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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
hey mehr fab update loved it
i liked arman and ridz seen it was cute
and mayur were cute too
little sajan but atlest got something :)
anyways cont soon
 
love
tanzeel

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 10:13am | IP Logged
@surat- thank u so much<3
@kashndels4eva: thanks a lot<3
@tanzeel: dont worry next part aap k samrat se hi shuroo hoga<3 thanks<3

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 3:47am | IP Logged
lovely update
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Thanks daniella<3
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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 8:19am | IP Logged
part 10 of


green- present
red- past

gunjan- ur name??
samrat- samrat shergill
gunjan- but tumhara naam is list mei to nai hai
samrat- i know
gunjan- what do u mean..its mean ur not in the team either
samrar- i know but
-gunjan holds his hand takes him on da side
gunjan- samrat ye kya natak hai..tumne mujhse jhoot bola tha na??
samrat- haan lekin sirf tumse baat karne k liye
gunjan- lekin ab ye tamasha kyun bana rahay ho...jao mujhai apna kaam karne do
samrat- lekin sach mei i wanna join basketball...mere techniques to dekhlo ek baar
gunjan- samrat..
-suddenly one of practice player cums
player- gunjan mam...agar ye aadmi itna bol raha hai to haan kardo na
gunjan- dekho hum ye yun nai kar saktay hain
samrat- lo jee...apne players ki hi baat nai maanti kaisi coach ho
gunjan- kal ko agar mera player apne khandan ko leke ajayega khilane k liye..to main haan boloongi
-samrat laughs
samrat- plz plz bas ye last chance
gunjan- okay..to tumhara or mera match hoga or agar tum jeet gaye to tum mere saath coach ban saktay ho..lekin har gaye...to player okay??
samrat- lekin kal
gunjan- kyun?
samrat- kya hai na main abhi tumhara class tym waste nai karna chahta hoon..kal class se pehle all right
gunjan- okay
-suddenly samrat's phone ring
samrat- hello
arohi- hello...(bla bla bla bla bla bla)
samrat- arohi tum kuch mat karna..main bas aa raha hoon
-he tries to run
gunjan- kya howa?/ everything all right??
samrat- mujhai jaana parega..warna mere dost apni zindagi barbaad kardegi..bye baad mei bataoonga
-as soon he left from there
-gunjan calls ridzy
gunjan- samrat yaha se nikal gaya hai
ridzy- lekin wo tere pass kya karraha tha?
gunjan- long story..baad mei bataoongi
ridzy- chal okay byee
gunjan- bye
-after get done wid the phone
ridzy- samrat aa raha hai
nupur- arohi waise teri acting ko bhi manna parega..u were awesome
mayank- haan lekin tum ne usse bola kya phone pe
armaan- (acts lyk arohi) samrat tum ajao..warna main abhi hi karan se mangni karloongi
-arohi pick up the pillow, n throw @ armaan
arohi- haan haan or kar acting mere!!
mayank- ye karan kaun hai??
ridzy- samrat ka bohat acha dost tha..lekin sirf dost tha kyun k usse arohi pasand thi..or wo arohi se zabardasti shaadi karna chahta tha..tab se wo to jail mei band hai..lekin samrat ko yahi lagta hai..k wo wapis ayega or arohi se shaadi karlega
armaan- really??
arohi- haan really..or mene samrat ko aise bola jaise mujhai wo force karkay mujhse shaadi karraha ho
-suddenly door bell rings
ridzy- samrat agaya..shhss..nupur lights off..arohi open the door
-arohi runs n open the door
-it was dark, arohi hug him n say "happy birthday samrat"
-they turn on the lights
-and that guy was arjun
arohi- tum??
arjun- mujhai samrat ne bulaya hai
arohi- jhoot mat bolo
-suddenly samrat enters
samrat- ye jhoot nai bol raha...akhir mere bday hai..kisi ko to main bula sakta hoon
ridzy- kya tujhai sab pata tha??
samrat- obviously..last year bhi yahi kara tha...or is baar to main cake bhi le ayaa hoon
nupur- waise dusre surprise ka tujhai nai pata hoga
samrat- wo kya??
ridzy, arohi, nupur- come in
-gunjan cums to samrat
gunjan- happy birthday samrat (n gives a gift)
samrat- thanks
gunjan- gift nai dekhogay??
-samrat opens the gift, he found a paper, n a perfume, he reads the paper a loud
samrat- "we need u ur in!!" what does dat mean
-gunjan cums closer to him n whisper "ur in our basketball team..we need u dear"
-samrat smiles
nupur- aham aham aham aham, cake katna hai?
samrat- sure
-samrat cut outs the cake, everyone ate it from his hands
arohi- lekin tujhai is surprise ka to pata hi nai hoga
samrat- ab konsa surprise??
-arohi picks up the cake.,n throw @ his face
arohi- ye wala=P
samrat- abay yaar...
ridzy- is baar cake fights nai...yaad hai last tym sab slip howe thay
-n some of the cake fall on floor
-nupur try to go from there, she is about to fall down..n mayank saves her
