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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 7:38am | IP Logged
hi guys... me back again... i knew its quite earlier to post another STORY because
some of YOU people are busy in their studies/skedules.... but problem is that... the treatment of
my story is quite recent... so if i'll post it later... the mood will quite spoil... specially some of conversation were totally lost their meanings... so i m posting it now...
i m XTREMELLY VERY SORRY....
as usual lots of loopholes... mistakes... spelling/tenses... loose elaboration...bad script....
all are there.... but i'll try to keep in my mind this time... that there should be a PROPER CASE...
or DETECTION... although on limited basis... cz i  not good in DETECTION or write a CLASSICAL CRIME case/stories... like some XCILLENT WRITERS belongs to IF GANG... so HOPE is there....  
ya this time i use MY STORY according to BHAVNAB MAA"M suggestion... THANX MAA"M...
any resemble with FIREWORKS are conincidental.... so dont take serious steps...LOL
always welcome YOURS precious FEEDBACK... CRITICISM will entertain on prior basis....

NOTE: if any of my READER suggest any APPROPERIATE TITLE for this story... i m
             really obliged...
 


my story
      ADOPTED BROTHER

DAYA is going to leave bearue with FREDDIE for some investigation.... suddenly he comes near
to ABHIJEET desk... where ABHIJEET is doing some file work....

DAYA: ABHI... raat 08:30 per tum ko meray sath kahein chalna hay.... tayyar rehna...
ABHIJEET: hain... kahan??
DAYA: bus kahein chalna hay na....
ABHIJEET: magar pata tou chalay kay kahan jana hay??
DAYA(bit anger tone): kyun!!! pata chalan zaruri hay kiya???
ABHIJEET: nahi... mera matlub tha... kahein shadi mein jana hay tou main ready ho jaon...
DAYA: tum jesay ho wesay hee achay lagty ho... (pointing towards him) yehi kapray theek hain...

he again remind him and left bearue with FREDDIE.... at 08:30 DUO move from bearue towards that strange place....

ABHIJEET: tum nay bataya nahi kay hum kahan ja rahay hain???
DAYA: tum ko kidnap ker kay lay ja raha hun...
ABHIJEET smiles: hmmmmmmmmm.... aur badlay mein kiya mango gay???
DAYA: main CID say demand karunga kay meri SALARY barhai jayey aur mujhay ek new quallis bhi chahyey....
ABHIJEET(still smiling): hain.... yaar achi bhali tou quallis hay... ab kiya tum ko HELICOPTER chahyey!!!
DAYA(wink him with smile): khayal bura nahi hay... boss... wesay bhi main nay kabhi HELICOPTER chalaya nahi hay...
ABHIJEET(with laugh): acha... mujhay laga tha kay tum BIWI mango gay...
DAYA: hahaha.... ye bhi bura nahi hay... boss....
DAYA: wesay main soch raha hon....
ABHIJEET(interrupts): kay shadi ker lon.... hain na....
ABHIJEET(again in funny tone): itnay log meri AWESOME smile per fida hain... tou ab shadi ker                                                    he leni chahyey.. .. hahaha.... hain na!!!

DAYA look bit shy.... ABHIJEET always like to watch this touch of his personality... its really give him a pure aura... he smiles again....

ABHIJEET: kiya hua.... larki sochnay lagay ho kiya!!!
DAYA: nahi main soch raha hun kay humein ACP Sir ki shadi karwa deni chahyey... kiya khayal hay??
ABHIJEET(smiles again): aisay khayal sirf tum ko he aa saktay hain... aaj kal kiya FREDDIE kay    sath  zyada rehnay lagay ho....
DAYA: nahi boss.... main sach mein yehi soch raha hun...
ABHIJEET: kiya kehnay hain.... DAYA sahab kay....
after a pause... he asks
ABHIJEET: wesay larki kaun hogi....
DAYA(with smile): KAREENA say karwa detay hain....
ABHIJEET(with laugh): aur SAIF...
DAYA: jo ACP Sir aur KAREENA kay beech aayeyga... usay meri laash say guzarna paray ga....
ABHIJEET punched him with laugh: wesay tum nay abhi tak bataya nahi kay hum kahan ja rahay hain???

DAYA stopped quallis and pointing to that place... its a cINEPLEX....
ABHIJEET(shocking tone): yahan.... kiya kisi say pooch taach karni hay....
DAYA: tum chalo tou.....

both stepped down from quallis and entered inside the CINEPLEX.... DAYA entered in the hall...
he saw his n ABHIJEET seat number and then sit and say...

