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Tum Mile (AR, MN, SG, AA) (Page 7)

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
amazing update!!!!!!!!! Thumbs Up
I loved it! Heart
update soon! Smile
thanks for the pm!! Big smile
*anisha

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 4:43am | IP Logged
add me to the pm list now

i am certianly in yaaarr

aaj tak tera koi ff raha hai jisme mayur ho aur maine nahi pada

p.s just love4 this ff so far



upsdate sooon

luv

mahi

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 5:45pm | IP Logged
@madhu: -thanks a lot yaar<3
@shafoo -thanks dear<3
@preety: thanks<3
@luv.mayurarti: thanks hun<3
@prithvisanyo1: thanks dear<3
@faaria: thanks aisa hi hota hai but sab theek hi hoga na yaar<3
@rasikdhara101: thanks, sure y not?<3
@mohit_aggarwal: thanks dear..u made my day..will deff pm u<3
@daniella05: thank u<3
@sariska_mnarti: thanks<3
@anisha: aww thanks<3
@mahima: aww u made my day yaar<3 thanks zaroor pm karoongi=) happy new year to u too<3

@everyone: Happy New Year 2011

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
Lovely part mehr

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@divya: thanks a lot<3
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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Part 3 of

Green- Present
Pink- Past

-ridhima is walking in the room, luks very depressed
nupur- kya howa ridzy?
ridzy- kya bataoon kya howa?? samrat aisa karega ye mene socha bhi nai tha
nupur- howa kya?

