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Maaneet FF~ THE PROMISE~* ~Part 18 pg 140~25/5/12 (Page 73)

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nice promo.. continue soon

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waiting for ur update 

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I have read ur updates in one go .
Lovely concept. Clap
Please add me to ur PM list.

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nice ff,continue soon.

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waitingggggggggggggg  and  a  long  long  long  update 
please
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Part 11:

 

Geet was shifted to a new ward. Dadi brought sindoor Prasad from the temple and gently applied on her forehead.

 

Dadi sat next to her while maan went to change as dadi insisted geet was sleeping all the while Dadima stayed.

 

Maan returned from home with Nisha as doctor's said geet wud recover fully when she finds her happiness around her maan straight away went home to take Misha with him to geet who was with pinky Yash & Meera.

 

Misha ran to geet and saw her sleeping the young kid do not want to disturb her just kissed her cheeks and sat cuddled next to her on the bed geet woke up to the see  her love of life Misha and had a bright smile playing on her lips.

 

Geet hugged her close to her heart and kissed her. Tears of happiness flooded in her heart & filled her mind with the same.

 

She tried to raise her self she tripped Dadima went outside due to some important paper work for geet.

 

Maan came in time and held her and helped her in semi-setting position placing a pillow behind nurse came to give sponge bath to Geet.

 

Geet was feeling uncomfortable with Maan around as she thot tat Maan mite feel not so comfy but he wud not leave Geet's side as he has decided not to hide his feelings anymore as he has got another chance as he only asked for.

 

He told the nurse that he'll take care of his wife from there on and to leave that he'll help in wiping her Geet who slowly started falling in love with Maan in due course blushed terribly at the thot of he himself helping her eyes popped out and jaws dropped open.

 

Maan winked at Geet seeing her blush Maan was sorry for keeping away from her love since long time as he feared tat god will not be with him this time also but HE has returned her to him and he is not going to leave any stone unturned in expressing his love for her and Misha.

 

Maan helped her with the sponge bath and fed her supper and meds.

 

Maan sat on the couch while she slipped into a deep sleep coz of the meds she was taking.

 

He closed his eyes and his thots went back to the day she was in his arms the first time, and Yash hugging her.

 

PAST

 

Maan was wondering who she was as she exactly looked like his Nisha. H is thots where only of Geet, Geet and only Geet.

 

He wanted to find abt her. He wanted to call her back and ask her who she was and her full details but a meeting held him up as his Sasha has arranged it before flying to London he went to attend the meeting .

 

For his surprise Geet and Yash where also present there to give their cents on the meeting.

 

Maan was little more surprised tat Adi and Sasha has explained the both abt the clients details project they handled etc before hand itself and the presentation they where abt to give was Geet and Yash's preparation'

 

Maan was impressed by both hard work on their first project and as said FIRST IMPRESSION is the best IMPRESSION.

 

Maan appreciated them. Still he wanted to knw tat is their any relationship btwn Nisha and Geet and first of all wanted to knw tat whtr she knw Nisha who was her exact look alike.

 

But he was again held up in vdo conference with his clients by this the thot of knwing abt her slipped to the back of his mind and held up ot his works and clients'

 

 A Month passed Geet and Yash where a real help to Maan in managing the clients and projects in his absence and became a trust worthy employee in a month creating a record in KC.

 

Yash that week was Nisha's first year death anniversary and Geet was in low mood as of Maan

 

Maan came to office to see Geet all lost in her own world and sad' for some reason again Maan cudn't see tears in her eyes and tat Yash who just came into her cabin consoling her Geet crying her heart out on his shoulder pained Maan.

 

Maan wanted to be the person whom she wud convey her sorrows but here there was some one else lending his shoulders to her'at that time Yash's phone rang and he imdlty left for Maan's cabin

 

Yash came to Maan and asked him a day off coz that his wife wanted to take her to hospital as she was not feeling well..

 

Now tat word hit Maan's thotful mind and felt happy and hearing Yash ws already married and granted him leave..

 

Maan again saw Geet she was still lost'

 

He badly wanted to hug her( where did he get this tot from OMGShocked ) and console her and he started to leave for her cabin when his phone rang and he answered the call'

 

Dadima was on the other line and she said that she'll come to office for buying certain things for the bharsi. In 2hrs time'

 

He assured dadi that he'll accompany her'and asked abt Geet and his call got cancelled while she asked her due to poor reception.

 

Maan went into Geet's cabin and asked wat was bothering her most tat she looks all lost and Geet let her heart out that she is missing her family very much and that the next day is her di's bharsi

 

Maan was really hurt on hearing that she was missing her family and to top it it was her di's bharsi the next day as Nisha broke his heart for her.

 

Maan wanted to cheer Geet so he thot for a while and took her the Garden and after an hour and when she entered the park she was showered with rose petals 

and this certainly made a way for smile in her face... Maan rested his hand in a consoling way  and said in his mind tat he is and will always be with her (Maan just lost it i think..oye she is SIL dnt forget it...OH NO he doesn't knw tat yet rite..)

she heard a lite music and later and heart warming song Maan started to sing for her'

 


 

guys me bad with translations but plz listen to the song its in tamil but u'll love it'im giving the translations also

 

Lelakku Lelakku Lela,Idhu Latest Thattuvam Thozha 

("                          ") this is latest philosophy frnds


Nee Kettukko Kaathula Coolaa,Adi Mela Mela

U hear it in cool ways with bands of drums

 
Aey Dandakku Dandakku Danda,Uchi Vaanathil Virisal Undaa 

("                                     ") is there any crack line in the clouds..