mayank- aakhir dost hone k hisaab se itna to kar hi sakta hoon
nupur- really??
mayank- koi shak?/
nupur- to phir vaada karo...kabhi mujhai kahi chot nai lagnay dogay..hamesha isi tarah mujhai bachane ajaogay
mayank- vaada
ridZy- aham aham
-they both see her..n ridzy turns back
-they both leave each other, n nupur see samrat going upstairs
-nupur go there too
nupur- samrat yaar mujhai tumse kuch baat karni hai
samrat- haan bolo
nupur- yaar tune yaha arjun ko kyun bulaya...i mean ab arohi kuch ulta seeda na karday
samrat- main jaanta hoon..arjun k yaha aane se arohi ko takleef to howi hai..lekin aaj main in donoon ki dosti karadoonga
nupur- arohi ye kabhi nai manegi..samrat main manaoonga usse
-arjun cums
arjun- aham aham
samrat- great arjun...dekho tumhai yaad hai na sab kuch
arjun- haan
nupur- what?? tum logo ne kya plan kiya hai?
samrat- nupur bas dekhna
arjun- i think hum sab ko neeche party mei jaana chaiye warna inhay kuch garbar lagay ki
nupur- lets go
-they all go downstairs
-nupur heard gunjan talking
gunjan- aww app logo ka friend group kitna acha hai..i wish main is friendship ka ek hissa hoti
ridzy- tum ban gaye ho lekin ek shart hai
gunjan- shart??
arohi- haan shart
gunjan- lekin kya?
nupur- ye jo tum kab se "aap aap" karkay baat karrahi ho aise baat nai karo "tum tum" se karo
samrat- haan bilkul waise jaise tumne mujhse aaj subah basketball court mei ki thi
-everyone laughs
samrat- yaar ye bday party thori boring nai hai??
arohi- kya karay tere bday party mei or??
samrat- ab kya...pata hai mere hamesha se wish hai k mujhai wo gifts milay jo main mangoon
-nupur kind of getting their plan
nupur- really?? to ab bol na...abhi bhi ye wish puri ho sakti hai kyun guys??
everyone- haan haan kyun nai
samrat- really?? to sab se pehla gift main arohi se mangoonga
arohi- mujhse?? chal mangle
samrat- arohi lekin promise kar..main jo mangooga wo degi tu mujhai
arohi- okay promise
-samrat brings arjun there, take his n arohi's hand
samrat- arohi haath meela lay
arohi- matlab??
samrat- sirf mere liye iski dost banja..koi pyaar nai kuch nai.,.sirf dost.
arohi- lekin kyun??
samrat- kyun k main chahta hoon..k arjun is group ka hissa banay...lekin sirf tu mana karegi or sab haan bolenge
arohi- mene kab mana kiya yaar?
samrat- lekin koi group mei aaye iska matlab ye hai k sab us k friends ho
arohi- lekin samrat...
samrat- tune mujhse vaada kiya tha
arohi- okay
-she shake hands with arjun
arjun- friends?
arohi- friends
-everyone smiles except arohi
arohi- (in her heart) ek or baar arjun mere zindagi k saath nai khelne doongi..main kaise maan loon k arjun badal gaya hai..ye nai ho sakta
arohi- guyx mere pass ek news hai tum sab k liye
ridzy- kya howa??
arohi- main ek larkay se collage mei pyaar karti hoon...or wo bhi mujhse bohat pyaar karta hai..or hum 1 hafte baad shaadi...
-arjun put his hand on arohi's mouth
arjun- please arohi aisa mat bolo...main jaanta hoon mene jo kiya tha galat kiya tha..lekin mujhse zayada tumhai kahi bhi koi pyaar karne waala nai milega
ridzy- arohi arjun sahi bol raha hai..he luvs u
arohi- ye pyaar us din kaha tha..jab mene arjun ko bola tha k "i luv him"
samrat- dekh arohi tu apni life barbaad kardegi
arohi- lekin i luv him..or main usi se shaadi karoongi
nupur- arohi..kya tu khush reh payegi??
arohi- haan
nupur- nai tu koi usse pyaar nai karti..tu sirf arjun se pyaar karti hai
arohi- karti thi...lekin main apni lyf mei aage bar chuki hoon ab koi past meri zindagi mei nai hai..kyun k main ye seek gaye hoon k m the responsible for my future not my past
ridzy- or tu apna future kharab karrahi hai
arohi- bas...mene ye baat aap logo ko mere shaadi mei invite karne k liye bataye thi..mashwara lene k liye nai...mujhai bohat khush hogi agar tum log aogay warna...ap logo ki marzi..m getting late bye
-she left from there
-arjun is sad
-nupur put her hand on arjun's shoulder
nupur- sab theek ho jayega arjun
arjun- shayad ye mujhai bhi laga tha lekin ab..bas arohi kabhi mere nai ho sakti
nupur- arohi ki shaadi rokhne ka ab 1 hi tareeqa hai
samrat- kya?? jaldi bol
nupur- arjun..tum arohi se shaadi karlo..or tumhari hi shaadi hogi us din arohi se..or ye mera faisla hai
-everyone shocked

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged
brilliant part. loved it.

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Hiiiiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved all da couples
Sooooo cute
Poor arjun
Loved nupur plan
Cant wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 10:34am | IP Logged
nice update dear...........

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