ridzy- jab tu room mei thi or door bell ring howi to main dekhne gayi to waha samrat tha
samrat- ridzy isse milo, ye armaan hai
main- samrat, tu isse yaha kyun laaya?
samrat- tere se milaane
-n maine socha agar main samrat ko wo sab bataoongi k ye airport mei mujhai mila, or mene usse battameezi ki, to samrat ko bohat bura lagega
main- samrat, acha main thori dear mei aati hoon tayaar hoke
nupur- to?
ridzy- to kya?
nupur- ye armaan kaun hai?
ridzy- wohi yaar jo airport pe mila tha yaar
nupur- oh wo, maine tujhai pehle hi bola tha tune galat kiya tha
ridzy- aray yaar tu to lecture mat de plz ab madad kar?
nupur- acha ruk main kuch sochti hoon
-nupur is walking, suddenly she stops
nupur- idea
ridzy- kya? jaldi bata
nupur- dekh tu bahar jaa or samrat ko akele mei sab bataday na
ridzy- nahi yaar, waise ye mujhai kyun isse milwa ne aaya hai?
nupur- aray taake tu sorry bol sakay
ridzy- ye samrat bhi na acha main jaati hoon lekin tu bhi chal na saath
nupur- main kya karoongi?
ridzy- us armaan ko company dena, taake main samrat se sab baat kar sakoon theek hai
nupur- acha chal yaar
-they both walk out there
-armaan mayank and samrat saw them
-suddenly armaan jumps up
armaan- tum (tu ridzy)
ridzy- haan main to kya howa?
samrat- oh to tum ek dusre ko jaante ho great yaar
ridzy whispering to nupur- ye kya mujhai laga samrat to mujhse sorry bulwana chahta hai lekin isse to abhi pata chala k main is sarru ko jaanti hoon!!
nupur- haan yaar sab ulta ho raha hai
samrat- kya howa donoon khusar phusar kya karrahay ho?
ridzy- samrat mujhai tujhse kuch baat karni hai
samrat- pehle mujhai kuch baat tum sab se karni hai
ridzy- mere baat zayada zaroori hai
samrat- mere baat adhi duniya ko pata hai lekin tum logo ko nai
ridzy- lekin
nupur- is ko bolne day kya pata tere problem asaan ho jaye
samrat- okay first of all aaj new year ki raat hai so aaj party hai yaha or tum sab ko aana hi hai
mayank- main lekin kyun?
samrat- tum mere dost bhi ho sirf ek dealer nai to koi bahana nai
mayank- acha tum bol rahay ho to main zaroor aoonga.
-suddenly sum kind of paper fell from mayank's hand
- n he n nupur both goes together to pick up
-there hands on each others hands, staring @ each other
-ridzy smiling there
ridzy- aham aham
-they both stands
mayank- sorry
nupur- its okay
samrat- to mujhai jo main baat bolni thi wo bhool gaya
ridzy- ab kya main baat bolni hai?
samrat- party shaam ko 6 bajay start hai to ridzy nupur, tum donoon ko kisi ko bhi invite karna hai karlo theek hai?
ridzy- wo to main waise bhi karoongi
-armaan whispered: hai hi aise bin bulaye mehmaan
-ridzy heard him
ridzy- kya bola tumne?
armaan- kuch nai
ridzy- dekho bhole mat bano, mene suna tumne kya bola
armaan- to pooch kyun rahi ho
ridzy- dekh samrat apne dost ko bolday main abhi arguement k mood mei nai hoon, mujhai party k liye tayaar hona hai so bye (to samrat)
-she left from there to inside
samrat- waise tum log mile kaha thay? (to armaan)
armaan- ye wohi larki hai jo mujhai airport mei mili thi
samrat- kya? to tumhai ye bohat buri lagti hai na?
armaan- haan sab se zayada waise tum mujhai kis larki se milwa ne waalay thay?
samrat- yahi to thi
armaan- (shocked) kya??
samrat- dekho abhi mujhai party ki tension hai, main tumhai sab details kal batata hoon
armaan- lekin?
samrat- dekho main jaanta hoon k wo airport waali baat se tum thore naraz ho lekin trust me jald baazi mei kuch faisla mat karna
armaan- okay, acha main apne hotel mei ja raha hoon wahi se party mei aoongi so cya at the party bye everyone
samrat, mayank, and nupur- bye
-now nupur is thinking by herself about the marry of ridzy n armaan
samrat- aray tum abhi tak gayi nai (to nupur)
nupur- oh wo mujhai ye newspaper lena tha
samrat- oh sure ye lo
-nupur start walks inside
mayank- bye
nupur- bye cya @ the party
-she walks inside
-ridzy on phone
ridzy- haan tu zaroor ajaana haan party mei
-nupur talks by herself- kya karoon bataoon ridzy ko uski shaadi ka
-ridzy turns
ridzy- nupur tu agaye acha chal bata kise invite karna hai
nupur- nai kisi ko nai
ridzy- kya howa?? tu pareshaan lag rahi hai
-at the same tym nupur thinks " ridzy itni khush hai party ko leke agar isse ye bataya to ye upset ho jayegi"
ridzy- bolna nupur?
nupur- aray wo main soch rahi hoon job karloon..kyun k tere bhi volleyball ki practices hoti hai to main kya karoongi saara din
ridzy- acha chal to check kar abhi party mei 4 ghantay hain theek hai to abhi ye newspaper mei job dekhte hain okay
nupur- theek hai
-nupur tell in her heart " k job bhi kar hi loongi is mei kya hai mera tym pass ho jayega"
-suddenly ridzy saw a job
ridzy- nupur ye dekh bohat achi job hai u should do this one
nupur- theek hai kal phone kartay kyun k aaj to likha hai "we are close on sunday"
ridzy- okay
-now they both are ready n in party
-arjun and arohi are in the party too
-ridzy to everyone "happy new year, humain saari puraani batein bhula k is saal ko welcome karna chaiye, to aaj sab apne dil se puraani batein nikaal k naye shurwaat karo so happy new year 2011 everyone!!"
samrat- dekh kaha tha na dil ki ridzy buri nai hai (to armaan)
-now there is a girl enter in the party she is coming inside wid the flower n she is by the door, when sumone opens the door it hit her n flowers from her hands fall so she went to pick them up, at the same time samrat went to pick it up too, and @ their hands this part is done

p.s- now u all know wo larki gunjan hai

~**~ Intresting in next part~**~
all 4 couples dance
arjuhi nok tok
nupurs job as mayank's assistant
samrat's feeling for gunjan
armaan understands ridzy

so dont miss it<3


love u guyx keep commenting n liking as u r now=) Happy New Year 2011<3



Edited by missinguonly - 14 January 2011 at 2:51pm

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
nice, lovely part. loved it.

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marvelous update........cont soon

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