DAYA: betho....
ABHIJEET: magar DAYA....
DAYA: hum yahan film dekhnay aayey hain....
ABHIJEET jus look him: ACP sahab ko malum hay??/
DAYA(quite relax): nahi....
ABHIJEET: magar...
DAYA: ABHI....is film mein jo bacchi hay na... us ki acting buht hee achi hay...
ABHIJEET(bit relax now): mujhay tou is actor ki her film he achi lagti hay... buhat hee acha actor hay....
DAYA(with smile): acha... mujhay tou is ki acting pasand nahi....
ABHIJEET: DAYA....
DAYA: hmmmm.... chalo... movie start ho gai hay...

both saw the whole movie with complete enjoyment.... people cameout with them praising film and their cast....

ABHIJEET: dekha... main keh raha tha... is actor ki her film achi hoti hay... aur is kay eye aur
                     face expressions tou kamal kay hoty hain....
DAYA: hmmmm... mujhay tou bacchi ki acting achi lagi.... is actor ki acting bhi theek hee thi....
ABHIJEET(forcefully): buhat achi thi....
DAYA: hmmmmmmmmmmm...

both going back to their places.... after few minutes....
DAYA: boss.... maza aaya!!!
ABHIJEET: haan yaar.... aaj itnay arsay baad koi movie dekhi hay... tumharay sath.... wesay tumhein is ka khayal kesay aaya???
DAYA: aisay hee....

on next morning.... both meet at bearue....
ACP: DAYA kal tum aur ABHIJEET kahan thay???
DAYA and ABHIJEET both see each other....
ABHIJEET: wo.... wo Sir.... hum log...
DAYA(very low tone): Sir kal hum movie dekhnay gayey thay.... ye mera idea tha Sir... main ABHIJEET ko  zabardasti lay gaya tha...
ACP: kaun sii movie!!!
DAYA: KAALO...
ACP(changes his tone): kesi hay movie.... mujhay bhi meray dost nay recommend ki hay...
both say... Sir buhat achi hay... you must watch it...
DAYA jus saw ABHIJEET and say to ACP...
DAYA: Sir us movie mein bacchi ki acting buhat hee achi hay...
ABHIJEET: Sir us actor... ADITIYA ki acting ka bhi jawab nahi...
DAYA: Sir mujhay tou ADITIYA ki acting kuch khas nahi lagi....
ABHIJEET: jee nahi... Sir us ki acting bhi superb hay... DAYA na... us say jealous ho raha hay...
DAYA smile strangley....
FREDDIE(in hurry): Sir... aap nay na...
DAYA(interrupts): FREDDIE tum.... haan kiya hua.... tum chalo meray sath...
he jus grab FREDDIE with him.... ABHIJEET and ACP were quite confused with DAYA's attitude....
ABHIJEET clearly feel... there is somthing inside this....
he grab FREDDIE later...
ABHIJEET: FREDDIE.... tum say DAYA nay kuch kaha hay...
FREDDIE: nahi Sir....
ABHIJEET: meray baaray mein...
FREDDIE: nahi....
ABHIJEET: phir wo tum ko lay kyun gaya tha.... wahan say... kuch tou chal rah tha us kay dimagh mein...
FREDDIE: Sir... DAYA Sir mujhay daantein gay....
ABHIJEET(in anger): magar main tumhein maarun ga...
FREDDIE: Sir DAYA Sir nay mujh say SHART lagai thi... kay aap apny favourite actor ki burai sun ker gussay mein aa jao gay....
ABHIJEET: kitnay ki SHART thi....
FREDDIE: 500 rs ki...
ABHIJEET: DAYA... baaz nahi aayeyga... main bhi kahun kay DAYA ko achanak film dekhnay ka khayal  kahan say aa gaya.... ab dekhna...
FREDDIE: Sir aap DAYA Sir ko daantein gay...
ABHIJEET: FREDDIE... main kabhi DAYA ko daant sakta hon... haan... bus dekhna...

