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Dosa's 1st FF.... Khabi na khabi - SEE P 24 (Page 11)

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by premprem1

very nice.. looking forward to da nxt part!! :P:P
Thanks a lot Star
 

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ramanbabitha

Carsma, watng for them to meet up agan...luved t dear...Hug
Glad u liked it
 

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arine_123

The last two parts were very well written  Clap K n P both are feeling something for each other Tongue Can't wait for their 2nd meeting . Continue soon.
Glad u enjoyed it.
 
 
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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 3:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pragati.tankha

amasing updates carisma...loved both of the updates.ClapClap...........now kriya started thinking about each other i wish this chd have happned in d show also...............will b waiting how krishan tries to find about ehr................Embarrassed
Cool - Glad you  enjoyed it. I personally would like to take this story more towards a supernatural an paranormal concept. but it just depends on the readers - so at the moment i'm keeping my options open.
 

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zash_LubUKriYa

wowwwwww!!!!!
diiiiiii........
superb!!!!!i jz lub ur handling of language....exactly speaking,playing with wordsClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
Arushi wetted her bed.....ROFLROFLROFLROFL....thank u sooooo much for that.....i jz lub that...ROFL
so,KriYa r attracted towards each other......mmmm...lets see wat happens next....plzzzz update soon di.....its sooooo interesting
lub
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Thanks Azi,
As soon as I get time I will do - am quite enjoying this myself.
 
 
 

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhakarn

superb writing dear....................keep up the brilliance....................Star
Thanks a lot dhakarn - you too.
 
 
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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Good work charisma dearClapStar u r multitalented no two opinion on thatSmile seema you are getting many suggestion thease days on how to write ffWink i think its not everyone cup of tea btw u r doing a brilliant job and thanks for bringing soo much hapiness in our lives Hug love you GOD bless you AMEN

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Prt1:
Just finished reading Prt 1...wahhhhhhhh...kya story hai dii...
i like the story....nice begining....it is opposite to the first promo of pratigya ryt...like...in d real promo its krishna who says "iss ladki ka naam to pata lagna hi hoga",....n here its pratz....i liked it!!
 
n the best part of ur story is arushi...hhahaha...18 yr old...but brain is only of an 8yr old child....wowwwwwww...i just lubbbbbbbbd it!!!!we can just take revenge n show our anger thru dez things only naa....ghehheheh
 
Heading 2wrds next part!
 
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