings.

All five of them headed towards the rentals and returned back the rafts and started towards the RV wanting to tell their family about their experience.

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gmann2010 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
Suchi I am loving this trip. Big smile I loved Viren's antics and couldn't stop laughing when he said he is afraid of heights. That guy can't miss any chance to hold his wife's hand. LOL Your description of the place is amazing, I felt like I was right there. Can't wait for the next.

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 4:55pm | IP Logged
Wow Mindblowing Suchi you are awesome love you for this sweetu but you are moving too slow

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salekh1 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 5:08pm | IP Logged
OMGGGG.. u are an amazing, wonderful, outstanding writer..
Canttt waitttttt for the next chapter.......TongueTongueTongueTongue

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anjubala IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 6:57pm | IP Logged
Thanks Suchi..wonderful scenes... I love the idea of road trip.. 
Merry Christmas to all of my dear friends.

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