DAYA and ABHIJEET going back after a hectic day... both chit chat... suddenly DAYA pressed the qualls break... DUO saw a girl crying... a car is there at her right side....
ABHIJEET: ye kiya hay...
DAYA: boss...
ABHIJEET: chalo dekhtay hain...
both came out... ABHIJEET ask that girl...
ABHIJEET: kiya hua MAA'M???
GIRL: hum yahan per nayey aayein hain.... meray father ko HEART ATTACK hua hay... aur meri car bhi kharab ho gayii hay... please Sir help me.... both watch the car... inside it a small kid seated looking scared he is my brother... plz humein kisi hospital tak pohancha dein....
ABHIJEET: hum abhi aap kay father ko hospital lay jatay hain... hum log...
DAYA(interrupts): yahan say guzar rahy thay tou aap ki car dekh ker apni car rok di...
ABHIJEET saw him and then grab that man with DAYA's help...
DAYA: boss.... ye tou....
ABHIJEET saw him and then move to the girl: MAA'M i m sorry magar ye tou... i mean... in ki tou maut ho gayii hay...
GIRL: kiya.... she hugged the kid and crying loudly.... ABHIJEET see her in sad mood... but DAYA... his senses feel somthing wrong.... he saw that kid keenly... the kid was looking scared even he just try to came out from the girl arms... as well GIRL said they are stranger in this city so why she took that way....
ABHIJEET called to ACP.... and told him about the incident... ACP said that he takes GIRL and that KID to his house and DAYA also stay at his house too... ABHIJEET also called for ABMULANCE and LOCAL POLICE too... both came fast and take out the body although DAYA and ABHIJEET take the GIRL and KID in ABHIJEET house instead of CID bearue....
DAYA: boss... mujhay tou ye larki... saheh nahi lug rahi hay... aur us bacchy ko dekha... kitna tensed tha...
ABHIJEET: DAYA... us kay father ki maut ho gayii hay... tum bhi na....
DAYA: pata nahi... magar boss... mujhay kuch aajeeb lug raha hay....
ABHIJEET: dekhtay hain....

on next morning.... ABHIJEET and DAYA move towards bearue... they want that KAJAL and FREDDIE took them at bearue but after a discussion... ACP said because the GIRL only knows DAYA and ABHIJEET so DAYA could bring them...
DAYA moves on his way....  take some food items.... he rang the bell.... when try to knock the door...
DAYA: arry.... darwaza tou khula hua hay???
DAYA enter inside.... place food items on table
DAYA: MAA'M.... hello.... koi hay!!!
he take out his gun and and heard the voice of door closing.....

ABHIJEET and VIVEK came from some case work... on their way... ABHIJEET continously trying to call...
ABHIJEET: kub say DAYA ka phone try ker raha hun... magar phone lug he nahi raha hay....
VIVEK: Sir DAYA Sir tou aap kay ghar gayey hain na...
ABHIJEET: haan VIVEK.... chalo ghar chaltay hain....
they came on ABHIJEET house... saw DAYA's quallis...
ABHIJEET: DAYA yahan hay... tou phone kyun nahi utha raha hay....
both at doorstep but astonish to see...
ABHIJEET: arry.... darwaza tou khula hua hay???
both entered....
ABHIJEET: DAYA..... DAYA.... MAA'M....
VIVEK: DAYA Sir.... kahan hain aap???
suddenly ABHIJEET saW somthing and rushed towards it.... the GIRL is shoted.... some blood... bullet shells.... ABHI got DAYA's CID BADGE, his VALLET and GUN too....
ABHIJEET: VIVEK.....
VIVEK: Sir.... ye tou...
ABHIJEET: haan ye larki mar gayii hay.... dekho yahan ek baccha bhi tha... wo hay!!!
          pata nahi yahan kiya hua hay!!
VIVEK found that kid totally in sane but alive from the backside of sofa... but no sign of DAYA is here... ABHIJEET call to ACP...
ABHIJEET: Sir aap foran meray ghar chalay aayey... DAYA ko (his voice was bit wet, watching those blood and shells)... kisi nay shayed kidnap ker liya hay....
ACP: kiya???? kub???????
ABHIJEET: Sir mujhay khud kuch samajh nahi aa raha hay.... aap yahan foran aa jayey....
ABHIJEET and VIVEK were totally silent.... they dont want to think any bad result.... either to
belive is somthing painful... so silence is the best way...

After few minutes... all team come... after seeing every possible evidance...
ACP: wo baccha he kuch bata sakta hay.... magar lagta hay.... kafi log thay.... VIVEK tum aur FREDDIE  in blood samples ko, laash ko aur shells ko SALUNKHY kay pass bhej do  

later.... every possible things is happened... that blood sample matched with DAYA's blood group, the GIRL shoted by some other gun... some bullets are from DAYA's gun and some from few other tpyes of gun...

the life of all CID members specially ABHIJEET and the bearue were surrounded by a gloomy sadness... everyones was trying his best... to investigate on maximum level... get any clue about DAYA... but failed...

at bearue, ABHIJEET fingers touches every personnels of DAYA... his CID BADGE... his GUN and atlast on his VALLET, he open it and shocked to see his PICTURE.. he grab this PIC outside... its a PIC of both but DAYA folded that PIC in this way that only ABHIJEET face was shown... ABHIJEET eyes get wet... he also touches something like some cards... papers... suddenly his fingers feel something strange to touch... he turned his back from the team and take out that strange thing... its a simple FEMALE GOLD BRACELET... very DELICATE and BEAUTIFUL... ABHIJEET get shocked... he never thought either in dreams to see such thing inside DAYA's vallet....