Veesum Kaathukku Varuttham Undaa,Namma Manasil Yendaa! 

Is there any sadness in the breezes that is blowing then y do v have in our hearts'

Kavalai Yaarukku Illa,Atha Kadanthu Pokanum Mella, 

Who doesn't have sadness we sud only smile at it slowly


Rekkaiya Virichi Sella Oru Vaanamaa Illa! 

Isn't there a open cloud for us to fly with wings

..Baby Baby,Oh My Baby, 
Dont You Worry,Well Make Merry! 
..Baby Baby,Oh My Baby, 
Dont You Worry,Well Make Merry! 


Lelakku Lelakku Lela,Idhu Latest Thattuvam Thozha 

("                          ") this is latest philosophy frnds



Nee Kettukko Kaathula Coolaa,Adi Mela Mela 
U hear it in cool ways with bands of drums


Vennila Onney Onnu,Suriyanum Onney Onnu, 

The Moon is the one as the Sun is also..


Vazhkayum Onney Onnu,Vazhnthu Paarammaa 

Life is also one just live and see dear


Poovendraal Vaasam Edu,Theeyendraal Theepam Edu, 

Take the fragrance from the flowers and diya's from fire


Ethilumey Nanmai Undu,Vazhnthu Paaramma 

Uses are there in every thing just live and see dear

Ada Kodai Oru Kaalam,Kulir Mazhai Oru Kaalam, 

Summer season is once and winter rainy & winter season is once

Ithu Kaalam Tharum Gnyanam... 

This is the knwldge that time taught us'


Ada Inbam Oru Paadam, Varum Thunbam Oru Paadam, 

Happiness is a lesson and like wise worries is also a lesson


Ethai Yetrukondu Ponaal Manam Yeppothum Paadum! 

If we agree on this and live our heart will always sing


Manasaatchi Yenbathu Aatchi Seykayil Veezhchi Illayamma 

wen soul rules there is no downfall in our life dear'


....Baby Baby........................... 


Lelakku Lelakku Lela,Idhu Latest Thattuvam Thozha 

("                          ") this is latest philosophy frnds

 

Nee Kettukko Kaathula Coolaa,Adi Mela Mela

U hear it in cool ways with bands of drums

 

Paadivaa Raagam Varum,Odi Vaa Vegam Varum 

Try and sing songs and lyrics will come , run and see the spee will come'


Neendhi Vaa Karayum Varum,Ellaam Nammodu 

Swim and come the shores will come with us..

 


GEET SINGS: 

Aaruthal Neeyum Solla,Maarinen Mella Mella 

The consolance wic u gave made me come out of ma revive


Aanandha Kanneer Mattum Yendhan Kannodu 

Happy tears are the one in my eyes now'.

MAAN SINGS:

Varum Sogam Oru Megam Adhu Sollaamaley Pogum 

Sadness are like clouds wic goes without telling

Yendrum Santhosham Thaan Vaanam. 

Always happiness is the sky


Varum Kaalam Neram Maarum,Puthu Thendral Vandhu Serum, 

The future will change with new fragrance in the breeze wic will join us


Sila Kaayangalum Aarum, Manam Unnodu Aadum 

Some wounds will also  heal while ur heart dance with u


Indha Vellai Manasum,Pillai Vayasum Kollai Inbamadi 
the whiteness purity of heart and childish age is the best

..Baby Baby.. 


Lelakku Lelakku Lela,Idhu Latest Thattuvam Thozha 
("                          ") this is latest philosophy frnds


Nee Kettukko Kaathula Coolaa,Adi Mela Mela 
U hear it in cool ways with bands of drums

 
Aey Dandakku Dandakku Danda,Uchi Vaanathil Virisal Undaa

("                                     ") is there any crack line in the clouds..
 
Veesum Kaathukku Varuttham Undaa,Namma Manasil Yendaa! 
Is there any sadness in the breezes that is blowing then y do v have in our hearts

 

Kavalai Yaarukku Illa,Atha Kadanthu Pokanum Mella, 
Who doesn't have sadness we sud only smile at it slowly

 

Rekkaiya Virichi Sella Oru Vaanamaa Illa! 
Isn't there a open cloud for us to fly with wings

..Baby Baby.....(2)

 

 

While singing dadi comes there and shouts wat is happening actually teasing Maaneet '

Dadi was so happy to see them enjoy and console each other

 

She asks them to follow her to KM and they reach KM..Geet see's Nisha's photo and runs to it and hugs it and cries'Dadi rushes to her and Geet hugs her and cries saying

 

DADI DI

 

Maan enters and see's that Geet has mentioned Nisha as her di

 

Misha comes running to Geet and hugs her

 

 

 precap nothing for now...

 

 

 

 

       



Edited by aarthirajendran - 10 April 2011 at 1:38pm

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