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Tum Mile (AR, MN, SG, AA) (Page 5)

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
lovely part! Smile
I loved it!
amazing start! Big smile
add me to you're pm list please!!!!!!!! Smile
*anisha


Edited by anishalakhani78 - 27 December 2010 at 12:02am

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Posted: 27 December 2010 at 11:22am | IP Logged
@noor: thanks dear<3
@anishalakhani78: thanks dear will deff<3

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Part 2 of

Red: present
blue: past

-ridhima: nupur pata nai aj samrat ne kyun tayar hone ka bola hai i have no idea
-nupur: kya matlab?
-ridhima: i mean hamesha to nai bolta
-nupur: kya pata koi araha ho us ka mehmaan u never know
-ridhima: may b chal yaar ab main koi dhang k kapre pehnoon
-they both getting ready
-cums to samrat
-samrat: ye arman kaha reh gaya hai? us ne call bhi nai ki, i think mujhai hi call karni paregi
-he calls armaan
-armaan: hello
-samrat: hi main samrat tum abhi tak ghar nai pohchay kyun?
-armaan: mujah ap ko hi call karni thi, per ap k number kho gaya bro
-samrat: to tum ghar kyun nai aye ho?
-armaan: mere taxi mujhai nai mil rahi hai or i have no idea kya karoon
-samrat: okay main tumhai airport lene aata hoon, bas abhi nikal raha hoon terminal batao apna
-armaan: d 5
-samrat: okay i will b right there in half an hour
-armaan: kk tyt
-now samrat is leaving for airport
-n now ridzy n nupur are ready, they both cum outside of the room
-ridhima: samrat samrat??
-no answer
-ridhima: kaha gaya?
-nupur: call karlay
-ridhima calls him
-samrat: haan ridhima i will b at home in half an hour
-ridhima: aray sun to
-but samrat cut off the phone
-nupur: kya howa?
-ridhima: bola he will b here in half an hour
-nupur: to?
-ridhima: to itna jaldi mei kyun tha
-nupur: kya ridzy tu bhi? acha yaar coffee bana na bohat peene ka dil chahraha hai
-ridhima: okay abhi laati hoon bas 2 min
-ridhima goes to make coffee n cums back
-ridhima: ye le
-nupur: thanks,waise ek baat poochoon?
-ridhima: pooch of course
-now samrat pick up the armaan
-nupur: tune airport pe galat kiya wo larkay k saath
-ridhima: wo larka 1 number ka na bura aadmi tha
-armaan: wo larki koi chipkali thi bolay pe bolay ja rahi thi sun hi nai rahi thi
-ridhima: wo larka na i feel lyk to kill him
-armaan: kaha abhi apne haath gande karoon
-ridhima: khair jaan chooti meri to
-armaan: thank god
-samrat: to ye ho gaya tha airport pe, poor u
-nupur: wo larka itna bura nai tha
-ridhima: to ja shaadi karle usse
-nupur suddenly get quite
-ridhima: i mean wo nai tha, i was just joking m really sorry
-nupur: its okay, ridhima u know
main sirf 7 saal ki thi, jab mere maa mere saamne zabardasti muskrati thi, sirf wo aadmi ki waja se jisse mujhai baap kehtewe bhi sharam aati hai ab, main 5 saal ki thi, jab dusri shaadi karli mere baap ne, per jab main bari howi, mene apni maa se poocha koi jawab nai tha, ek muskurahat thi, or mujhai apne saare jawab mil gaye. sirf us aadmi ki waja se mere pe se pyaar ka bharosa uth gaya hai, sirf us admi ki waja se
-ridhima: nupur, to phir tu kabhi kisi se pyaar nai karegi, shaadi nai karegi?
-nupur: nai, main apni life jeena chahti hoon
-ridhima: nupur wo life hi kya jis mei pyaar na ho, rishte na ho
-nupur: shayad kami hogi, per ansoon nai honge sirf khushi hogi
-ridhima: nupur..
-suddenly door bell rings
-ridhima: rukh main darwazay pe dekti hoon samrat hoga
-ridzy opens the door, it was mayank on door
-ridhima: yes?
-mayank: hi samrat's house?
-ridhima: yes but who are you?
-mayank: jee mere business k baare mei mujhai samrat se koi deal karni hai so
-ridhima: oh ok aap aaye andar aaye
-he cums in
-ridhima: bethe, actually samrat abhi 10 to 15 minz mei aata hoga, so if u dont mind waiting for him?
-mayank: oh no sure i will
-nupur brings the water for him
-mayank: thanks
-while he is drinking, some of the water fall on the floor
-mayank: oops m sorry pata nai kaise gir gaya
-nupur: koi baat nai main saaf karleti hoon
