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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
heyyyy guyz thanks a lot 4 ur lovely commnts it really means alot 2 me.
this part is dedicated 2 ria  my bestest buddy here bcozz she was feeling low...

part 2..
The whole crowd of d college was shouting n cheering only one name...d hope of winning the basketball tournament was only on him....on dat one PERSONEmbarrassed
guy-dude all d best this is our last basket..only u can save d match..we hv 2 break d tie..
person-i l try my best dude..he said nervously....n closes his eyes n starts thinking.

flashback-
s-chashmish mujhe baahut darr lag raha hai..
g-samrat tum kabse darne lage tum khud hi mujhe bolte ho na darna nahin chahiyeh toh phir..
s-main nahin darta chahsmish..maine 2hafton se theek se practice bhi nahin ki...dekhan nahin match ke 1st half maine kitne baskets miss kiya..
g-sam tumhaari tabiyaat kharab 2hafton se issme tumhari kya galti hai...
s-par chahsmish tum jaanti ho yeh match hamare school ke liye kitna imp hai..aur agar yeh match hum haarenge toh sirf mei wajah se main team ka captain hoon aur main hi haraaonga...DAMN!!!!
g-samrat tum itni jaldi kaise haar mangaye...mujhe nahin pata tha tum itni jaldi haar maan ne waalo mein se ho..
s-par
g-par war kuch nahin samrat match ab tak khatam nahin hua hai..aur tum itni jaldi haar maangaye...agar tum team ke captain hote hue abhi se haar maan jaoge toh baaki players ko kaun motivate karega...
samrat was quiet..
gunajn holds his hand n says sam tu itne tension mein bilkul ache nahin lagte..agar zyaada darr lage toh apne aankhen band karke apne parents ke baaremein kyunki unka aashiwad hamesha hamare saath hota hai...aur woh hamesha hamara bhala sochte hain..
samrat smiles hearing dis-i think ur rite chahsmish...mujhhe abhi se haar nahin maana chahiyeh..
g-arrey wah kaafi samajdaar hogaye ho..bada jaldi samaj jaate ho...
s-lekin agar main haar 
g-nahin haaroge mujhe tumpe pura vishwaas hai..u l nt lose..
s-thanks..
g-aur woh kya kehte hain haar ke jitne waale ko baazigar kehte hain..she said in a nautanki tone
s-chahmsih mere saath rehkar tum kaafi filmy hogayi ho...
g-kya karen sangat ka asar hai..
someone calls samrat as d match's half tym was over
g-ok den best of luck
s-thanks n was abt 2 go wen he turns n hugs gunjan thanks alott chahsmish ur d best...gunjan smiles n hugs him back...
g-ab jao jeet ke aao mere sherr!!!!all d best...
s-thanks!!!

flashbak ends
 he opens his eyes...much more confident..he starts bouncing d ball his opponent was coming in his opposite direction..n starts walking towards him n was abt 2 snatch d ball 4rm his hand...wen he ran n scores d basket..n shouts yessss!
crowd-yayaaaaaaaa....
all his team players hug n congartulate him
cheerleaders-east or west sammy is d best..u rock..
n SAMRAT turns n gives a flying kiss 2 all d cheerleaders...(just lyk d way in mjht Day Dreaming..adorable na)wen his cell starts ringing..
s-hello
dm-goodmorning my son..
s-hii mamaji kaise ho aap?
dm-main bilkul theek hoon..tum batao?
s-mamaji guess wat maine match
dm-fir jeeth gaye rite
s-rite..
dm-mujhe pata tha beta..tum zaroor jeetoge im proud of u...
s-thank u..
dm-so tum waapas kab aarahe ho?
s-kal subha ki flight se..
dm-oh datz gud..mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karna tha..
s-zaroori?
dm-haan tum waapas aajao fir baatonga..
a person 2 samrat-sam u hv been calld on stage..
s-acha mamaji ab main rakh ta hoon mera trophy mujhe bula raha hai...
dm-ohh ok beta congrats beta kal milte hain...

on d other hand in newyork gunjan was nervous as she had 2 give a very imp presentation//n it was very imp 4 der company
g 2 herself-hey bhagwaan plzz meri help karna i hope mujhse koi galti na ho yeh project hamare company ke liye baahut imp hain..agar mujhse koi galti hogayi toh sir mujhpe kitna bharosa karke yeh presentation mujhe diya hai..
she was very very nervous....wen she saw a white flower on d vase in her table...she goes near it..takes d flower n starts thinking..

