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Dosa's 1st FF.... Khabi na khabi - SEE P 24 (Page 12)

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by telstra

Good work charisma dearClapStar u r multitalented no two opinion on thatSmile seema you are getting many suggestion thease days on how to write ffWink i think its not everyone cup of tea btw u r doing a brilliant job and thanks for bringing soo much hapiness in our lives Hug love you GOD bless you AMEN
Thanks a lot dear - really appreciate it. Quite enjoy writting it.
 
 

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RoKa PraNeev

Prt1:
Just finished reading Prt 1...wahhhhhhhh...kya story hai dii...
i like the story....nice begining....it is opposite to the first promo of pratigya ryt...like...in d real promo its krishna who says "iss ladki ka naam to pata lagna hi hoga",....n here its pratz....i liked it!!
 
n the best part of ur story is arushi...hhahaha...18 yr old...but brain is only of an 8yr old child....wowwwwwww...i just lubbbbbbbbd it!!!!we can just take revenge n show our anger thru dez things only naa....ghehheheh
 
Heading 2wrds next part!
 
Ncehu
Thanks nechu - i fink u'll enjoy the next 2 part aswell - i hope.
 

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Part2:
 
Wowwwwwww...Love At First Sight!!!This is what happened wid pratigya here....ryt???she is mersmerised by my jaaaaaaaaan...ahem ahem..i mean if dat stranger is krishna...it shud be krishna orelse rats hsudnt have felt like dis....i know dii..now u wud be thinking dat have i gone mad???hahah...i'm only asking the questions n i'm only answering dem...ehhehehe...well...who wouldn't be mersmerised by him????
I lubd da way how u expressed pratigya's feelings for that stranger!!
 
but i have one coplaint dii...the parts r very short...i dnt maybe i'm feeling dat the parts r short...bcoz i'm used to reading longgg lonnnng FF's by shumi dii...n others in Kasturi Forum!!TongueClap
 
heading for next part!
 
Nechu


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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 5:21am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by RoKa PraNeev

Part2:
 
Wowwwwwww...Love At First Sight!!!This is what happened wid pratigya here....ryt???she is mersmerised by my jaaaaaaaaan...ahem ahem..i mean if dat stranger is krishna...it shud be krishna orelse rats hsudnt have felt like dis....i know dii..now u wud be thinking dat have i gone mad???hahah...i'm only asking the questions n i'm only answering dem...ehhehehe...well...who wouldn't be mersmerised by him????
I lubd da way how u expressed pratigya's feelings for that stranger!!
 
but i have one coplaint dii...the parts r very short...i dnt maybe i'm feeling dat the parts r short...bcoz i'm used to reading longgg lonnnng FF's by shumi dii...n others in Kasturi Forum!!TongueClap
 
heading for next part!
 
Nechu
yes the 2nd part was a little short. I get to a mystery point - and then like to leave it at that to keep you guys guessing. LOL buh yeh will try do longer ones  - it's just on time, uh will deffo do longer. 3rd part is a lil longer. Big smile

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Part3:
 
woaaaaaaaaaaaaoooaaaaaaaaaaah....nychhhhhhhhhhhh parttt...now wat has krishu to do wid angad....dreaming abt angad...??is angad his bro who has died or may be his best friend who had died???just my thoughts!!
 
wowwwwwwww...just lubd da way how kriya r feeling for each other...n yes....dey r gonna meet again...em waitin for dat1!!
 
Pls uodate the next part soon dii!!
 
Nechu

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RoKa PraNeev

Part3:
 
woaaaaaaaaaaaaoooaaaaaaaaaaah....nychhhhhhhhhhhh parttt...now wat has krishu to do wid angad....dreaming abt angad...??is angad his bro who has died or may be his best friend who had died???just my thoughts!!
 
wowwwwwwww...just lubd da way how kriya r feeling for each other...n yes....dey r gonna meet again...em waitin for dat1!!
 
Pls uodate the next part soon dii!!
 
Nechu
Thanks a lot - Angaad - i haven't decided concretely wot am gonna do wid him for sure - but i have diff ideas. i would like to knw from the readers - do they wanna see this ff as supernatural ff or just normal.

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 5:40am | IP Logged
itni jaldi update kardiya..........good .let me read then i'll commentt

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 5:49am | IP Logged
hi surbhiiiiiiiiiii....ohh fate do we have yaar...wen u cum online...it will be time for me to go offline...erghhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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