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Tum Mile (AR, MN, SG, AA) (Page 18)

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
part 5-
 
wow
 
awesome
 
cute
 

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
awwwww!Smile
amazing job!Clap
I loved it!!Heart
update more soon!Smile
thanks for the pm!!Tongue
*anisha

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
@mahima: aww thank u so much dear<3 u made my day=) n m  glad 2 see u back<3
@luvmayurmaneet: thanks a lot<3

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
@anisha: thank u dear<3 will deff update m busy wid skool n practices!!=( so dont get dat much tym!!<3

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by missinguonly

@anisha: thank u dear<3 will deff update m busy wid skool n practices!!=( so dont get dat much tym!!<3
I completely understand!!!!!!!Smile
dont worry!LOL
update whenever you get the chance Smile

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 8:52am | IP Logged
thanks dear for understanding me<3

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 9:45am | IP Logged
Part 6 of


light pink - present
Pink - past

ridzy- yaar pata nai mujhai aisa kyun lagta hai k wo mujhse dosti karna chah raha tha
nupur- wo?? wo kaun?
ridzy- armaan, lekin kyun?? i mean usse to maine kya kya bola tha
nupur- shayad new year hai is liye yaar ab tu itna tension to mat lay...waise tension to mujhai hai abhi
ridzy- tujhai kis baat ka tension hai?
nupur- wohi mayank ka
ridzy- aray us ka tension abhi us bechare ne kya kiya hai??
nupur- wo....ek min
-suddenly they hear samrat's voice
nupur- ridzy ye awaaz to sun
ridzy- haan yaar ye samrat kisse baat karraha hai wo bhi aisi batein
nupur- kya??
ridzy- kuch to garbar hai
-they both go outside, see samrat is sitting on sofa
telling himself "waah kya larki thi"
-ridzy runs towards samrat
ridzy- samrat?? konsi larki??
samrat- tu yaha kab aaye??
ridzy- abhi bata na konsi larki waah waah thi??
samrat- nai yaar wo to aise hi
-suddenly ridzy's phone ring
ridzy- hello??
-arjun was on next phone
arjun- hello..ridhima??
ridzy- jee lekin aap kaun??
arjun- main arjun jis ne party mei arohi k saath dance kiya tha
ridzy- oh arjun oh aap kaise ho?? n khairyat aap ne mujhai call ki
-nupur is shocked, because of arjun calling ridzy
-nupur suddenly left from there
arjun- wo main aap se milna chahta hoon
ridzy- mujhse? kyun??
arjun- wo mujhai arohi k baare mei kuch baat karni hai
ridzy- acha to kaha milna hai
arjun- coffee shop mei 2 bajay
ridzy- okay i will b there
arjun- thanks bye
ridzy- bye
samrat- kis ka phone tha?
ridzy- arjun ka
samrat- arjun??
ridzy- haan jis ne party mei dance kiya tha arohi k saath
-without letting samrat say a word
ridzy- nupur kaha gaye?
samrat- wo bahar gaye hai i mean job per us ne bola wo ajayegi 3 ya 4 ghantay mei
ridzy- okay main tujhse baad mei baat karti hoon have to do quick shower
samrat- chal theek hai mujhai bhi kuch kaam se jaana hai
-they both hug each other
-ridzy left from there
samrat- shukar gunjan k baare mei bhool gaye
-arjun is in his house, still thinking of his past moments
arjun talking to himself- wo larki arohi kaise ho sakti hai?? wo bhi mene usse nai pehchaana...mujhai yakeen hai wo arohi nai hai, zaroor koi dhoka howa hoga, wo arohi ho hi nai sakti!!
suddenly a voice saying- wo arohi hi hai
-arjun turns back n sees nupur
arjun- tum kaun ho??
nupur- main nupur, kuch yaad aaya arjun??
arjun- tum to arohi ki??
nupur- sahi pehchanaa main arohi ki behan hoon, jis ki behan k pyaar ko tumne tukhra kay kahi phek diya tha, jis ki behan arohi ko apni behan nai bol sakti hai, or wo sirf tumhari waja se, sirf tumhari waja se arjun
arjun- dekho nupur, wo sab pehle ki baatein thi, ab ki baat kuch or hai, arohi phir se meri zindagi mei aaye hai, kismat humain milwana chahti hai
nupur- bas arjun..ye kismat ka lafz tumhari zubaan pe acha nai lagta or khabardaar agar tumne meri behan k kareeb aane ki bhi koshish ki to
arjun- lekin nupur..
nupur- bas bohat ho gaya..arohi ko ab dusri zindagi mili hai, usse mat cheeno wo zindagi, meri behan jaisi hai usko akela chor do
arjun- nupur main apni galtiyo ki maafi magna chahta hoon, or mujhai kismat ne ek or moka diya hai, agar wo phone nai aata to mujhai pata hi nai chalta k wo arohi thi jis k saath main tha
nupur- phone?? konsa phone??

