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Tum Mile (AR, MN, SG, AA) (Page 14)

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 8:20am | IP Logged
@linda: thanks a lot dear<3 aww u cant understand, but i already start it m so sorry dear<3
@shaffy: m sorry to take long tym n m telling u guyx the reason in this part, m updating it now<3
@faaria: thanks a lot dear<3

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
@everyone: u will get update either today or tomorrow, was trying to do it now, but i cant do it now, but i will update asap, dont worry if not today will tomorrow=)<3
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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 9:01am | IP Logged
poor Nupur with her past :(
Armaan n Ridhima are funny
Love d nok chok between Arjuhi
love d nasdikiyaan between Mayur
Armaan feels sad for Ridhima, how cute
waitng for d next part..
thnkx for the pm


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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
@amira: aww dear luks lyk somehow ur sad, n somehow happy..lolx<3 thanks for reading my FF=) will deff give u next part pm<3

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Sorry.. culdn't comment on the last part...
 
Lovely updates..

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
part 5 of


blue- present
red- past

-now ridzy is on stage, announcing for the salsa dance, n calling people on stage to choose a girl for the boy with the dance
-and armaan there praying, that none of the girl pick his name except ridzy
-first ridzy call arohi on the stage
-ridzy hugs arohi
ridzy- arohi!!
arohi- app?? m sorry main ap ko nai janti
ridzy- yaad hai hum wo store mei milay thay, jab main laptop lene gaye thi
arohi- oh haan aap ridhima??
ridzy- of course yaar
-arohi about to pick up the name
ridzy- rukh yaar
arohi- kyun??
-ridzy call arjun on the stage
ridzy- ye larka tere saath perfect lag raha hai
arohi- ye saru!! tu pagal ho gaye hai kya?
ridzy- dekh yaar tum donoon ki height ek hi hai achay lago gay
arohi- per..
ridzy- mere liye please!!
arohi- okay
-arohi point to arjun
arohi- tum?? hello?? main sirf isi liye tumhare saath dance karrahi hoon, kyun k mere dost ne bola hai, warna mujhai koi shok nai hai tumhare saath dance ka!!
ridzy- arohi..baat sun..aaj new year hai, i think aaj tum logo ko friends ki taraf haath barhana chaiye wo sab kuch bhulake
arjun- tumhari dost tumse zayada samajhdar hai
arohi- tum? apni bakwaas band karo
ridzy- arjun, tum dosti ki taraf haath barahao
-arjun brings his hand up
arjun- friends??
ridzy- arohi haan bolday wo sab bhulakay jo howa last year mei
arohi- yes!!
-armaan heard everything that ridzy tells arohi
-now arjuhi are on the dance floor
ridzy- next i would like to call gunjan!!
-gunjan cum up
gunjan- ridzy?? mujhai salsa dance nai aata
ridzy- lekin tere partner ko to aata hai na
gunjan- matlab??
ridzy- gunjan, main samrat ko tera partner banaoongi, kyun k he is very good in salsa
gunjan- lekin ridzy...
ridzy- tere to samrat se dosti hai na phir kya problem hai?
gunjan- mujhai koi problem nai hai, lekin samrat ko kis k saath dance karna ho u know yaar..
ridzy- samrat hamesha mere baat manta hai
-without listening to gunjan, she decides samrat for gunjan
-samrat n gunjan are on dance floor now too
ridzy- last but not least...my best friend nupur!!..main janti hoon nupur k liye kon acha rahega... wohi jo us k liye perfect lagta hai...mayank!!
-nupur is shocked!!
nupur- (to herself) oye ye kya kiya ridzy ne?? mayank choose karliya?? hamesha ki tarah ye wapis koi filmy scene create nai karay!!
-mayank and nupur are on dance floor
-ridzy is out from the stage now
-armaan walks toward her
armaan- dance?
ridzy- dance tumhare saath??
armaan- main janta hoon hum bohat larai kartay hain..lekin abhi thori dear pehle tumne hi bola na "last year ki bato ko bulake humain dosti ki taraf haath barhana chaiye"
ridzy- wo to mene arohi or arjun k liye bola tha
armaan- lekin chalo tumhai ye main bol raha hoon
ridzy- lekin??
armaan- dance?? please??
-armaan brings his hand up
-ridzy has no choice except saying yes!!
video!!- 

