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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
awesome mehr
uff u stopped it at the main part...D'ohLOLLOL...u bettr update soon..Evil Smile
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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
@sanaya- hii dear..oye main to chali dubai AR k part k bina [lolz] next part mei saare couple doongi..kyun k i have spring breaks lolz [:d] dont worry ab ye to dekhte hai samrat kya karta hai[=p] inshaAllah i will update asap just 4 ya=)<3 thank u so much for comments<3

@armaanksgfan- hii...thank u so much for ur comments<3 u cant w8 for AR dinner part right? or can u lolx=P

@shafoo- thank u<3

@prithvisanyo1- thanks a lot for taking out tym to read my ffz...n comments<3

@lindi- aww thanks a lot<3 dont worry spring breaks starts next week,,..so no skool tension=P <3

@ekta-monaya- thanks a lot dear<3 u made my day...will deff update asap<3 n samrat is a champ but in front of gunjan...we cant say anything lolz=D <3

@achoose- thank u so much dear<3

@kj- thanks a lot dear<3 suspence to ab har part mei create hone waala hai<3

@amona- thank u so much<3

@mayur-ki-deewani- thanks a lot dear<3 howz u?? long tym ago have talk to ya<3

@surat- thank u so much dear<3 will give u guyx big update next week...warna sanaya k chappal mujh tak pohanchnay mei daer nai lagegi lolx<3

@amira- wait hi karo beth k arohi k reaction ka..joking;) thanks a lot will update asap<3

@bhawna- thank u so much dear<3

@madhu- thank u so much..i meant to stop @ suspence lolz...will update asap<3

@anjali- thanks a lot<3 will update asap..

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
wow awsome update mehr but seriously hated ending point really wanted to see her reaction yar
cont soon
 

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 9:45am | IP Logged
nice update

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
@tanzeel- thank u so much dear dont worry will show u her reaction<3
@luv.mayuarti- thank u<3

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 4:49am | IP Logged
Part 8 was amazing

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
@sariska- thank u so much dear<3
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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Part 9 0f