arjun-
thore din pehle arohi ne mera phone tor diya tha, or us ne mere liye ek form fill kiya jis mei us ne apna naam likha or waha se aaj mujhai phone aaya
man- aap arohi sharma??
main- arohi?? jee ap??
man- dekhe yaha ek form fill kiya gaya tha or us mei kisi arohi sharma ka naam hai or ye number hai phone number mei...and congratz aap apple iphone win howe hain
main- oh thanks aap ye iphone mere address pe mail karwa denge cuz i dont think i will b able to cum
man- sure sir
arjun- or usi phone k baad mene ye realize kiya k wo arohi thi jis k saath mene itne din guzaare, jaha kismat ne humain har mod pe milaya
nupur- band karo apna ye drama, yahi drama ki waja se pehle bhi main apni behan ko kho chuki hoon ab dubara ye sab karne ki himmat bhi mar karna arjun
arjun- nupur plz dekho pehle ki baat kuch or thi lekin ab kuch or hai plz samjhne ki koshish karo
nupur- arjun ab bas bohat ho gaya..or ek baat yaad rakhna arohi ko nai pata chalna chaiye k main arohi ki behan hoon, wo sirf ye jaanti hai k ridzy us ki behan hai
arjun- lekin nupur...
nupur- bas arjun enough....agar arohi ko hurt nai karna chahte ho tu usse door raho
arjun- tum ye sab mujhse keh rahi ho?? tumne khud ne apni behan ko dhoke mei rakha howa hai or mujhai ye sab sikha rahi ho
nupur- mene apni behan ko kabhi dhoka nai diya hai
arjun- to ye sab kya hai?? ridhima uski behan tum uski dost ye sab ek dhoka nai hai to kya hai??
nupur-
bohat pehle ki baat hai jab arohi new york aaye thi or is k papa ne mere maa se shaadi karli or phir main peda howi jiski best friend ridzy thi...or main nai chahti thi k arohi mujhse door ho, kyun k main usse ek step sister nai balke ek sister ki tarah chahti thi or yahi sab karne k liye arohi bachpan se arohi apni behan ridzy ko maanti hai, kyun k agar wo ye jaanti k main uski behan hoon to wo mujhai apni behan nai maanti or apne dad ko apna dad nai samjhti
nupur- or isi liye mene isse itna bara jhoot bola hai
arjun- ye baat ridhima ko pata hai??
nupur- nai wo bhi ye nai jaanti hai, wo sirf arohi ko apni behan maanti hai
arjun- to wo sab party mei ek dost ki tarah milna or wo sab??
nupur- jhoot tha, ridhima or arohi donoon ek dusre k saath friends ki tarah rehti hai or yahi sach hai ye duniya samjhti hai
arjun- nupur lekin thats not right!!
nupur- kya sahi hai kya galat ye tum mujhai mat sikhao, mene ye sab batain tumhai ek dost ki haisyat se bataye hai, or main ye bharosa rakhti hoon k ye baat tum arohi or ridzy ko nai bataogay or ek aakhri baar arohi ka peecha chor do
arjun- nupur plz
-nupur ignores arjun n left from there!!
-n ridhima heard all this conversation
-this part is done!!

p.s: check part 5 on page 14 again<3 cuz vm has updatedEmbarrassed


Edited by missinguonly - 05 February 2011 at 10:08am

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Nice uptd...
but m little confus.... Arjun aur Arohi kab mille the aur aab ek dosre ko kaise pehjaane nahi rahe???? shad unka bachpan tha, right???

N why Ridhzi n Arohi ek dosre ko behn samjhti hai woh chupa rahi hai?

hope yeh sab confusion khatam ho jaye

plzz cont soon



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