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Not A Fairytale SG&MN SS UPDTD pg 14

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Hey  Guys  here's  an  SS  it  has  3  parts!  and  this  SS  is  pretty  dukhi  type!  I  know!  not  expected  from  me  but  what  to  do? I'm  really  upset.  Reason- ek  ho  toh  bataaon!  

NOT A FAIRYTALE!

Gunjan  and  Nupur  ,  two  people  who  loved  their  life  a  lot  were  each  other's  support  system  because  life  had  given  no  one  else  who  would  support  them.

Nupur's  POV

"I  Love  you!   I  love  you  a  lot  Shilpa!"  I  woke  up ending  the  worst  dream  ever.  I  still  had  his dreams in  which  he  is  expressing  his  love  but  not for  me.
Why  can't  I  forget  him?  He , the  person  I  loved and  unfortunately  he  didn't  love  me  back  but  that doesn't  mean  I  blame  him  for  it.  I  don't  because I know  what  we  have  stored  for  us  is  only  what we get.
Today  afternoon  me  and  my  sister  ,  Gunjan  are  going  to Mumbai  for  his  and  Shilpa's  wedding.
Gunjan!  Oh!  I  still  had  to  convince  her  to  keep quiet there. She  just  hated  Shilpa  now.  They  were  best friends  until  she  and  Mayank  started  dating.

"GUNJAN!  uth  jaa" I  said  getting  inside  her  room  only  to  find  her  awake.

POV  ends

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Gunjan's  POV

I  was  ready  ,  just  had  to  make  my  hair.  We were going  to  Mumbai  again.  Di  will  have  to  face Mayank again.  I  really  pity  Mayank  ussne  meri  Di ki bajjaye uss  Shilpa  ko  chunna.
Mumbai!  iss  sheher  main  mere  kitne  raaz  chuppe hoye hain.
Aise  raaz  jo  kissi  ko  naa  hi  pattaa  chale  toh  ach  hoga.  Sabke  liye.
I  was  lost  in  my  thoughts  when  Di  came  in  thinking  I  was  still  asleep.
She  came  in  and  asked  me  weather  everything  was  packed  and  I  told  her  all  of  it  is  done.

"Acha  Di!  humme  Airport  pe  kaun  lene  aayega?"  I  asked hoping  that  either  of  the  Sharma  brothers  wouldn't  come.

"Humme  lene  Benji  arraaha  hai!"  said  Di  going  to  get  ready  after  which  we would  be  leaving  for  Mumbai. I  was  relieved. 

*In  the  plane*

I  sat  at  the  window  seat  while  Di  sat  next  to  me  and  next  to  her  was  our  neighbor  Kabir.  He  was  an  extremely  fun  loving  guy  and  my  best  friend  and  I  liked  him  because  of  two  reasons.
1. He  was  a  great  guy.
2. He  helped  Di  out  of  depression.

Almost  3  hours  later  we  reached  Mumbai  ,  Benji  came  to  receive and  went  to  our  place  to  get  dressed  for  the  wedding.
We  both  wore  lehengas  and  Kabir  wore  a  sherwaani  and  left  for  the  venue.

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Samrats's  POV

Aaj  bhai  ki  shaadi  hai  ,  Shilpa  se .  Shilpa  ne  zaroor  un  dono  ko  bulaaya  hoga . Woh  mujhse  bina  kuch  kahe  hi  challi  gayyi  thi. Nupur ,  bechaari  usse  kitna  sehna  pardta  tha  Bhai  aur  Shilpa  ko  saath  dekh  kar  par  Gunjan  ussne  mujhe  kyun  chorda.

(Gunjan  and Nupur  enter  with  Kabir.)

Aaj  bhi  woh  kitni  sundar  lagti  hai  ,  bilkul  pehle  ki  tarah.  No  change  at  all.

POV  ends

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Third  person's  POV

Shilpa  saw  them  and  walked  towards  them  and  said  
"I'm  so  glad  ki  tum  dono  aagayyi. " she  moved  forward  to  hug  Nupur  which  she  reciprocated  much  to  Gunjan's  annoyance.  Shilpa  then  moved  to  Gunjan  to  hug  her  while  she  stepped  back  and  softly  said  
"Tum  yeh  haq  bohot  pehle  kho  chukki  ho."
Shilpa  looked  at  Nupur  and  both  thought  its  better  to  let  her  be. And  they  walked  up  to  Mayank    

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Mayank's  POV

I'm  so  happy!  Today  I'll  be  with  my love  forever  and  all  my  friends  are  here.
Is  that  Nupur?  OMG!  It  is  her  and  Gunjan's  here  too.

I  saw  them  coming  towards  me  and  I  smiled  at  them  and  said
"Tum  dodno  toh  gayab  hi  hogayyi  thi!  haan  yaad  aayi  bhi  yaa  nahi!"
Nupur  nodded  and  said  "bohot!"  
Something  had  changed  in  Nupur ,  there  was  an  emptiness  in  her  eyes.  I  decided  I'll  think  about  it  later.

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Next  Part  (Precap)  : SaJan  confrontation  thanks  to  Kabir!  which  somebody  hears  and  MayUr  +  Shilpa  talk.  


thts  all!

Luv  Adya!

part 2 - pg 7
part 3 (last part) - pg 14






Edited by AttractiveAdya - 30 December 2010 at 1:11am

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Hmm.Interesting.

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Reservedd =))
 
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Hey Adz!
Sorry yaaaar itne late unres kar rahi hun!
Thanks for remindingg!
Well now coming to ur update!
It was reallyy nice..!
Im waiting for the next part mazaa ayega!
And all raaz and all haan!
3 updates main likh paogi?
Lets seee... Im waitingg to read sajan confrontation!
and ur obsessed wid shilpa and kabir naa! LOL!
But reallyy superbb SS!
Tera FF pe comment karna baaki hai! will read and comment!
Love Youuu!
Manjari!


Edited by SajanRox11 - 23 December 2010 at 10:19am

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 4:03am | IP Logged
niceeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! continuee sooonnn

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Another ss...
The storyline seems very intresting do cotninue soon. would love to read what happens next... But the start is gr8...
 
-Laiba

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 4:16am | IP Logged
superb yar realy sound interesting yar. Do cont asap ok.
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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Congo for this SS twinnie Hug
i love it so much!
The title is  really awesome and catchy!
So is it a sad story? Shocked
The whole plot is interesting and different! Geek
Aww i feel bad for Nupur!Unhappy So Mayank and Shilpa are gonna get marriedOuch
But Gunjan did she leave samrat bcoz of his brother's acts?Shocked 
And Kabir he seems really good.
I completely love Gunur's bonding here!
precap sounds interesting!
Thanks for the pm and cont soon Hug

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 4:26am | IP Logged
Yeh kya Adya???!! MayUr ko alag kar diya???!Cry
But amazingly written!! Continue soon! Thanks for the PM!

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