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Tum Mile (AR, MN, SG, AA) (Page 25)

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 7:00am | IP Logged
nice vm......

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Hi Dear
Wow awesome vm
Lovely song
And loved the scenes
Thanks for PM

LoveSurat

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
loved it
awesome VM
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
lovely vm!!!

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 3:04am | IP Logged

beautiful...

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Mehr....HugHugHugHug
the VM is lovely..Embarrassed
 
im so sorry..for not commenting...CryCryCry
but i have been reading ur FF's and they r just awesome..u get bettr each time..ClapClapClapClap
love the arjuhi parts..of course..TongueEmbarrassed

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 10:03am | IP Logged
@armaanksgfan: thank u so much<3
@sanaya: m really sorry i forget to add u in my pm list now ur in..n m so sorry abt dat<3
@shafoo: its da title song..thanks<3
@lindi: thank u<3
@achoose: thanks<3
@prithvisanyo1: thanks a lot<3
@amira: thanks<3
@luv.mayurarti: thank u<3
@surat: thank u so much<3
@kashndsel4eva: thanks<3
@daniella: thank u <3
@amona: thank<3
@anjali: aww no need to b sorry dear<3 n thanks for reading it...also thanks for liking vm<3

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged
part 7 of
 

purple - present
green - past

-ridzy is practicing for volleyball game with her friend pooja
pooja- kya ridzy tu itna jaldi kyun khel rahi hai..chill hoke khel na, i mean pehle to aise tu nai karti thi practice
ridzy- ab volleyball ka hi career mera sab kuch hai na
pooja- matlab?? samrat, nupur, arohi, ye sab tere hain yaar
ridzy- per mere liye mera career hi sab kuch hai
pooja- kya ho gaya hai tujhai?? kaisi baatein karrahi hai??
ridzy- pata nai...abhi mera saara dhayan practice mei hi hai bas
-suddenly pooja sees a diamond bracelet in ridzy's hand
pooja- waise ek baat bata??
ridzy- kya??
pooja- pehle to practice k tym to sab jewelery utar deti thi, lekin aaj ye diamond bracelet pehni rakhi hai
ridzy- haan wo aise hi
pooja- waise hai bohat achi
ridzy- thanks
pooja- kaha se li??
ridzy- wo armaan ne di hai
-suddenly pooja catches the ball n runs toward ridzy
pooja- sach mei?? lekin kyun?? i mean tum logo ki kitni larai howi hai phir bhi?
ridzy- nai ab hum friends hain
pooja- really?? kab?? kaise??...i mean
ridzy-
kal shaam mei mujhai armaan ki call aaye thi
armaan- kahi bahaar dinner k liye jaana hai??
main- haan sure y not??
-main jab waha gaye to armaan waha pehle se tha
main- hii armaan
armaan- oh hii ridhima, please sit
main- waise aaj achanak dinner?? i mean..
armaan- oh wo i was getting bore, or main yaha akela hoon, i mean meri family india mei hai to isi liye socha tumhare saath hi dinner karne chala jaoon
main- oh ok
armaan- waise ek baat poochoon??
main- poocho
armaan- we r friends now right??
main- haan n m sorry about dat airport tym..mujhai laga k tum mere dost k saath battameezi karrahay thay or something
armaan- yaad hai tumne hi bola k last year ki saari batein bhula k new year celebrate karo..to phir wo baato ko bhool jao
main- haan
-armaan ne ye bracelet nikali
armaan- ye tumhare liye
main- this is beautiful...lekin mere liye kyun??
armaan- come on its a friendship gift yaar
main- lekin main ye kaise loon??
armaan- agar tum nai logi to mujhai yahi lagega, k hum abhi tak friends nai hain
main- thanks
-pooja is still lost in listening
-ridzy pushed her
ridzy- tu mili bracelet, ab khush??
pooja- waooo how sweet
-ridzy smiles
ridzy- wo to hai
pooja- ooooo ur lost
ridzy- no m not
pooja- yes u r
ridzy- no m not,,,,acha yaar main bohat thak gaye hoon,,,,kal baaki ki practice kartay hain..bye
pooja- bye
-after ridzy left from there