he asks to ACP...
ABHIJEET: Sir... main ye rakh lun... jub DAYA aayey ga tou usay day dunga...
ACP console him by placing his hand on his shoulder and say: acha theek hay....

suddenly bearue phone is ringing... VIVEK get the call and said...
VIVEK: ok hum abhi aatay hain....
he turned towards ACP and ABHIJEET and said...
VIVEK: Sir, hospital say phone tha... us bacchay ko hosh aa gaya hay...

all the team move their way to the hospital.... team meet with the DR...
DR: ACP sahab... bacchy ko hosh aa gaya hay... magar wo buhat dara hua hay...
ACP: hum us say baat ker saktay hain na...
DR: jee zarur... magar pyar say....
ACP: beta kesay ho aap...
the kid was so scared... either trying to escape himself... ABHIJEET come near... the kid recognize him he grab his hand and trying to say somthing...
KID: wo uncle... wo uncle... un ko maar diya....
ABHIJEET: kis nay un ko maara???
KID: wo log.... he is shivering and started crying...
ABHIJEET grab him... pat him...
KID: wo uncle buhat laray thay...
ACP: acha... wo larki tumhari behan thi....
KID move his head in NEGITIVE... while still weeping... everyones shocked...
ACP: tou phir kaun thi???
KID: pata nahi... unhun nay hum say lift li thi....
ABHIJEET: hum say??? matlub tum aur!!!
KID: meray papa!!!
ABHIJEET: oh my GOD... yani jo aadmi HEART ATTACK say mara wo is bacchy ka baap tha...
VIVEK: acha tumhara naam kiya hay???
KID: Rahual...
VIVEK: acha Rahul... un uncle ko kiya wo log apnay sath lay gayey thay???
KID: haan... car mein...
FREDDIE: car dekhi thi tum nay... kaun say rang ki thi... kuch yaad hay...
KID: wesi jesi in kay pass hay (pointing to ABHIJEET)... MAROON color ki...
ABHIJEET: Sir hum quallis mein thay...
after that... he was again crying...
ACP: VIVEK aisi saari cars ka pata chalao... mujhay ek ghanty mein saari report chayey...

After prolonged hours... DAYA open his eyes...
DAYA: ahhhhhhahhhh... awweeeewee... ye kahan hun main???
he saw himself in a dark... swampy place... full of wounds... and with two holes of bullets... his cloths were too sticky with blood and mud.... he feels extreme pain.... he try to stand up... but smash down and again black out....

ABHIJEET get a call from a LOCAL area POLICE STATION that someone found a wounded guy who is much  resemble to a CID officer DAYA in jungle....
all the team rushed to that area.... in POLICE STATION...
ABHIJEET: jee INSPECTOR... kahan hay wo aadmi???
INSPECTOR: Sir, ek dihaati nay us ko dekha aur phir humein ittala ki... abhi wo hospital mein hay.. magar Sir us ki halat buhat kharab hay....
ACP: wo aadmi kahan hay jis nay usay dekha tha....
INSPECTOR: Sir main nay usay rokay rakkha hay....
ACP: theek hay... hum usay sath lay jatay hain....
they rushed to the hospital... where they find DAYA..... ABHIJEET became in shock state...
IS HE DAYA??? he touched him and feel so sad... even he want to cry but compose himself (forcefully)....
ACP: FREDDIE, DAYA ko foran CITY hospital shift karo.... aur tum (pointing to that dihati)
     tum humaray sath chalo... wo jagah humein dekhao.... jahan DAYA tum ko mila tha....
ACP and ABHIJEET move with that dihati... he show them that place where he found DAYA... the surrouning area got blood drops... but these drops comes from long way... it means DAYA moves from the main place... after searching these clues.... ABHIJEET get tyre marks and blood signs... he took that tyre marks which were in much good state due to swamp muddy area... he get back dihati with thanks... and going back with ACP to the hospital to see DAYA and knows about his recent health condition....
ACP: DR ab DAYA kesa hay... wo theek ho jayeyga na???
DR: filhaal kuch kehna mushkil hay.... hum poori koshish ker rahay hain...
ABHIJEET: DR... please kuch karein... DAYA ko kuch nahi hona chayey....
DR: we all trying our best.... dua karein kay un ko hosh aa jayey...

