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Tum Mile (AR, MN, SG, AA) (Page 37)

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 7:08am | IP Logged
part 7-
 
that was sooo cute
 
i loved it a lot
 

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
@prithvisanyo- thank u so much<3\
@armaanksgfan- thanks a lot dear<3
@achoose- thanks<3
@luv.mayurarti- thank u<3
@mayur.ki.dewani- thanks a lot<3
@surat- thank u yaar lekin update kaise karoon mera haath=(
@madhu- hii dear kaha ho aap yaar?? thanks a lot<3
@daniella- thank u so much
@sariska_mnarti- thank u so much dear<3
@ekta- thanks a lot u made my day dear<3 i want to update asap..but my hand is fracture..so u might have to wait for the next part..n so sorry 4 dat=( <3
@kashndsel4eva- thanks a lot dear<3
@anisha- aww thank u dear<3
@linda- thanks a lot..u need to read next part for ur question..btw nyc username<3
@arpsin- thank u dear<3 r u new reader?<3
@ambika- will deff pm u when will update next<3
@bhawna- thank u so much<3
@tanzeel- thanks a lot<3 finally u got ur samrat's part<3
@shafoo- thank u so much<3
@mahima- its better than never dear...u made my day too...thanks a lot dear<3

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 3:27am | IP Logged
part 8-
 
awwww
 
sooo cuteee
 
i love each and every part of it
 
sajan were amazing
 
i know my comment is l;ate
 
but i have been highly inactive yaar
 
 
p.s i have a request..... can u plzzz not use red in your updates....... it actually pierces my eyes a bit..... any other color will do if possible... pink or marron..... but red end of hurts my eyes........
 
luv
 
mahi

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 8:09am | IP Logged
part 9 and 10-
 
read both together as i couldn't wait
 
they both are amazing
 
wow
 
arohi ne arjun ko thapakr mara.... interesting
 
ridz and armaan were gr8
 
mayur as frenzz woww
 

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 9:40am | IP Logged
Hii..i just read dis ff..its amazing..luvd it..
plz pm me whn u update it..plz.

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Posted: 17 April 2011 at 9:10pm | IP Logged
Awesum update rlly enjoyed waitying for the next updt eagerly! just read the part wen arohi deicdes to get masrried!

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Update soon.

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Part 11 of


purple- present
green- past

nupur- arjun tum arohi k saamne kisi or larki k saath ghumo
arjun- kya?? tum pagal ho gaye ho kya?
ridzy- arjun, i think nupur is right
armaan- shayad isi se arohi ko apnay pyaar ka ehsaas ho jayega
samrat- nai guyx m wid arjun...ye plan sahi nai hai
gunjan- lekin nupur ka pura plan to sun lo
arjun- main arohi se zabardasti shaadi nai karoonga...wo khud apni marzi se karegi shaadi...main yun nai kar sakta us k saath
nupur- arjun, tum us k saamne kisi or larki k saath ghumo...or phir uski shaadi mei jaake usse shaadi karo...warna arohi ki zindagi barbaad ho jayegi
arjun- nai nupur...aisa nai ho sakta...hum sab milke arohi ko hurt karenge
samrat- guyx 1 min..i got an idea
arjun- koi ideas nai...main arohi ko ehsaas dilaoonga k main usse pyaar karta hoon
samrat- exactly yahi tha mera idea
nupur- kya?? arjun..tum arohi ko jaante ho wo aisa nai karegi
arjun- wo khud aisa hi karegi...kyun k she know dat she luvs me...or usko is baat ka ehsaas hum sab milke dilayege
ridzy- great!!
arjun- so r u guyx wid me??
everyone- yay!!
-they give five to each other
-now cumz to arohi, talking to a servant
arohi- sab ready hai?
servant- yes mam
-arohi walks outside n thinking
arohi- (to herself) kya ye main sahi karrahi hoon??...sirf arjun ko hurt karne k liye..ya phir ye sab karkay main khud ko hurt karoongi
-a tear cums out from da eyes
-she move it n continue- ye main kya soch rahi hoon? kya ho gaya hai mujhai? kyun har waqt arjun ka sawaal aata hai mere dimaag mei..bas ab or nai...aaj main arjun ko aakhri chance de rahi hoon...agar wo mujhse pyaar karta hoga to wo mujhai yaha se kisi bhi tarah leke jayega...wo mujhai kisi or ka hone nai dega...arjun aaj ki raat sab se keemti raat hai...aaj ki raat hum donoon ki zindagi ka faisla ho jayega...i luv u arjun...lekin ab ye dekhne ki baari hai k tum mujhai kitna pyaar karte ho
-arohi's friend shena cumz
shena- arohi?? yaha kya karrahi hai?
arohi- kuch nai bas aise hi yaha thori dhandhi hawa lene aaye thi
shena- acha main tujhai ye batane aaye thi k nupur log agaye hain...tera pooch rahay thay
arohi- arjun aaya hai?
shena- i dont think aaya hai...mujhai to nai dikha
arohi- acha tu chal andar main aati hoon
-shena leaves
arohi- (2 herself) 2 ghantay abhi bhi baaki hai arjun...main apni umeed ko haarne nai doongi..lekin ho kaha?? 1 call to karlo mujhai...sirf ye dekhne k liye k mujhai tumse kitni mohabbat hai
-servant cums
servant-arohi mam?
arohi- haan?
servant- wo salon lady agaye hai aap ko tayaar karne k liye...wo upper aap ka wait karrahi hai
arohi- acha main jaati hoon
-she goes inside, and see nupur, gunjan, ridzy, samrat, armaan, and mayank...n she goes there n hug each of them
mayank- arohi..gud luck wid ur new life
-arohi act lyk she is happy
samrat- arohi tum jo bhi karo...m alwayz wid u
arohi- thank u guyx...mujhai laga tum log nai aogay
nupur- kaise nai aate...itne saalo ka rishta ek pal mei tor dete kya?
ridzy- or nai to kya...arohi.. dekh ye teri zindagi hai tera poora haq hai k tu apne faislay khud lay...or ye yaad rakhna k hum sab har kadam per tere saath hai
arohi- thanks for understanding me...aaj mujhai ehsaas ho gaya hai k tum logo se zayada bara mere liye kuch nai hai...kuch bhi nai
gunjan- acha jaoo tayaar ho jao...saare mehmaan aate hi hongay
-arohi goes as she is going upstairs...she thinks about arjun
arohi- (2 herself) arjun?? tum kaha ho?? ek baar to dekhlo mujhai aake
-as she got in her room, salon lady was in there
salon lady- hi arohi
arohi- hii
salon lady- aap ready ho tayaar hone k liye
arohi- haan
-as she got ready, salon lady left
-and at the end arohi cant find her phone
-so she opens the cabinet n all dat
-she found dat bracelet...dat arjun gave her
-now arohi thinks of dat day