pooja- kya ridzy ne bye sirf baat change karne k liye bola??
-ridzy got home, she sees arohi n nupur are in her room talking
nupur- yaar kya bataoon, mene to kuch or hi socha tha mayank k baare mei or ye to kuch or hi nikla
arohi- really?? aisa kya socha tha?
nupur- mujhai laga k...
-suddenly nupur sees ridzy
nupur- aray ridzy...tu yaha?? kab aaye??
ridzy- bas abhi hi aaye hii guys
-arohi stands n goes to hug ridzy
arohi- hii ridzy dii..kaisi ho?? kaha thi
ridzy- theek hoon tum log bataein karo..main quick shower leke aati hoon wo practice se aaye hoon na is liye
arohi- okay
-ridzy goes from there
arohi- nupur chal continue kar..kya sochti thi mayank k baare mei??
nupur- mujhai laga wo lucha hai
arohi- kya?? lucha??
nupur- yaar hamesha jabhi miltay thay na hum...wo koi na koi filmy scene create karta tha isi lye
arohi- ohhh wowww...waise aaj kya kiya office mei??
nupur-
main office pohchi to waha mayank tha already
main- hii sir
mayank- hii tum 1 min late aaye ho
main- sorry wo mujhai pata  hi nai chala k main late ho rahi thi, next tym nai hoga..
mayank- acha ab zayada batein nai karo...mere liye coffee lao
main- jee acha
-phir main us k liye coffee lai, us ko dedi
-phir mene apna kaam karna shuroo kiya, to mere to adaat hai gaana sunte sunte kaam karne ki to main yuhin karrahi thi
-or mujhai mayank kab se awaaz de raha tha..lekin mujhai awaaz hi nai aaye
-to mayank aaya...he grabbed mei from my arm
mayank- kab se bula raha hoon, awaaz nai aati kya?/
main-oh sorry sir, main wo ipod..
mayank- mere cabin mei ye sab allow nai hai
main- next tym nai hoga sir
mayank- ye kya sir sir laga k rakha hai..mujhai mayank bola karo
main- okk mayank
mayank- waise mujhai wo file do jo subha sharma jee nai di hai
-mene file di
main- ye lo
-or us k baad
arohi- 1 min bas itna hi kaafi hai, or ab kya sochti hai tu mayank k baare mei??
nupur- k wo apne kaam k waqt bohat serious hota hai
arohi- tu pagal ho gaye hai..wo tujh pe apni biwi ki tarah hukum chala raha hai or tu uski tareef karrahi hai
nupur- matlab??
arohi- nupur tu usko kal boldena apni biwi baanane ki kosish mat karo mujhai..main tumhari assistant hoon aissistant ki tarah rakho
nupur- kya??
-now ridzy is done wid the shower
arohi- finally...waise dii aap ka game kab hai??
ridzy- saturday ko...mujhai samrat bula raha tha main aati hoon
nupur- okay
-nupur is thinking n tell herself "kya ho gaya ridzy ko?? bohat zayada hi ajeeb behave karrahi hai"
-samrat is in the kitchen making coffee
ridzy- sam?? tu yaha coffee bana raha hai mujhai bol deta
samrat- ridzy?? tujhai sab pata chal gaya hai na??
ridzy- kya sab??
samrat- tere or arohi k baare mei??
ridzy- kya farak parta hai yaar jo hona tha sab 12 saal pehle ho gaya
samrat- ye sab tujhai kis ne bola
ridzy- pehle mujhai sirf shak tha lekin ab yakeen ho gaya hai...k jo main 12 saal pehle sochti thi wo sahi tha
samrat- ridhima..plz yaar?? tu aisa mat soch ye masla hum sab milke solve karenge
ridzy- ab kuch nai hoga..aaj mujhai saare rishto ki samajh aagaye hai
samrat- matlab??
ridzy- matlab k arohi or mera koi rishta nai hai...lekin mera or nupur k hai..nupur is my step sister
-samrat is shocked
-ridzy face is also kind of sad

-this part is done now
p.s: i know u guyx are confuse but kahani mei twist aaya hai..n m sure k next part mei saara confusion khatam hoga...n now its basically telling about 12 years old story where they all were togetherEmbarrassed

~**~ Promo ~**~
nupur to mayank- dekho tum mujhai apni biwi banane ki koshish nai karo...main tumhari assistant hoon or wohi rehna chahti hoon
-mayank makes weird face
mayank- kya??

-i know u all wonder k y did i only give this part, cuz this part will b the funniest part in the next part ever<3



Edited by missinguonly - 19 February 2011 at 11:02am

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