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Tum Mile (AR, MN, SG, AA) (Page 29)

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Amazing part.Smile

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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
@bahawna- thanks a lot dear<3

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
Part 8 of

red- present
blue- past
-gunjan is on bus stop, waiting 4 bus
-samrat is passing from there, sees gunjan
-samrat stops by
samrat- hii, gunjan??
gunjan- yes, samrat right??
samrat- haan, waise tumhai kaha jaana hai
gunjan- 24 blvd pe, mera collage waha hai
samrat-oh i can drop u there, i mean its in my way
gunjan- nai its okay aap ko takleef hogi mere waja se, main bas mei chali jaoongi
samrat- come on its in my way, koi problem nai hoga
-gunjan cumz n sit in front
gunjan- thankz
samrat- oh np so last year??
gunjan- huh??
samrat- last year hai collage mei??
gunjan- jee, aap kya kartay hain??
samrat- mujhse tum keh k baat karo, friends mei aap karkay baat nai hoti
gunjan- hum friends kab banay??
samrat- kyun?? nai banay kya??
gunjan- mere to bohat demands hain kisi ko apna friend bananay mei
samrat- really??
gunjan- yes
samrat- of course i can take those demands
gunjan- oh great,, to shayad hum friends ban saktay hain...waise mera collage aa chuka hai so byee thanks for the ride
-gunjan starts walking
-samrat starts walking wid her
gunjan- tum kaha arahay ho??
samrat- remember?/ mujhse poocha tha main kya karta hoon...main is collage ka basketball player hoon...or yaha practice k liye aaya hoon
gunjan- ohh interesting..lekin aise??
samrat- kya matlab?/
gunjan- aray practice k kapre different hotay hain..or practice to 2 ghantay baad hai
samrat- i know
gunjan- toh 2 ghantay yaha kya karogay??
samrat- kuch bhi
gunjan- waise m the new coach for basketball...so cya there...mere class start hone waali hai so i gotta go there byee
samrat- bye
-as soon gunjan left, samrat is worried
samrat- (to himself) aray ye kya kiya mene?? ab kaha se jaoon basketball team mei??? ye bhi na pehle nai bol sakti thi k ye coach hai arghhzz
-ridzy is calling samrat
samrat- hello...how r u ridzy??
ridzy- theek hoon main...tu suna?? kaha per hai??
samrat- yaar aise hi bahar hoon
ridzy- acha mujhai tujhai batana tha k main ghar pe nai hongi aaj...mujhai armaan k saath dinner pe jaana hai isliye
samrat- chal okay no problem yaar
ridzy- acha yaar baad mei baat karti hoon byee
samrat- bye
-in collage, they are announcing about basketball game dat is in 2 hours
samrat- kaha phas gaya yaar
-samrat goes to counter
samrat- ye basketball ki registration kaha hai??
-n start luking for it
-nupur is in mayank's cabin
mayank- m glad to see k tum aaj tym per aaaye ho
-suddenly nupur rememberz what arohi told her
nupur- mujhai aap se kuch kehna tha??
mayank- haan bolo
nupur- wo..umm...coffee peeni hai aap ko??
mayank- nai abhi to mood nai hai
nupur- acha mujhai kuch or bhi baat karni thi
mayank- jaldi bolo.,mere pass tym nai hai
nupur- dekho main tumhari assistant hoon or wohi rehna chahti hoon..mujhai apni wife banane ki koshish mat karo samjhay
mayank- kya?=S wife??
nupur- haan to kabhi tum ne apne baat karne ka tareeqa dekha hai..jaise koi husband apni wife se baat karraha ho...or kabhi assistant tumhari coffee banata hai kya??? mene ye job coffee banane k liye join ki hai?? main coffee apne ghar pe araam se bana sakti hoon samjhay na tum
mayank- ye coffee beach mei kaha se agaye?/
nupur- coffee side mei bhi nai rehti hai
mayank- dekho tum bohat ajeeb batein karrahi ho is waqt
nupur- excuse me...tum hote kaun ho mujhse ye sab bolne waale??
mayank- aray..
nupur- shut up...dont tlk to me...m leaving ur job gud bye
-she left from there
-after she got outside
-she realize she had said too much
nupur- (to herself) yaar kya karoon jaake sorry boloon??
-she turns, but cums back
nupur- (to herself) main kyun boloon sorry?? wo pehle bolay
-she left from there
-while on her way, she sees arjun in the car
-she goes to him
nupur-arjun? tum yaha??
arjun- nupur..tum yaha kaise??
nupur- wo aise hi aaye thi..tum kuch pareshaan lag rahay ho??
arjun- nai wo kuch nai
nupur- u can tell me if u want
arjun- apni galti pe pashta raha hoon
nupur- galti??
arjun-
us din pe jab arohi ne mujhse high skool mei bola tha she luvs me..lekin maine kabhi accept nai kiya...sirf dhoka diya usse..or aaj main sirf kash bol raha hoon..k kash mene arohi ko accept karliya hota..to aaj wo mere saath hoti
nupur- arohi tumhai kabhi bhi maaf nai kar sakegi arjun
arjun- main maafi 100 baar mangloonga...wo jaisa bolegi waise karoonga..bas all i want is arohi...i..i luv arohi
nupur- arjun...ab ur too late now..,acha yahi hoga k tum arohi ko bhool jao..hamesha hamesha k liye
arjun- no nupur its impossible...i luv her
nupur- but she doesnt luv u..tum usse hurt hi karogay
-arohi heard all this
arohi- arjun?? arjun singhaniya??
-a tear fell on her cheek
-nupur n arjun both shockedShockedShockedShocked
-this part is done

p.s- sorry for short part.. i was about to give kash dinner part in there...but have test so have to study..n i guess short parts are better than nothing;)



Edited by missinguonly - 03 March 2011 at 3:45pm

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
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Maan I hate yu Mehr! why did yu just ended i wanted to se the reaction of arohi m eagerly waiting Lolzzzz phaas gaya re samrat ab kaise jayega basketball couirt main? or why did he even said without thinking LOL then comes to nupur kitna bolti hia beecharre ko ek bhi mukka nahi diya boilne ka pata nahi kya kya bolke challe gayi but i know mayank will let her in again in the job! and phir arjuhi ka part aaya but yu ended it their Angryi want a updt soon as possible and no AR?? why not?? better have everyone in the next updt! Amazing Keep it up tc Cont soon warna chappale parregi!

Luv Sanaya


Edited by Sanaya-luv-arti - 03 March 2011 at 3:46pm

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
hiiiiiiii
awesome update
loved it
loved sammy and gunjan's scene
loved mayur fight
cant wait 4 arohi's reaction
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 5:03pm | IP Logged
tht was sooooooooooo niceeeeeeee

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 8:00pm | IP Logged
awesome part. loved it.
update soon.

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
aww thats lovely update...cant wait for the next u ended it up on arjuhi ayyyy waitin for the nxt and all the best for ur school dear ;)

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