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Dosa's 1st FF.... Khabi na khabi - SEE P 24 (Page 7)

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 9:13am | IP Logged
awww very nice Thumbs Up good start.. liked it! 
Arushi is mentally retarded Shocked LOL LOL good one Wink
please continue and update soon! 

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Filza.T

awww very nice Thumbs Up good start.. liked it! 
Arushi is mentally retarded Shocked LOL LOL good one Wink
please continue and update soon! 

Thanks a lot yaar - glad u enjoyed it

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 10:22am | IP Logged
carisma...............that was a real surprise..........Tongue loved it............Thumbs Up
arushi is a mental patient........ROFLROFLROFL u rock dear.......Clap
this ime pratz sets eyes on krish,..............ladke ka naam janna pare ga...............LOL i liked ur concept..............eagerly waiting for ur next update..............Big smile

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 10:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mushirox

carisma...............that was a real surprise..........Tongue loved it............Thumbs Up
arushi is a mental patient........ROFLROFLROFL u rock dear.......Clap
this ime pratz sets eyes on krish,..............ladke ka naam janna pare ga...............LOL i liked ur concept..............eagerly waiting for ur next update..............Big smile
thankks alot yaar - gladd u liked it
 
 

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Second part updated
 

The chalk squeaked as it met the surface of the blackboard. Snapping and jolting  Praigya back to reality, She remembered where she was again, In the university History class. Focusing on anything else but the stranger was an impossibility today. She brushed her dark long hair out of her face and tied it up behind with a rubberband. Rolly, turned and looked over her shoulder with a questioning look which implied 'Are you okay?' Pratigya, Smiled at Rolly assuring her that she was fine but in reality she wasn't alright, There was something about the stranger which raised questions within her. She felt she'd seen him before, He didn't look ordinarily a street boy ' definitely not with designer shoes and leather jacket. He definitely wasn't common. He's eyes beamed and had bore into hers  almost as if he was touching her soul, and if that was a possibility he definitely had accomplished this. He looked at her in a way no other man ever had. Although Pratigya was a stunning young girl . She couldn't understand the emotion she felt that morning when his warm hand had touched hers, raising a million tingles within her. His brown eyes were mesmerizing; they seemed thirsty like he was drinking in her beauty but very purely. What had been confusing was that when he turned away, he remained turned.

The bell rang again, for the last time.  "How's Arushi?" Rolly asked a distant Pratigya, who may have been there within  close physical proximity but certainly not in mind. "Ummm  She's fine, Papa's thinking of changing her school to something close-". She didn't finish and Rolly examined her look and followed her gaze. Pratigya was silent like a stone sculpture fixated in one place and then she blinked. "He's there look" she tugged at Rolly. "Whose where?"  But Pratigya didn't and answer and started walking ahead as though she was in a trance and an unseen force was calling for her. Rolly stepped up to keep pace. They reached the gates and Pratigya's pretty face showed sadness and disappointment and those pretty big dark eyes looked like they just lost their sparkle.  Rolly turned her over in a ninety degrees turn. "What's wrong with you? What's on your mind, I'm getting a little bit worried about the mental state of affairs of your mind". Pratigya looked at Rolly coming out of her trance. "Nothing just thought I saw someone, that's all and anyway let's get home the grey clouds are fully emerged and it'll start raining soon". The girls huddled together and made their way home. And as soon as it was said it did start raining, like the heavens had opened.

3rd installment page 9


Edited by carisma2 - 23 December 2010 at 3:34pm

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 10:52am | IP Logged
updat thora lamba karo Cry

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by serialmaniac

updat thora lamba karo Cry
sorry sweets - i will nex time, it's just time wise. I was waiting for pratigya download so thought i'll do a bit. buh i'll do it longer next time

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 11:54am | IP Logged
awesome update carisma........ClapClap
its love at first sight for pratz now..........LOL im lovin it.........Big smile

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