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FF: No Hope uptd pg11! (3 July) (Page 8)

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Main aa gayiDancing aur maine padd bhi liyaEmbarrassed and you know what...it was simply splendidClap and i really feel that u shud take ur writting activity, very seriously! coz i find u very talented Star The Booker prize is on the way babay!!Wink

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Originally posted by ankita1605

Main aa gayiDancing aur maine padd bhi liyaEmbarrassed and you know what...it was simply splendidClap and i really feel that u shud take ur writting activity, very seriously! coz i find u very talented Star The Booker prize is on the way babay!!Wink
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No Hope Part 6:

Nandini rolled over to her side, facing Abhishek's back. He wasn't normally like this, like the men in some books, making passionate love and as soon as it was over, turning to the other side and snoring like a hippopotamus. What had happened to him? He had been normal when he had come back from the trip to New York. Nandini scrolled through her memory, trying to figure out what had happened to trigger a reaction like this. Then she remembered'Abhishek had received a call when she was doing the laundry. She had come down, only to see him extremely tensed and easily annoyed. He had snapped at her for not ironing his shirt properly. Before'before all of this, he had treated her like a precious gemstone. His Kohinoor ka Heera. He never yelled at her; never.

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"I am getting late." He pulled his arm away from her, straightening his coat. Abhishek Tiwari, son of Nityanand Tiwari, and future CM of the IPP. He could not afford to be late for this meeting.

"Abhishek. No I won't let you go. You only just came back!"

"Nandini, dear. Stop being so whingey. You aren't a child."

"Abhi. I need to spend time with you."

"The elections are coming close. I don't have that time!"

"You aren't standing in those elections!"

"Have you lost your mind? You don't want me to stand in the elections so I can spend time with you?"

"Abhishek'Alka is standing in the elections, for IPP. This time" She added, quickly.

"Kya bak rahi ho. I don't have time for this."

"It doesn't matter."

"What doesn't matter?" He stood with his hands on his hips; his face almost red; squinting his eyes.

"Whether you go or don't. It seriously doesn't matter. Alka is the CM of IPP. You can ask Babuji. He will grant you a holiday for today, himself."

"Are you serious?" He lowered his face slightly, looking directly at her to make her feel inferior.

"I am. Why would I lie?" She blinked rapidly to stop herself from crying.

"Abhishek tumhe ho kya gaya hai?"

"I will go meet Alka and Babuji. I'll take you somewhere, in the evening when I come back"

"Don't bother trying to meet Alka. She won't even as much as glance at your shadow"

"Fine." He looked at the door.

"You can go. I won't stop you" She shrugged one shoulder, "There's no point. Is there?"

"I'm sorry Nandini. You know how tensed I get."

"No. I don't. That's okay. You can go now. Bye, take care" She pecked his cheek and turned back to do the dishes. 'I understand his priorities, now.'

 -

 

 

Dream~

The confession

'I love you.'

Three magical words that could change her life forever. Alka clung onto Chander's shoulders as the bike lurched over a speed breaker. He hadn't said those words yet. She sighed.

"Are you alright?"

"Yeh-es. Why?"

"No. Just asking"

"Mmnhmmn" God, he wasn't even talking properly to her.

"Where are we going?"

"I want to take you somewhere. Somewhere special." He winked.

He winked'oh my, he winked at her! Her face became the colour of her old Barbie doll's clothes; baby pink.

"Here we are." He grinned proudly.

Alka nodded and tried to look impressed. "Wow. Trees. And ooh, a cliff. Nice place. But why are we here?"

"You don't like it?"

"No. I mean of course I like it. It's amazing!" She attempted a smile.

"Alka. I used to come here every day --

 

"Didiii!"

Alka gasped and jerked up. Wha..?



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will read tonite n comment...

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