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~True Luv Is Eternal#2~AR FF-LastPt Pg13(13/01/11) (Page 8)

kashishk IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by diyachill

hey kashish please dont mind ....c, i hav read all ur other ff in the last few days....every concept r different and quite engaging ..especially, tu mera armaan hain.....the way u scripted was superb.....the first half abt riddhi and second half abt armaan...i really...loved it...
2. Armaan ff..i dont remember a lot abt this ff...as i read this long before...i know the story ...that was superb..
3.Learn The True Meaning Of Love  ff... i loved the concept...i know its a mini ff..but still i think the dept of love is missing .....before the love making scene....if would hav scripted some more AR moments ....which shows the dept of riddhima love to armaan..it would hav far beter
Arman hav spoiled so much girls life....still his punishment he got is only the matter of month...in my idea,atlest u should hav a taken leap of one year....as he said " i m leaving u forever"...he should hav left...lived a life without his dad's name...and away from his own family....at the same time, learning whats life at each step ...must be more interesting ...
4.~True Luv Is Eternal ff....intial part was superb....till he confessed their love
and marriage part was cool after that spice part was missing...i got some engaging part when riddhi  confronted her parents..u have  many spice like riddhima's ex bf, arman 's ex gf.....riddhi is insecure towards the coming baby..but stilll the story is moving without mirch masala..except the love making scene which was superb ....
its just my suggestion...please dont mind...thanks for the wonderful ff..whih added colors in my dry days...i really loved ur one shot ...take care


Hey dear,
Thanks a lot for your honest comment.
Well concerning Learn true meaning of love, it was a mini FF which I written during my summer holidays and I wanted to finish it before my class start, so I had to rush that aspect. :)

About this FF, well this was supposed to be like this, my main idea was to keep this FF a bit away from the mirch masala :p lolz I hope u don't mind it. Apart that, the next part is the last one I wanted to keep this FF as simple as possible that's why but I can assure in a few weeks time I am beggining a new FF, which I hope you'll like because it would be full of mirch and masala :)

To all the other readers, thanks a lot for your precious comments, I really love them they surely make my day. Keep on showering me with your love :D

Luv u<333
Kashish

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
HAPPY NEW YEAR
nice part
the birthday....bechara armaan but got good return gift
riddhi was so sweet
continue soon
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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
Awesome.
Armaan is such a loving and caring hubby.
Someday I would also start dreaming to eat food cooked by him he he.
His b'day was fantastic.
I loved this part.
Plz update the next part soon.
abagree Senior Member
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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
great update
sakshilovesAR IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged

heyy

the partt was awsome loved it to the coe dear

thx for the pm

continuee soon

sakshiStar

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:58am | IP Logged
great part
totally loved it
continue soon
here-i-am Senior Member
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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 3:41am | IP Logged
that was cute part
loved itSmile

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