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FF //TUJHE ME PYAR KARUN//PAR10//PAGE 33// (Page 25)

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 7:15pm | IP Logged
awesome update.... n precap is interesting....
Continue sooon

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
Maan waiting for Geet.Smile Huuuun

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged
wow.......awesome updateThumbs Up.........plz update soon....plz plzSmile
and thanks for the pm dear...Big smile

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Awesome update.. Loved it.. Twist.. Omg.. Plish dunn scare me..

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Hi..... I just came across........ I really loved it........ awesome.

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 3:40am | IP Logged
awesome yaar ,great update

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Lovely update

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 9:54am | IP Logged
part 8
 
 
ohoo to yeh baat hai haan chupe rustam nikle tum bhi yaar armaan said wid smile
 
kiaa knsi baat maan said
 
to us larki ka intizaar horaha tha or jaise he wo darwaze se enter huwi Maan ji k honto per muskrahat aai armmaaan said
 
nahi to me geet k lie to nahi muskra rha tha maan replie quickly
 
ohoo to us ka name geet hai nice name Armaan said wid noughty
 
Armaan bus boht hogaya maan said wid anger
 
ok baba wese deedee or jeejo kahan hai Armaan asked
 
pata nahi maan replie
 
ok yaar apna mud theak ker wo dakh larke wale aagaye  armaan changed the topic
 
ok to jaa me aata hn Maan said wid smile
 
armaan go from here. Maan look arround him to find Geet and then he found her and move towords her
 
hy maan said to geet
 
hy geet said
 
h r u maan asked
 
me theak hn geet replied
 
maan look at her with noughty and smile with Geet condition coz he know tht geet is really confused.he feel that geet is thinking something
 
ahmm ahmmm r u ok maan asked
 
aha haan me theek hn me abhi aati hn ok Geet said
 
per meri baat to sunu Maan said
 
plzz
geet walk out from here and go towords pinky and parrie she look at maan and maan is smiled geet also smile for her.then nt is come
hy nt said
 
hy hr u     parrie asked wid happily
 
me f9 ho s she NT reple and asked about geet
 
oh she s geet and pinky parrie introduce them
 
hyy\ NT said to them
 
hyy they said to NT
 
then meera is comes and said to geet that savitri devi called her they knocked the door
 
aajao dadi said
 
dadi geet meera said to dadi
 
kaisi ho beta dadi asked with lovely
 
me thaek hn
aap kaisi hai geet reply her and asked
 
me bhi theak hn boh achi lag rahi ho dadi reply
 
thanks geet blushed
 
geet beta aap ki mom kia kia name hai dadi asked
 
ji smriti handa geet replied
 
smriti hanada ok tum jao dadi said to geet
 
ji geet said
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geet walking in her thoughs and sudden her head hit with maan shoulder
 
aaah geet shout slowly
 
oh i m really sorry maan said
 
nai its ok shayed mera he dihaan nahi tha geet said
 
wese kia boht sakht laga maan asked
 
nahi geet replie
 
she look at his and doesnot move her eyes from his face and think somthing
Maan notice her reaction and smile
 
ahmm ahmmm geet maan called her
 
haan  geet said
kia huwa aise kue dakh rahi ho nazer lagao gi kia maan asked wid noughty
 
nahi to geet shamed on herself
 
nahi to kia maan look at her
 
me to bus aise geet replied
 
maan push geet towords him and closed her he catched geet from her waist and look at her eyes and asked again
 
kia huwa geet maan asked
 
wo me geet is confused
 
wo kiaa maan again asked
 
geet heart beat very fast and she also listen MAAN heart beat she close her eyes she want to free her self but she failed becose maan donot free her and look at her eyes
Geet close her eyes then she feel Maan free her but she do not open her eyes
 
geet geet pinky called geet
 
she open her eyes and look at pinky she called her
 
haan geet saw arround her and said to pinky
 
to theak hai pinky ask
 
haan geet said wid confussion
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acha chalo na neeche itna maza hai aao pinky said
 
haan chaloo they come the sangeet portion every one is really happy and enjoy
Geet look arroun her self and found Maan she hear Maan voice and foolow the voice she saw Maan is wid Armaan and loughing She also smile .
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Dadi kia aap janti hain geet ko meera asked
 
haan dadi replie
 
dadi kon hai geet meera again asked
 
Mr.chopra ki nawasi Maan and Dev ke dada ji ka dost dadi reply
 
kia ye to such me achi khaber hai meera is really happy
 
haan meera beta or is se bhi achi khaber hai dadi again said to meera
 
kia meera asked
 
Geet Maan ki bachpan ki mangater hai in duno ka rishta bachpan me hi tay huwa tha. tabhi me ne aaj tak Maan ki shaadi nahi ki dadi said wid smile
 
kiaa meera shocked
 
haan meera hum log canada shift ho gaye the jub aaye to Mr.chopra ki family kaihin or chali gayi thi dadi tell meera
 
oh tha gr8 news
 
phr to hume Geet k gher jaana chahie Meera asked happily
 
Haan hum kal he chale gen bus dihaan rahe ye baat hamare darmiyaan rahe ok Dadi said to meera
 
ji dadi aap befiker ho jaayen meera said and they came out from room
 
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precape;
 
Maan said to geet i love u
 
savitri  devi went to Geet house
 
  if u like plz click the like button
 
pls do lovely commentsEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
love millli


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