on next morning..... DR called to ACP and want to meet him....
DR: aap mein say ABHI kaun hay???
ABHIJEET: main.... kyun!!!
DR(surely): aap DAYA kay BHAI hain na???
ABHIJEET (with emotional tone): jee... per kiya hua hay DR???
DR turned to ACP: DAYA ko hosh aa gaya hay... ACP sahab... and he first said... ABHI...DR turned towards ABHIJEET thatswhy i am asking who is ABHI!!!
both feel relax with happiness....
DR: main nay DAYA ki health condition ko discuss karnay kay liyey aap ko bulaya hay...
ABHIJEET: DR DAYA theek hay na!!!
DR: ya sure... magar filhaal DAYA ko aaram aur therepy ki buhat zarurat hay... usay driving aur maar dhaar say bhi door rehna hay... proper diet kay sath movement mein ihtiyat karni hay... and then pointing to ABHIJEET buhat khayal rakhna hay us ka....
ABHIJEET: kiya hum DAYA say mil saktay hain???
DR: jee zarur... wo aap logun ka hee intaizaar ker raha hay....
ACP and ABHIJEET rushed towards the DAYA room... he getup but ABHIJEET...
ABHIJEET: tum letay raho... DAYA....
DAYA hugged ABHIJEET... and said
DAYA: boss mujhay laga.... ab nahi mil paonga....
ABHIJEET: fazul bakwaas ki zarurat nahi hay....
ACP grab DAYA's hand: mujhay malum tha mera bahadur sipahee zarur wapis aayey ga... hain na DAYA...
DAYA ask about everyone and in one call of ABHIJEET everyone is here....

DAYA and ABHIJEET move to home... DAYA feels very happy... jeep stopped at DAYA's residance... both stepped down and then enter inside the house.... DAYA sit on sofa in relaxing mood.... ABHIJEET take out a baggage...
DAYA: kis ka saman la rahay ho... boss...
ABHIJEET: apna...
DAYA look quite confuse...
DAYA: koi khas wajah???
ABHIJEET: haan
DAYA: kiya???
ABHIJEET: mujhay ACP sahab nay kaha hay kay kyunki tumhari.....
DAYA(interrupts in aggressive tone): jaan ko khatra hay... is liyey tum meri rakhwali karo... hain na!!!
ABHIJEET(with smile): nahi... balk tumhari AWESOME smile say... kafi logun ko khatra hay... is liyey main us ka khayal rakkhun...
DAYA(relaxed, closed his eyes and place his head on back): hmmmmm... kis ka khayal rakkho... meri smile ka!!!
ABHIJEET(corrected him): AWESOME smile...
DAYA(with smile): haan... AWESOME smile ka.....
ABHIJEET: nahi...
DAYA(open his eyes in shock): phir kis ka....
ABHIJEET(with smile): un logun ka jo us AWESOME smile say ghayal hongay....
DAYA start laughing....
DAYA:ABHI.... tum bhi na....
DAYA(with smile): wesay ABHI kiya waqai meri smile AWESOME hay???
ABHIJEET(in naughty tone): mujhay tou nahi lagta...
DAYA(in sad mood): kyun!!!
ABHIJEET(in that naughty tone): main abhi tak ghayal jo nahi hua tumhari us AWESOME smile say... un logun say pochna paray gay jo ghayal huay hain...
both start laughing... ABHIJEET go inside check every door, window... every exit and entering point... DAYA watch these thing carefully... but dont say anything.... he say...
DAYA: boss... bhook lag rahi hay...
ABHIJEET: kiya!!! tou kiya mujhay khana bhi banana paray ga....
DAYA: aur jharo bartan bhi... hahah
ABHIJEET grab his neck: kiya???!!!
DAYA still laughing, ABHIJEET going to call to a HOME DELIVERY... DAYA again said...
DAYA: pasteries bhi mangwa lena....
ABHIJEET: why???
DAYA pointing on his tummy....
DAYA: ta kay kal jogging ker sako....

at night... both chit chat and taking coffee too made by ABHIJEET.....
DAYA: boss... kaun thi wo larki?? kuch pata chala??
ABHIJEET: haan... choti moti chori ki report thi... us kay khilaf.... us nay
          lift li thi... aur... shayed wo log us bacchy ko kidnap karna chatay thay...
          magar beech mein tum aa gayey.... tou un ka plan chopat ho gaya.... larki bhi mar gayii
          aur wo tum ko utha ker lay gayey....
DAYA: aur wo baccha???
ABHIJEET: wo hospital mein hay... theek hay ab...
DAYA: mera khayal hay... meri chalai hui goli say bhi koi zakhmi hua hay...
ABHIJEET: pehchan lo gay kisi ko??
DAYA: mushkil hay boss... bang bang kay baad hosh hee nahi tha...
ABHIJEET... chalo...
DAYA: ok boss... mujhay tou ab neend aa rahi hay... tum kahan so gay??
ABHIJEET(in sad voice): bus sahab.... jahan aap bolo gay... so jaonga....  
DAYA(with smile): haan.. yahan zameen per so jao... kal say kaam theek karna...
ABHIJEET grab his neck but he is still laughing....
DAYA: wesay tum coffee achi bana letay ho... kal say is kay paisay alug say milein gay... and after that he rushed to his room and close the door...