flashbak
g-samrat mujhe baahut darr lagraha hai main pehli baar stage main gaa rahi hoon...agar main nahin gaa paayi toh agr sab mujh par hasne lage toh...
s-chashmish chashmish chill n relaz..itna bhi mat socho..
g-kya nahin socho tum nahin jaante mujhe stage fright hai..
samart holds her 4m her shoulder n says-agar tum itna sochogi toh darr na lagte hue bhi darr lagega...
gunjan remains silent
s-gaate waqt logon mat dekhna bas apne gaane pe concentrate karna...jitna audience ke baare mein sochogi utna dar lagega..
g-par 
s-uffoo chahsmish itna tenison lena band karo agar yeh samrat ka attention paane ka koi tareeka hai toh boldo..
g-YOU..glares at him ..tumhe abhi bhi mazaak sujh raha hai..n turns
samrat smiles n brings a white flower in 4rnt of her face...SORRY CHASHMISH..
g-takes d flower n says itz ok n thanks...
s-mention not chashmish n flicks her nose..
g-thanks samrat tumhara yeh white flower hamesha mujhe help karta hai..xams ho ya competion hamesha..
s-kaise help nahin karega aakhir issmein meri good wishes jo hai..
g-thanks lekin jab tum nahin hoge tab meri help kaun karega aur mera haausla kaun badhaayega...
sam smiles n keeps his hand arnd her neck-hmm agar main nahin hoga toh agar apne aas paas koi white flower dekhogi toh uss dekhna aur samaj jaana ki maine diya hai kyunki agar main waahan hota toh tumhe woh hi deta..ok..lekin tum future ke baare mein sochna band karo aur abhi apne gaane ke baare mein socho...samjhi..
gunjan smiles n hugs him n says-thanks sam tthnxx a lot..samrat smiles...

flshbak ends

then someone calls gunjan n she goes 2 give d presentation..still holding d white flower...
gunjan gives d presenatation very nicely all d clients liked n appreciated  her work...
congratulations Mr Malhotra we really lykd d presentation would definatly lyk 2 do our project with u...
dm-thanks alot..
dm 2 gunjan-thanks alot beta mujhe pata tha tum mujhe niraash nahin karogi
then all d staff mebers congratulate gunjan

n d screen divided into two sam holding d trophy n gunjan getting congratulated but both thinking abt EACH OTHER...

end...
hope u guyz lykd it..plzzzz do commnt....

lots of love
shreya






Edited by SM_317 - 27 December 2010 at 1:30pm

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
Amazingg Part . . .
Lovelyy !!
Pllzz Cont Soon < 3 ! Embarrassed

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
wonderful update......sajan remembering eachother when they are scared was sooo cute......cont soon

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
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*edited*
m editing so soon.....shocked mat hona!LOLLOL
n b4 i frgt, thnx a lot honey for dedicating dis wonderful part 2me.......mera mood sach mein theek ho gaya ye padhke!!TongueTongue
tum itna achha likh sakti ho maine kabhi nahi socha tha!!!! keep it up!ClapClap
waise pehle flashback padhkar aisa laga jaise tum gunjan ho aur main samrat....lollzzz...tum bhi mujhe aise hi samjhati ho!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
n 2nd flashback mein tum samrat aur main gunjan!Embarrassed
sam's convo wid dm ws gud....yayyyyy!!!!!! now he'll come n join d company soon!!!!TongueTongueTongue
n den gunji is nervous n remembrs samrat n tht white rose wala part ws too good....it reminded me of old mjht days......haayyyeeee!!!! ur ff rocks yaa!!!!StarStarStarStar
 
n btw one more thing, ye updt chhota tha...
yaa i kno ki tum 1st time ff likh rahi ho, isliye is baar kuchh nahi keh rahi hun!Big smile
next time try 2make it a longer one....plz......*puppy face* (kya karun sajan se mann nahi bharta hai!)WinkLOL
do cont soooon dear...m loving dis ffEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
love youu!!!Tongue


Edited by ria_lovesajan - 27 December 2010 at 2:18pm

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
hiii shreya dear awww loveeeeeeeee da updateee it was so so cuteeee da flashbacks wen both sajan were scared n nervous awww da flower scene reminded me of sajan wen always sammy gives gunji flower before she does something big awww miss sajan anyways hehe gunji being filmy n all wen sammy was having flashback i loveee dat one hehe loved all da parts seriosly n yayyyyyyyy dey both got success sammy won as usual n gunji did awesomeee in presentation yayyy n dey both thinking abt each other in end hayeee awww cant wait for sajan meet now do continue ASAP

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
awesomeeee updt
loved it
continue soon

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
WONDERFUL UPDATE SHREYA LOVED IT A LOT

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tht was sooooooo awesome update

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