 
-now the party is over!!
-ridzy saw nupur is sitting on bed n luks kinda worried
ridzy- nupur?? kya howa?? party mei maza nai aaya??
nupur- ridzy tujhai party mei mere liye mayank ko choose karna zaroori tha??
ridzy- kyun kya howa?
nupur- hoga kya jo hona tha wo kal ho chuka hai
ridzy- matlab?? kya howa kal??
nupur-
kal jab hum newspaper mei job ki baat karrahay thay na to mujhai ek job dikhi owner's assistant ki, or mene socha k chalo main apply karti hoon or mene call ki
men: hello?
main: hello..main nupur, or mene abhi abhi newspaper mei ap ki company mei ek job dekhi hai owner's assistant ki
men: oh right right!! dekhe main koi assistant jald se jald chahta hoon to aap abhi 1 ghantay mei mere pass interview k liye aa sakti hain??
main: jee bilkul...lekin main konsay documents laoon??
men: nai koi document nai laaye, mujhai sirf aap ko janna hai, kyun k main chahta hoon k mere saath hi kaam karay mera assistant, to wo sab main aap ko sikhadoonga
main: okay bye cya in an hour
ridzy- to?? tu gaye??
nupur- haan gaye..lekin
ridzy- lekin?
nupur-
mene usse itni phone pe baat ki or uska naam lena hi bhool gaye, or mene socha wapis call karoongi to wo to yahi sochega kitni bewaqoof hai or interview ka phone pe hi mana kardega, to main office chali gaye or mene wo larki, jo counter pe help k liye thi, usse bola k yaha kaun owner's assistant k liye job chahta hai na, to us ne mujhai us aadmi k cabin mei bithaya
larki- mam aap yaha 2 min wait karay sir aate hi hongay lunch karkay
main- jee okay!!
-or jab main wait karrahi thi na to mene mayank ko dekha
main- (to my self) ye yaha kya karraha hai?? kahi koi filmy scene nai karday jaise us din samrat k ghar kiya tha
-mene apna mu modliya, taake wo mujhai dekh nai paaye!!
-mayank mere taraf aaya
mayank- aap aye hain owner's assistant ki job k liye?
nupur- haan
mayank- to aap us taraf mu mod kar kyun khari hain?
nupur- nai ye paintings ko dekh rahi hoon
mayank- painting?? waha koi painting hi nai hai
nupur- oh wo aise hi
mayank- 1 min..mene ap ki awaaz kahi suni hai
nupur- hmm
-mere pass or koi choice hi nai rahi main mur gaye mayank ki taraf
mayank- aap?
main- aap?? ap to wo na jo samrat k ghar thay (jaise mujhai kuch pata hi na ho)
mayank- haan
main- acha mujhai late ho raha hai, aap interview start karay?
mayank- jee nai, main ap ko janta hoon thora bohat, or mujhai lagta hai k ap mere assistant ban sakti hai
main- lekin??
mayank- dekhe main janta hoon aaj samrat ne new year party rakhi hai, to ap jaldi mei hongi, to ek kaam kartay hai ap ki job to pakki hai to hum salary ki baat monday ko hi karlangay
main- jee theek hai bye!!
ridzy- to is mei itni pareshaan??
nupur- pareshaan to hongi na, wo mera boss hai or tu ne mujhai hi us ka dance partner bana diya!!
ridzy- to dance k tym kuch baat ki us ne tujhse?
nupur- nai
ridzy- to phir itni pareshaani kya hai??
nupur- chal chor ye sab..tu achanak kaha chali gaye thi stage se party mei salsa dance ka announce kar kay?
ridzy- haan yaar wo to bohat ajeeb tha, uski to saari baat batani hai mujhai
nupur- kyun?? aisa kya howa tha?
-ridzy smiles!!


-this part is done now, i will continue next part from their conversation<3

-important notice-
most u of u has been telling me to update, n i did it now, cuz of the video that is there of their dancing...please with this update thanks my friend saba to make this vm=) the title banner n the vm is by saba so basically, all the art work in here is by saba (ssaba) so thanks a lot saba from me to u<3 n i was waiting for this vm to update next part, n this vm was done yesterday, so i update this part today,,,sorry for the long tym waiting guyx=)



Edited by missinguonly - 05 February 2011 at 10:07am

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
Very nice update dear...

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@divya: dont b sorry dear<3 n thanks a lot for reading this part n last part<3

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