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FF: Love Is Worth The Fall updt pg 29 (Page 12)

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lilymisshi

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Recap: Mehak turned to look at Maan... she started to make a noise aaauuu as if to say hello...

She's your daughter...             

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Yes sir... this is Mehak my daughter...

Geet you have a daughter and you've never told me about it... how could you hide such a big thing from me... he was virtually shouting at the top of his voice...

Sir... why the hell are you shouting...

Why didn't you tell me you have a daughter...?

Why am I supposed to tell my boss that I have a daughter... my personal life is no interest of yours... how should it matter to you and more importantly why should it be a matter of concern for you... I don't need to go about telling my personal life to every second person...

Geet... I am no second person... you owe me an explanation...

No i don't ... who are you to me... no one...

Mehak started crying...

Pinky takes Mehak inside...

Who's the father...?

Who the hell are you to ask me that...?

Who's dev...?

It's none of your business...

Answer me damn it... who is dev...

Enough... leave... go from here...

I'm not going until i get my answers...

What answers... I'm not entitled to answer you...

Geet... don't test my patience... just tell me who the father is

No Mr Maan Singh Khurana you stop testing my patience... just cuz i work for you doesn't mean I'll buy this bu*****t..

GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET......Pinky came running to her... channi is on hold...

Tell her I'll give her a call later...

Geet it's important... it's about your grand father...

What...pinky handed geet her cell...

Hello...

Geet... darji hospital mein hain... tujh se milna chahete hain...

What happened... how...when...?

Geet... he doesn't have much time...

I'll be there as soon as i can...

Pinky i have to go...

Where are you going...?

Dadu is hospitalised... i have to go...

Geet...you can't... they'll kill you...

I have to go...

 Before pinky could say another word geet left from there in a cab...

Damn it they'll kill her...

Who will kill her...maan said... who are you talking about...

dev...

Who the hell is he...?

He's mehak's father...he'll kill her if he sees her... please stop her from going... please...

Maan didn't hear another word and rushed for the bus stop...

He saw geet standing near the ticket counter... he pulled her out of the crowd...

Are you insane... when you know your life will be in danger if you go there then why are you...?

My dadu is hospitalised... I have to go...

No... you won't...

I will...he's my dadu... he's the only person who ever loved me in my family... my own parents wanted to kill me, he was the one because of whom I am alive... I am going...

But you are not going alone... I'll come with you...

You don't have to...

I don't have to but I want to... get in the car...

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For maan it didn't matter if geet had a daughter... her safety was his priority... he didn't need any more answers... he knew dev was the father... he knew dev wanted to kill geet...now he could figure out what yash and geet were talking about... he knew why she ran, why see didn't want to talk about dev...Now that he knew, he will never let anyone harm geet... he would protect her... he would be with her, for her always...

Geet ... I'm sorry... i over reacted... i shouldn't have asked you all those questions... I'm sorry...

She remained quite... 

I'm sorry... please talk to me...

 She still didn't say anything...

Geet... please...

Why does everything has to be so complicated... why can't life be simple...

Its life... nothing is always simple... you have to make it simple...

Geet looked at him... she didn't know why but she felt better... safer...

They didn't talk for the rest of the journey...

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Geet... tu aa gayi... thank god... chal mere saath...

Channi..dadu kaise hain...

Wo tujhe dekhna chahete hain... chal...

Kya hua ruk kyun gayi...

Agar kissi ne tujhe dekh liya to... sun tu hospital ke piche aa mein tujhe wahin milungi... I'll find a way to get you in without letting them know...

Thek hai...

They were on the backside of hospital now... channi took them to the ward where dadu was admitted...

Darji....

Geet puttar...andar aa... tu kaisi hai... tujhe dekhne ko ankeen taras gayi thi...

Main teek hun dadu...

Tujhe dekh liya ab sukoon se rab ke paas ja sakta hoon...

Aap aisa kyun bol rahe hain dadu... apko ko kuch nahi hoga...

Beta ek na ek din to jaana hi tha na... tu bas apna khyal rakhna... Mehak kaise hai...

Teek hai...  

Puttar ji... kuch bhi ho jaye kabhi bhi dev aur brij pe yakeen mat karna...

Geet shook her head...

Darji looked at the man standing next to Geet...he made a gesture asking who he was...

He's a friend of mine dadu...Maan... when Geet introduced Maan as a friend and not as her boss Maan felt a tinge of happiness... she considered him a friend...

Dadu smiled at Maan... he noticed something in his eyes... the way Maan looked at Geet... dadu was sure it's something more than friendship from his side to say the least...

Dadu asked channi to give him a pen and paper... he wrote something... he handed it to Geet...

Puttar isse tab padhna jab tujhe koi raasta najar na aaye... jab tu bilkul akela feel kare... tujhe apne aap rasta mil jayega...

Geet hugged dadu...

Aab ja beta... isse pehle ki dev ya brij aa jayen tu jaa...

Geet kissed him on the forehead and left with Maan...

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Some 20 km from pathankot they stopped at a dhaba to have lunch...

Geet please stop crying... please...

She couldn't take it any longer... she hugged him... hugged him real tight... he hugged her back... she needed him as a friend...

Why does everything have to be so complicated... why I always loose the ones I love... I see my life running out of my hand and I can't do anything to save it... first rano and now dadu... she started to cry even hard... his shirt was wet with tears...

He held her face with his hands...Geet look in my eyes... you're not that weak... your one strong girl... don't give up on your life so easily... it's complicated because its life... nothing is always simple... life is not easy... you have to make it easy... you are not alone...

After some time she broke away from his embrace... thank you...

Geet do you consider me a friend...

She nodded..

Then you'll never say that word again... no more thank you...

She smiled...

If you are done shall we head for Delhi...

Yes sir...

I have a name... no more sir when we are not in office... leave your formalities for the office ...

I'll keep that in mind... sir...uh...i mean maan

Hearing his name for the first time from her... it sounded like music to him...

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Delhi was another 600 km away and their car ran out of gas...the nearest gas station was 35 km behind in gurdaspur... they had no option left, it was already dark... they decided they'd spend the night in the car and find help in the morning...

Ok that's it...Smile

Precap....they walk and walk and walk and walk...

I am sort of confused...do you want me to unravel her past or give it some more time... next update will be up in another 3 hours...

Plz give suggestions...Smile

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by melody_quest

thats again a fantastic update

u r a terrific writer.........

amazing.i am loving ur ff

actually addicted to it


keep writing

plzz cont soon

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 7:02am | IP Logged
awesome update..........loved it..... plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon........... will be waiting

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 7:03am | IP Logged
if u ask me ,i think u shud let maan geet fall in love wid each other then disclose bout geet's pastWink,make use ov dis night they gonna share together ahemz know wat i mean,i just love dis FF plz plz continue updating hun??Smile

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 7:04am | IP Logged
Amazing update!
Glad that Maan is supporting her after knowing the truth or half truth since Geet isn't Mehak's biological mother. She's Dev-Rano's daughter. I hope I am correct. 
 Brij-Dev wants to kill her. I am too curious about her past now.
Well as a reader I would say unfold her past soon. And as a writer, I think you should wait since it will create more mystery and make the readers super-curiousEmbarrassed
Next update in 3 hoursSmile Yay!!!
Please do update exactly after 3 hoursEmbarrassed

BTW whats your name?

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