-as nupur walks she slips from it n mayank hold her, they both are in lost in each other
-that time, ridhima is realizing what nupur told her "k main kabhi kisi se pyar nai karoongi"
- n now they are back not staring on each other
-nupur: sorry wo paani ki waja se
-mayank: its okay i understand
-now it goes on arjun and arohi
-arohi is walking on the street n its raining
-arjun is walking opposite
-so arjun is on the phone n arohi is like lost in her umbrella, which is keep bothering her
-they both bump into each other
-arohi's umbrella flow away n arjun's phone fell down
-arjun: m sorry main kahi or
-arohi: excuse me kahi or k sagay, mera naya dress kharab ho gaya or tum mujhai itni asaani se sorry bol rahay ho
-arjun: to kya boloon mera 15000 k phone bhi gir kay kharab ho gaya, itni important baat ho rahi thi meri
-arohi: ohoo, bare business man ban rahay ho, tumhara phone bhar mei jaye ab main party mei aise kapre pehen k jaoongi kya
-arjun: acha to kya main aaj ka din apne phone k bagair guzaaroon
-arohi: zahir si baat hai tumhari galti thi
-everyone on the street is looking @ them
-arjun: oh excuse me
-suddenly a old man enters in there
-old man: kya howa beta tum donoon jhagra kyun karrahay ho?
-arohi: uncle is kharoos ne mera itna naya suit kharab kardiya
-arjun: is pagal larki ne mera phone kharab kardiya
-old man: acha to is mei aisi kya baat hai suno beta (to arjun) tum isse ek naya suit dila do
-arohi: to ap ka matlab hai main isko phone dilaoon?? is ko?/
-old man: mene aisa kab bola beta
-ajrun: to apka matlab
-old man: dekh beta tu suit dila ye sorry bolegi baat khatam theek hai?
-arjun: shayad ap sahi ho, isse peecha to chutega mera
-arohi makes weird face
-arjun: oye chalo
-arohi: chalo huh kis k saath jaana parega koi izzat hi nai rahegi
-arjun: shakal dekho or batein dekho
-arohi: excuse me kya bola tumne??
-arjun: main ne tumhai nai bola chup chap gaari mei betho
-they both sit in the car n goes
-arohi is on the phone whole time to make arjun jealous
-store is here so they both go n they saw a survey
-arohi: wait
-arjun: huh...ab kya hai?
-arohi: mujhai ye survey fill out karna hai
-arjun: dekho main tumhai yaha kapre dilaane aaya hoon koi ghumne nai aaya hoon tumhare saath
-arohi: oh look, waise tumhara naam kya hai?? chalo jo bhi ho, who carez, yaha gift mei phone bhi milega agar badkismati se tumhara survey fill out hogaya to
-arjun: dekho ab zayada ho gaya hai haan
-arohi: chalo main fill out karti hoon tumhare liye kya yaad karogay
-arjun: aray suno to sahi
-arohi doesnt listen n go n fill out the survey
-arohi: dekhna mene kiya hai to zaroor jeetogay
-arjun: bas baatein karo
-now arjun buys arohi a dress.


-this part is done, i will introduce gunjan in next part hopefully u all like itEmbarrassed



Edited by missinguonly - 14 January 2011 at 2:50pm

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 11:17am | IP Logged
yay me first.......
mehr..............kya tha haan chota tha par awesome................thnx for d pm bye in hurry.................


Edited by roknstarz_mjht - 28 December 2010 at 11:26am

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Hi Dear
Lovely part
MaYur scene was so cute.
And Arjun-Arohi scene was very funny loved it hehe
Thanks for PM
Cant wait for next part
Update Soon.
 
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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
@roknstarz_mjht: hii thanks oh np ur comments really meanz a lot dear<3 add me in ur friend so it will b easy for me to pm u=)<3

@surat: after ur comments, i read arjuhi's part again lolx i was laughing so loud thank u so much u made my day from ur comments dear<3

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Posted: 28 December 2010 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
hey mehr Hug awesomeeee part loved it arjuhi part was super cute loved it it was so funny continue soon

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tht was sooooooooo niceeeeeeeeee

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