on next morning... ABHIJEET enter in his room... DAYA was in deep sleep... place a paper on his bedside and left...  after reaching at bearue... he is busy in his skedule.... his phone rings...
ABHIJEET: haan DAYA... uth gayey???
DAYA: jee BARAY BHAI...
ABHIJEET: hain... ab ye kiya hay....
DAYA: paper mein tou kuch aisa he likha hay.... jesay tum meray BARAY BHAI ho.... like
      breakfase theek say karna...
      medicine lay lena
      zyada move mut karna etc etc....
ABHIJEET: tou kiya ghalat likha hay!!
DAYA: nahi ghalat tou nahi likha... magar boss ek confusion hay...
ABHIJEET: kiya???
DAYA(with smile): tum ko tou main nay kaam per rakkha hay na...
ABHIJEET(change his tone): jee sahab... saheh kaha aap nay...
DAYA: tum wapis kub aao gay???
ABHIJEET(in naughty voice): kyun.. tum mujhay miss ker rahy ho kiya???
DAYA(with laugh): nahi miss tou nahi ker raha... magar wo breakfast kay bartan kaun dhoyeyga...
ABHIJEET... DAYA... aa ker bata hun tujhay....

DAYA put off his cell with laugh... and then go out side... he want to use his quallis but
he did not get its keys.... he take TAXI.... and move to his way to the hospital to meet with that kid...
he first meet with the DR and then go to meet that kid.... after few minutes... ACP, ABHIJEET and VIVEK enter in the hospital... DR saw them and welcomed them...
DR: aary ACP sahab... aap log yahan... main tou samjha kay...
ABHIJEET(look at ACP): haan aap kiya samjhay DR...
DR: nahi wo DAYA bhi aaya hua hay na...
ABHIJEET... DAYA... yahan...
DR: jee... wo abhi us bacchy say milnay gayey hain....
ABHIJEET... acha...
they all want to go towards the kid... DR ask ABHIJEET for a minute... all stopped...
DR: ABHIJEET, abhi DAYA nay ek aajeeb sii baat batai....
ACP: kiya!!
DR: Sir jub main nay DAYA say poocha kay wo aur ABHIJEET dono BHAI hain... magar dono
    aik doosray say buhat different hain... tou unhun nay ek ajeeb sii baat ki...
DR looks quite confuse...
ABHIJEET: kiya kaha DAYA nay??
DR(with confusing way): unhon nay kaha kay aap(pointing to ABHIJEET) nay unhein ADOPT kiya hay...
ABHIJEET cant control his laugh.... he is jus laughing loudly...
ABHIJEET: hahahah... sorry Sir... sorry...
ACP and VIVEK also smiling.... ACP to DR...
ACP: us nay aap say mazak kiya hoga...
DR(bit relax): haan... main bhi kahun... kay aisa kesay ho sakta hay...
they all came out.... and move towards... ABHIJEET still laughing..
they open the door and see DAYA and RAHUL play VIDEO GAME....
DAYA: arry boss... SIR aap log...
ABHIJEET: tum aayey kesay ho??
DAYA: TAXI say... kyun!!
ABHIJEET(whisper to DAYA): kuch bataya bacchy nay...
DAYA: Sir, kuch khas nahi... magar hum agar is bacchy ki tasweer news paper mein dein day tou...
ACP: DAYA wo sub hum ker chukay hain...
DAYA: tou ab...
ACP: yehi tou samajh nahi aa raha hay... kay kesay is kay ghar walun tak pohanchy... missing
     persons say bhi koi news nahi mili hay...
DAYA: Sir is bacchy ko hum lay jatay hain... shayed wahan ja ker isay kuch yaad aa jayey...
ACP: haan... lay chalo... wesay bhi ab tou ye theek hay...
they took the kid and move towards bearue... at bearue... SALUNKHY and TAREEKA waiting for ACP
SALUNKHY: ACP sahab... is aadmi aur is bacchy ka DNA aur blood group aik hee hay... aur sub say buri khaber
ACP(interrupts): SALUNKHY tum nay kabhi achi khaber dii hay... jub dena... buri khabar he dena...
SALUNKHY: ab aap logun ki qismut hee kharab hay tou main kiya karun... khair.. is aadmi ki maut HEART ATTACK say tou hui hay... magar is kay khoon mei mujhay behoshi ki dawa kafi
          miqdaar mein mili hay....
ACP(in anger): lo ab ye naya chakker shroo ho gaya... arry pehlay hee is bacchy ko koi lenay
               nahi aa raha... aur ab ye ...
SALUNKHY: isy behoshi ki dawa zyada day di gayii thi... dil ka mareez tha bechara... is liyey seh
          nahi paya...
ACP: matlub ye khoon hay...
SALUNKHY: ye tou aap janey... boss... mujhay tou jo pata chala tha... main nay bata diya...
SALUNKHY: DAYA bacchy... tum kesay ho???
DAYA: theek hun Sir...
ABHIJEET(remembering something): Sir us larki nay kaha tha kay hum is shehr mein nayey hain.... ho sakta hay... wo kahein aur say aa rahay hon... yaad hay na DAYA...
DAYA: haan Sir...
DAYA: VIVEK tum pooray india kay missing persons ka jo record hay... us mein check karo...
VIVEK(after 4 hours): Sir... pata chal gaya.... us car kay number say bhi tele ker liya hay....
                      is bacchy aur is kay papa PUNE say hain... PUNE kay buhat baray businessan
                      RAGHVEER SINGH ka ye beta hay... 18th december ko report likhwai gayii hay...
                      kisi SUSHANT SINGH nay report likhwai hay... ADDRESS aur PHONE NUMBER bhi hay...
ACP: unhein yahan bulao.... bearue mein...

