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FF //TUJHE ME PYAR KARUN//PAR10//PAGE 33// (Page 29)

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged

Very good.. Sorry for not writing earlier.. I come home last night so I sat now and read all your parts :D

Very good :) Continue soon ;)

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cyum321

it was exciting twist i must say Clap
 
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 4:52am | IP Logged
i loved ur ff...
plzzz PM me...

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged
wow love u already exited 4 next one thanks

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Maan  waiting for Geet.......ummmm.......  i  am also waiting  

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 6:21am | IP Logged
very  nice.

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 4:46am | IP Logged

awesome updates.......

loved dis FF............n d twist was so good........
 
i hv sended u buddy's  request...........pls pm me also

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 9:28am | IP Logged
note: sorry for late uptades but m stiil buzy in those days hope u guyz understood me
and thanx for the support,lovely comments, anf like my ff
love u guyzEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
part 9
 
 
sun is shinnig birds are singing
Geet open her eyes with a big smile and come to her world from dream world, she get up from the bed and go to shower
she come out from the room. Her mom making abreak fast and grand father is busy in news paper
 
good moarning geet said wid huuged and kiss on his head
 
good moarning geet grand paa said
 
raat ko function kaisa guzra enjoy ki hamari beti negrand paa asked
 
haan boht boht boht geet reply
 
gud first time tm ne koi function itna enjoy kia hoga bus hamesha aisi khush raho jahan bhi raho grand paa said
 
 
jahan ka kia matlb grand paa me hamesha aap k paas he rahon gi geet said wid love her grand paa
 
kuen susral nahi jana kia mom said wid smile
 
mom aap phr se meri shaadi ki baat leker bhet gain geet said wid sadly
 
beta ek na ek din tumhe jana hai is gher se bus to jahan rahe khush rahe mom said
 
mom.. geet said to her mom wid tear the tear also come in her mom eyes
 
ok chalo break fast ker lo
 
subha sawere rula dia aap dono.. geet said with love
 
 
 
wese mom aap k baare me anvesha ki dadi poch rahi thi geet said to her mom
 
mere baare mein moom said wid surprise
 
haan geet said
 
phir  mom look wid confusion
 
kia aap ka name pocha me ne bata dia phir or kch nahi poccha geet said
 
ok mom said
 
they three person doing there break fast in freindly enviroment. then some one is belling on the door. geet come to see on the door.she opened the door. and surprise to see meera savitri devi and Maan
 
aap log geet said wid happliy and shocked
 
haan kia hum nahi asakte meera hugged wid geet love 
 
kuen nahi hamari khushi hai k aap log aayen hai aaye na geet said to them and look at maan wid smile and they all come in the house
 
namste savitri devi said to mr.chopra
 
namaste mr chopra said and shocked to see her
 
savitri aunty aap log smriti geet mom is really shocked and happy tears come in her eyes
 
bus bus beta kaisi ho savitri devi hugged her wid love
 
me theek hn aap log kahan chale gaye the geet mom asked
 
boht lambi kahani hai betasavitri devi reply
 
ye ?? geet mom look at meera
 
ye meera hai dev ki bivi or ye Maan hai savitri devi intro duce them
 
arre in se to hum log mil chuke hain kuen Maan beta grand paa  look at maan wid smile
 
aahaan maan come from his thoughts he does not under stand the condition and surprise happy to sse that they are frend of geet family
he look at geet. geet is looking very nice in frok. he look at geet face
Geet is also surprise and thinking some thing.Maan come from geet geet does not noticed
 
kia sooch rahi ho maan asked
 
kch nahi geet replied
 
i hope tum bhi wohi soch rahi ho jo me soocha raha hn maan asked
 
haan kuen k aisi condition me her insaan aik jaisa soochta hai geet reply
 
wese tumhe khushi nahi huwi maan askd
 
boht khushi huwi ye jaan ker k hum logo ka koi or bhi hai geet said wid happily
 
wese ek baat pocho maan said
 
haan  geet said
 
tumhari zindagi me koi hai maan asked
 
mtlb geet asked
 
mtlb ye k jis k sath tum saari zindagi guzarna chahti ho
 
bolo naa maan said
 
kue geet asked
 
kuen k me chahta hn k me aapne dil ki baat kehne se pehle tumhare dil ki baat jaan lon maan said
 
nahi geet said
 
jhoot maan said
 
he come very closed to geet and asked with hushed voice . geet is afraid and look at her mom but they all talking with each other wid happily
 
maan choro geet said
 
kue maan asked
 
sub yahi pe hain kia sooche gain geet said wid confusion
 
soochne do maan said
 
pls maan geet look at in maan eyes but she dnt look at down her eyes her heart beat is very fast
 
theak but ek baat tum se kehna chahta hn maan said to geet
 
kiaa geet asked
 
kiaa tum mjh se pyar kerti ho maan asked
 
mtlb geet asked
 
mtlb ye geet handa k maan tum se pyar kerta hai itna k wo khud he nahi janta
kub kaise bus pyar ho gaya maan said to geet
 
 
geet look at maan wid confision and blushed her heart beats is very fast
 
she want to ran away maan free her and catched her hand
 
akhri baat
 
mjhe tumhare jawb k intizaar rahe ga aaj shaam shaadi mein tum aao gi maan asked wid smile
 
hmm geet replied with blushed an very slow
 
he is very happy geet ran away to her room and her heart beat is normal she is very happy and smile
 
maan come from dadi and asked to go home
 
acha ji chalte hain
 
aap log aaj shaam ko arahe hain na dadi asked
 
ji ab to aana hi pare ga geet mom said wid happily
 
ok geet beti kahan hai dadi asked
 
pata nahi geet mom replie

koi baat zaror ayeei gaa geet ka aana to boht zarori hai
 
maan beta ashirvaat lo dadi said to maan
 
are beta sada khush raho geet mom give him many pray
 
ok bye they all said to each other
 
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precape: maan and geet engagment anvesha wedding
 
 
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and thnx 4 support
love milli

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