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Weekened Retreat 5 specialscene pg10 NivrenManiacs (Page 4)

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 11:42am | IP Logged
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Scene 4

On the Road to Tattapani


Viren waited eagerly in his room , looking out the door every now and then checking to see if Niveditha had come to pack their suitcases. He had already placed three huge suitcases on the bed. He opened the closet and started moving his finger along niveditha's clothing. With a smile on his face, he took out some of his favorite sarees that he thought looked best on Niveditha.  Placing them one by one on the bed, he continued looking for more dresses,


Yaar ! he exclaimed frustrated to himself


Niveditha ke paas tho koi bhi shalwar kameez nahi hai.. lagtha hai saray udhar chachaji kay ghar per hai.. he said to himself in a thoughtful manner.

Hmm '


Viren! Came the voice of niveditha'


Ye kya ker rahe ho thum? She asked looking at the mess he had created


Packing aur kya he replied casually.


Viren hum sirf  ek hafthayke liye ja rahe hain, saal bhar ke liye nahi , she replied looking anxious


Abh mujeh ye sabh kuch tay kerna parega'. She started fidgeting here and there, not knowing where to start.


 

Niveditha, Niveditha, calm down, idhar aao , baito'aur suno,


He took her by her shoulders and made her sit on the bed, but not before moving some of the sarees and throwing them on the other side of the bed to make some space as there was not an inch left on the bed, for sitting.


He smiled sheepishly ..


Ahem, amm han , dekho, hum kithni jagah ghoomaingay aur, wahan per ithni saari activities hongi ki ho saktha hai thumhay dresses ki zaroorat par jaaye. He tried explaining.


Per viren! Vahan aisa kya hoga ki mujhe 10 saariyan change kerni parengi ek din main? She tried reasoning with him


Ok dekho for example, jahan hum jayengay wahan per jharna ho saktha hai aur, pani hai tho, hum chahengay na ki usmain bheegay..I mean thum chahogi ki thum bheego.. tho phir kapray geelay bhi ho jayengay, phir kya geelay kapron main thum pura din rahogi kya? He reasoned back


 

Mujhe jharnay main nahi bheegna' she replied main door sey hi dekh  lungi..

She replied'


Kya? Thum na ghar per hi baito.. koi zaroorat nahi hai humaray saat aanay ke liye aur main bhi nahi jaaunga.. ek kaam kertha hun pura trip cancel ker detha hun.. viren got up angrily and faced the other way folding his arms.


Niveditha got up besides him and touched his shoulders, trying to get his attention. Viren brushed his hands off and further turned his body away from her refusing to listen.


Ok teekh hai, in saari sarees ko rakh lo, abh kush she replied defeated.


Ok teekh hai viren said turning at once.


Viren, abh thum jaker Band-Aid leker aajana, she reminded him. Tab tak main sari packing finish ker lungi.


Ok replied viren and left the room leaving Niveditah to stare at the mess he had created completely exasperated!


Later that evening vandana had called everyone to the living room to discuss the travel plan. Viren being the head in charge of the entire trip ticked off the list of to-dos as vandana read them out loud. There was a small argument as to who was to drive. Viren wanted to drive but sidharth reasoned with him saying that the trip would be too tiring and he needs to enjoy it with the family. They ended up setting up a driver with the condition that viren would drive some part of it. The entire family dispersed agreeing to wake up early in the morning.


 

The next day, Viren woke up with a start, pulled off his blankets of his face and opened his eyes, but shut them right away.


Niveditha!! Nividetha jaldi aao he screamed.


Nivi who had been sleeping peacefully also woke up startled and rushed towards him ..


Kya hua viren, she huffed up


Viren opened his eyes


Thumhay pata hai na ki main sabsey pehlay thumhay dekhna chahtha hun. THum ithni late kiyun uti, aaj kithna bara anarth honay jaa raha tha! he cried flabbergasted


Viren! Screamed niveditha extremely annoyed


Abhi subah kay 4:30 hain! Please so jao ' she said sleepily and then dragged herself back to the bed.


Viren who had gotten up from his sofa took her by her hand


No! abhi koi sona nahi hai, rasthay main so lena. Go and fresh up ho jao main jaaker sabhi ko utatha hun.. with that viren ran off the room


NIvidetha tried stopping him by running after him but viren had already beat her up to it. Moments later she could hear banging on the door and angry noises started to erupt all over the mansion.


Viren arrived back into the room with an annoyed expression


Kisi ko bhi punctuality ka matlab hi nahi pata hai is ghar per! He retorted angrily.

Niveditha knew better than to argue with him and started to head towards the bathroom.

 

Three hours later everyone was gathered in the living room ready to leave. All the bags were packed and placed inside the RV. Sidharth and Viren helped BHupat rai to get inside the RV. They made him sit on the most comfortable recliner. Yashodhara sat besides him and the rest of the family followed them inside trying to find spaces for themselves.




Edited by Suchi-NivReniac - 25 December 2010 at 12:25pm

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
God !! Viren is such a baby !! Cute one though !! LOLEmbarrassed A very sweet scene and I can totally imagine Nivi's expression seeing all the mess he created !! loved it Suchi ! Can't wait for the next one !! Smile

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
wow suchi... i am still awake waiting for ur retreat.... :)
thanks a ton dear... yet to read... Wink

OMG... suchi u r gr8... :) awesome...
pls continue... i can be awake whole night for the upcoming scenes.. loving it..


Edited by prajee - 25 December 2010 at 12:56pm

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Suchi thanks for a cute NivRen scene. You have captured current state of NivRen relationship and their characters so well, I can picture them arguing like that. I have one request, please make them play antakshari on the road. Pretty please with cheery on top. Big smile

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Suchi hun are we getting a Scene 5 soon Big smile

Too excited reading the first 4, so can't wait hunLOL


Edited by SnehaNivRenFan - 25 December 2010 at 12:59pm

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Posted: 25 December 2010 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
amazing........thank you for a lovely christmas morning surprise...it was beautifully written....cant wait to read more......wishing you and your family a merry christmas as well...

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