at bearue...
DAYA: main tou pehlay hee ABHIJEET ko keh raha tha kay ye larki kuch theek nahi hay....
ABHIJEET: tumharay tou kya kehnay hain... larkiyun kay baaray mein...
ABHIJEET(turned towards ACP): Sir aap ko pata chala DAYA nay apna naam badal liya hay....
FREDDEI(in hurry): DAYA Sir.... aap nay apna naam badal liya... aur mujhay bataya bhi nahi...
DAYA saw ABHIJEET with confusion....
ACP look at DAYA: hain... DAYA...
DAYA: nahi Sir... pata nahi ABHIJEET kiya keh raha hay...
SALUNKHY come inside with saying: arry DAYA bacchay... ye main kiya sun raha hun.... tum nay apna naam badal liya.... kyun bhae??!!
DAYA is still in tense condition... he saw ABHIJEET... and ABHIJEET strangly smile...
ABHIJEET(with smile): Sir DAYA nay apna naam badal ker MR.HIMALIYA rakh liya hay...
everyone is looking at DAYA... he looks confuse but smile is there in his lips...
ACP(in smily voice): aur ye naam bhi kisi "larki" nay diya hoga... kyun DAYA!!
DAYA looks shy... he looked downward...
TAREEKA: wesay MR.HIMALIYA kyun???
ABHIJEET(with smile again): wo DAYA aaj kal LIFTS buhat ker raha hay na...
he came towards DAYA and whispering: LIFT karwa raha hy...
DAYA still look downward with smile and shinness... even did not say any word...
ABHIJEET: wesay DAYA... kaun hay wo "larki"???
ABHIJEET: DAYA... tum nay bataya nahi....
ACP: acha acha... chalo kaam ki taraf...
ACP: haan SACHIN... wo log aa gayey... SACHIN move his head in YES...

TRIO meet with SUSHANT who play with his nephew... and now start....
SUSHANT: Sir, meray bhai aur bhateja 15 december ko yahan MUMBAI ek shadi mein aayey thay... unhun nay phone per hum say kah kay wo nikal rahay hain... bus us kay baad... na un ka phone mila... aur na wo khud aayey...... hum nay her jagah pata karwaya aur phir POLICE mein report likhwai....
ACP: hum samajh saktay hain... shayed us larki nay in ko lootnay kay liyey lift li hogi...
SUSHANT: shayed Sir....
SUSHANT(again): Sir main apnay bhatejay ko lay ja sakta hun...
ACP: haan kyun nahi... magar khayal rakhyey ga....
RAHUL: byeee uncle....
ACP: FREDDIE us maroon qualis ka pata chala....
FREDDIE: jee Sir... number hay... MH 0961..
ACP: tum aur VIVEK RTO say ja ker pata karo...

in evening....
FREDDIE: Sir is car kay malik ka naam AJAY hay... aur us ki car 18 december ko chori hui thi
         MALAR say... chori ki report likhwai gayii hay...
ABHIJEET: Sir main abhi apnay INFORMER ko khabar karta hun... kay is car ka pata chalayey...

at night...
ABHIJEET: Sir, RAGGHO nay khaber di hay kay aaj ye car KHAR ki ek band factory mei dekhi gayii hay... CID team raid there... grab all culprits and sealed the place...