arjun- arohi ye tumhare liye...obviously tumse zayada khubsoorat nai hai lekin is duniya mei tumse zayada kuch bhi khubsoorat nai hai
-arjun kisses her handz
-arohi luks herself in mirror
arohi- ye main kya karrahi hoon??
-arjun enters
arohi- tum??
arjun- haan arohi main...tum fikar nai karo...main sirf tumhai yaha shaadi ki mubarak dene aaya hoon
arohi- chlaya jao yaha se
arjun- pehle mujhai shak tha k tum mujhse bohat pyaar karti ho...lekin aaj tumhare haath mei ye bracelet dekhe...mujhai yakeen ho gaya hai k tum mujhse bohat pyaar karti ho
arohi- aisa kuch nai hai
arjun- tumhari marzi arohi...main tumhai force nai karoonga...ye jaane k liye k u still luv me...cuz even u know dat...lekin haan arohi...yaad rakhna aaj main tumhai is shaadi se bhi nai rokoonga...kyun k tum apne aap ko khud rokogi
-he left
arohi- (2 herself) kya ye sapna tha?? or agar ye sach tha to main ab ye shaadi karne se nai rukoongi...kyun k mene ye kaha tha k arjun mujhai rokega...lekin ab bas...arjun i luv u...lekin tumhai hi mujhai rokna parega
-arohi goes downsatirs in bridal dress
-as she get down
-nupur is on announcement
nupur- ladies n gentlemen...aaj hum sab k liye bohat khaas din hai or ye khaas din hum humare ek friend arjun ki singing se start karegne..kyun k hum sab arohi k dost hai or humara ye haq hai k hum sab arohi liye kuch na kuch karay.,..so first is arjun...arjun please welcum to stage
-arjun cumx n sing this song:
"
Jo bhi kasmein khaayi thi humne
Waada kiya tha jo milke
Tune hi jeevan mein laaya tha mere savera
Kya tumhe yaad hai - 3
Din voh bade haseen the
Raatein bhi khushnaseeb thi
Tune hi jeevan mein laaya tha mere savera
Kya tumhe yaad hai - 3
Jaage jaage rehte the, khoye khoye rehte the
Karte the pyaar ki baatein
Kabhi tanhaai mein, kabhi purvaai mein
Hoti thi roz mulaaqaatein
Teri in baahon mein, teri panaahon mein
Maine har lamha guzaara
Tere is chehre ko, chaand sunehre ko
Maine to jigar mein utaara
Kitne tere kareeb tha
Main to tera naseeb tha
Honton pe rehta tha har waqt bas naam tera
Kya tumhe yaad hai
"
-arohi is remembering all da moments dat they spend together...n dis part is done on their memories

-hopefully u all lyk it

@mahima- thanks a lot dear...u made my day...n ur request done hun...thank for letting me know dat<3
@anshita- thank u so much for liking my work...n will deff pm u...also so glade to have u as a reader dear<3
@sanaya- thanks a lot...just update cant w8 for ur comments<3
@bhawna- hun ur request is done<3

p.s- sorry my readerz for taking dat long to update...my hand had fracture...n then my one friend died...i was in long depression..n i was just trying to keep me alone...but now m bac n i will do all da updatez on tym...inshaAllahEmbarrassed


Edited by missinguonly - 08 May 2011 at 11:11am

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