purple- present
red- past
-arohi start walking
-nupur n arjun start follow her
nupur- arohi..arohi sun to sahi
arjun- arohi listen to me plzz arohi stop
-arohi is keep walking widout luking @ them..suddenly a car is coming so fast. its about to hit arohi, arjun saw it
-arjun jump n move her from the way
-they both on fall each other
-n got lost in each other
arjun- arohi??
-arohi suddenly saw him, cums in real world
-she slaps arjun
-nupur saw it n got shocked
nupur- arohi?? kya karrahi hai tu??
arohi- nupz..isse kehdo mujhse door hi rahay...kareeb ayega to sirf dard milega
-she start walking
-nupur grab her hand
nupur- arohi?? chali ja tu..lekin ek baat ka jawab de ke ja
arohi- kaisa jawab??
nupur- dont u still luv arjun??
arohi- nai
-arjun got shocked
arjun- arohi..plz aisa mat bolo..main janta hoon jo howa bohat bura kiya tha mene tumhare saath lekin..
arohi- explanation ki zaroorat nai hai...mere dil mei tumhare liye kuch nai hai..koi feelings..koi love nai hai
nupur- arohi?? ye kya bol rahi hai tu?? tera dimaag to theek hai na??
arohi- plz nupz...tu aisa mat bol...u know sirf tera hi pyaar mila hai mujhai mere puri lyf mei...or mujhai kisi or ka pyaar nai chaiye to in logo se boldo yaha se chale jaye
-arohi left from there
-arjun put his hand on nupur's shoulder
arjun- nupur sab theek ho jayega...arohi ko wo sab main doonga jo wo reserve karti hai\
nupur- lekin kab arjun?? jab arohi ko ye pata chalega k mera pyaar bhi behan ka pyaar nai hai to kya hoga uska??
arjun- nupur relax..arohi ko kuch nai pata chalega tum tension nai lo...ab arohi ko mere saath laane ki zimedaari tumhari or meri..deal??
nupur- deal=) n m sorry arohi k thappar k liye
arjun- shayad ye arohi ko bohat pehle kar dena chaiye tha
-arohi still walking on street n she realize y is she crying for arjun??
arohi- ye sab choro yaha se kuch kha peeke ridzy k pass jaoongi
-she goes in..n sees armaan
arohi- armaan??
armaan- yes
arohi- hiii...m arohi..u remember in da party??
armaan- party?? konsi i dont remember
arohi- wohi jo samrat ki new year party mei tha...jab tumne ridzy k saath dance kiya tha
armaan- oh now i remember
-suddenly ridzy cums
ridzy- kya yaad aaya??
arohi- ridzy tu yaha??
-arohi hugs ridzy
ridzy- main yaha dinner pe aaye hoon armaan k saath...n m sorry armaan mujhai aane mei thora late ho gaya
-she suddenly sees dat arohi doesnt luk dat happy
ridzy- arohi whats wrong??
arohi- umm nothing sab theek to hai actually i have to go na main baad mei baat karti hoon na
ridzy- arohi plz bata mujhai
-arohi tells her everything that happened
arohi- khush?? ab yaar mujhai jaana hai..i feel so sleepy
ridzy- tu khush nai hai na??
arohi- infact ab main bohat khush hoon..kyun k ab main usse apna dost nai samajh paoongi...kyun k ab mujhai sab pata chal gaya hai..m sorry i have to go now bye..bye armaan
ridzy- acha tu yaha to beth na..humare saath dinner karke jaana na
arohi- zaroor karti lekin u know m so sleepy sorry yaar...jaana hoga byee
ridzy- chal bye
arohi- bye armaan
armaan- bye
-now ridzy n armaan are together
ridzy- m so sorry armaan..wo pehle main late ho gaye phir arohi k saath bato mei lag gaye
armaan- its okay waise ek baat boloon?
ridzy- sure bolo na
armaan- tumhari aankh k neeche abhi bhi ek ansoo hai
ridzy- oh..wo ankh mei khachra chala gaya tha isi liye
armaan- tum to bohat hi ajeeb ho
ridzy- kyun??
armaan- mujhai apna dost bolti ho or phir jhoot bhi bolti ho
ridzy- wo arohi ki batein sun k bus rona aagaya
armaan- waise ek baat boloon??
ridzy- haan
armaan- mene notice kiya k jab tumne uski behan k pyaar waali baat suni tab tum thora zayada wo ho gaye
ridzy- tum mere dost ho tumse kuch nai chup hana chahti main
bohat pehle ki baat hai jab nupur k baap ne arohi ki maa se shaadi ki..jisse nupur ne ye soch liya k iska baap iske liye mar chuka hai..lekin tabhi arohi peda howi jo uski step sister thi...lekin us mei arohi k koi kusoor nai tha nupur ko arohi chaiye thi..lekin arohi or nupur ek jaise thay..lekin ek difference agaya unkay beach mei or wo ye tha k arohi ne apne baap ko or apni step sister donoon ko hate karna shuroo kiya...or tab main thi nupur ki best friend skool mei..or uski maa chahti k nupur arohi ko bohat pyaar de lekin ye sab baat nupur ki maa ne mujh ko boli kyun k wo mere best friend thi..or uski maa janti thi k main in sab ka mana nai karoongi...or mene ne mana bhi nai kiya...or nupur ki waja se main ne arohi se bohat kuch suna..lekin arohi ko baad mei samajh aa hi gaya..k us mei uski step sister ka koi kusoor nai hai or us ne mujh ko apni behan maan liya..lekin ye sab howa tha jab main bohat choti thi..main to ye bhi bhool chuki thi k arohi mere dost hai..mujhai yahi laga k wo mere sis hai..i forget every single thing ye bhi nai yaad raha k wo nupur ki behan hai mere nai
armaan- tum ye sab jaanti thi??
ridzy- nai mujhai ye baat 1 hafta pehle pata chali hai jab ye sab baatein nupur arjun ko bol rahi thi
armaan- m so sorry ridzy..lekin..
ridzy- its f9 armaan..mere dil ka boj halka howa..lekin is baare mei kabhi bhi arohi ko nai pata chalna chaiye,...warna uska to bharosa pyaar se uth hi jayega..pehle arjun or phir nupur
armaan- dont worry ye sab bhool jao...i feel so shame on my self
ridzy- y??
armaan- main tumhai kabhi samajh hi nai payaa...
ridzy- matlab?
armaan- like mere life mei mujhai itne struggles se deal karna para..lekin main ye nai samajh paaya k or logo ki life mei bhi struggles hotay hain..i mean jab mene tumhai airport pe dekha to mujhai ye samajh hi nai aaya k tumhare dil mei itna pyaar bhi ho sakta hai
ridzy- oh is mei tumhai sharminda hone ki zaroorat nai hai...mujhai bhi ye nai lagta tha k hum kabhi friends bhi banenge
-they both laugh
ridzy- oh m getting late main tumse kal baar karoon
armaan- sure lekin itni raat ko tum kaise jaogi??
ridzy- oh mujhai mere friend ne drop kiya tha..lekin abhi taxi se chali jaoongi
armaan- aray i will drop u home...dost hone k bahane itna to kar hi sakta hoon na
ridzy- lekin tum...
armaan- lekin tum late ho jaogay mere waja se..tumhare raaste mei nai ayega mera ghar ye sab mat bolna plzz...i will drop u home ya
-ridzy smiles
ridzy- okay
-now armaan drops her home
ridzy- byee
armaan- good night
-she start walking
-her phone ring
ridzy- armaan
armaan- ek baat bolna bhool gaya
ridzy- kya??
armaan- jabhi dil ka boj halka karna ho..m always here
-ridzy turn n see him standing...run towards him n hug him
ridzy- i will sure byee
armaan- byee
-she left
- there is nupur walking in the backyard..cuz weather is so good
-suddenly she sees mayank
nupur- mayank?? tum yaha raat k 10 bajay
mayank- sorry bolne aaya tha
nupur- 4??
mayank- wo office mei jaise main behave karta hoon waise nai karna chaiye tha
nupur- oh its okay
mayank- lekin ek or baat bhi bolni thi
nupur- wo kya?
mayank- yahi k tumhai job pe aana parega...i really need a assistant like u..lekin ek baat different hogi
nupur- really?? wo kya??
mayank- k ab hum friends bankay kaam karengay
-they both smiles
mayank- so friends??
nupur- friends
-mayank brings his hand up
-nupur hugs him
nupur- friends k liye itna to main bhi karti hoon
mayank- to chalo..mere liye coffee lao (saying in same way as he says in office)
nupur- filmy
-they both go inside the kitchen
-mayank drinks coffee n go
- now the nect day in the morning
-gunjan is taking attendance for basketball players. as soon she is done
gunjan- did i call everyone's name??
-suddenly a vocie cums- noo
gunjan- ur name?
voice- samrat shergill
-this part is done on his face

*hopefully u all like it, n sanaya...u must b happy dis tym kyun k all 4 couples r inWinkLOL*



Edited by missinguonly - 13 March 2011 at 8:22am

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