on confession table
         humari gang ka kaam logun ko lootna hay... MINNI (wo larki) sub say lift leti
         aur phir behoshi ki dawa pila deti aur hum log aasaani say apna kaam ker jaatay...
         magar us din shayed dawa zyada pila di thi... wo aadmi ceekhnay laga... aur achanak
         mar gaya... car bhi kharab ho gayii... phr achanak ye dono(ponting to DAYA n ABHIJEET)
         wahan aa gayey.... aur MINNI nay aik kahani bana di... magar sahab ye log MINI ko
         lay gayey... hum ko subah MINI nay phone kiya... aur kaha kay wo abhi akeli hay...
         hum aa ker usay lein jayein... magar sahab humaray pohanchty hee ye(pointing to DAYA)
         wahan aa gayey aur phir firing start ho gayii... MINI tou mar gayii... magar in sahab ki goli
         humaray boss ko lug gayii aur hum gussay mein in ko utha layey....

on their way to back... ABHIJEET told DAYA... the whole story...
ABHJEET: jub tum kidnap huay aur wo larki mar gayii... tou ACP sahab ko kuch shak hua... unhun
         nay RAGHVEER ki body POLICE MORGUE say FORENSIC LAB mangwa li... aur us car ko bhi GARAGE mei...
DAYA remember somthing... so his pinching start with ABHIJEET...
DAYA(in smily tone): boss...mujhay malum nahi tha.... kay tum mujh say itna dartay ho...
ABHIJEET: tum say nahi.... tumharai harkatun say...
DAYA(in bit aggression): magar yaar main ab theek hun...
ABHIJEET: haan... malum hay kitnay theek hain sahab...
ABHIJEET: wesay kiya main itni buri gadi chalata hun??
DAYA(quite naughty): nahi... bus 4th gear mein nahi chalatay ho na...

ABHIJEET start his packing... DAYA is quite and looks sad and gloomy...
ABHIJEET: DAYA... koi problem ho... mujhay foran PHONE karna... ok..
DAYA dont say a word...
ABHIJEET(look him): sun rahay ho na meri baat...
DAYA: ABHI.. walk ka mood hay..
ABHIJEET: is waqt...
DAYA: haan... mera tou hay and standup...
both start strolling....
ABHIJEET: DAYA tumhari ek cheez meray pass hay??
DAYA: kiya???
ABHIJEET give him his VALLET... DAYA take it and keep it in his jeans...
ABHIJEET: pehlay dekh tou lo... sub hay na...
DAYA look him angerly and open his vallet... ABHIJEET place that PIC in this way that both faces were shown  now... DAYA take out that PIC and place it as it was earlier...
ABHIJEET: aur ek aur cheez bhi hay... he opend his hand that FEMALE GOLD BRACELET place on his palm...
ABHIJEET: ye kiya hay??? aur kis kay liyey hay??
DAYA jus look silently... even not give reply to ABHIJEET...
ABHIJEET: acha... mut batao... rakh lo...
DAYA still silent and dont grab that BRACELET...
ABHIJEET: kiya PURVI... suddenly he remember something.... when both went to a jewellary shop where DAYA had given an order of GOLD jewellary...
ABHIJEET(in shocked tone): SONALI....
ABHIJEET: itnay saal baad bhi.... DAYA...
DAYA: tum rakh lo... TAREEKA ko day dena....
ABHIJEET jus saw him.... he looks so sad...
ABHIJEET: DAYA...  
DAYA hugged him and said...
DAYA: mut jao ABHI... main tum ko bilkul tang nahi karun ga.... pakka boss...
ABHIJEET: magar DAYA...
DAYA: main tumhara BHAI hon na...
ABHIJEET remember something and say
ABHIJEET(with smile): ADOPTED BHAI...
DAYA(with smile): haan...
ABHIJEET(with laugh): wesay tum ko is ADOPTED BHAI kehnay ka khayal kesay aaya... main nay tou pehli baar suna hay...
DAYA: aur aakri baar bhi...
DAYA: boss... mut jao... warna...
ABHIJEET: warna...
DAYA: warna main ye BRACELET(take BRACELET from ABHIJEET hand and then wink him)     MR.HIMALIYA kehnay wali MUNNI ko day dunga...
ABHIJEET: nahiiiiiiiiiiiii........
and there loud laugh filled the weather with joy and happiness....

ABHIJEET is still in confusion state... either to leave or not... would YOU give him any suggestion...    

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Very nice atempt Gadhadada!!!!ClapClap
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Good try.....Thumbs Up
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Nice attempt. Clap
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Such a cute story! Big smile
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another superb story..  I like the way u highlighted DUO relationship.. ClapClap

 

after reading this story it feels like DUO lived happily everafter ....  hmmmm...Day Dreaming

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